Miguel Sanchez Odium RP- "Envy"

[tobeornottobe]

You see the same man in the mirror every day. You look at him and not realize the impact he made and the quest he is set out on. You look at him and think about your wife and children. Do they really love him that much? Do they love him more then they love me? There is a word for that.



ENVY



Your 8 year old son, wants to become a pro wrestler instead of a lawyer. You object. Not because you care about him getting hurt. Because you don't want him to follow in my footsteps. The footsteps of his idol. There is a word for that.


ENVY



You have a hard time giving your wife the satisfaction that she deserves. She leaves you in an empty bed with nothing but a pillow to cuddle while she escapes your prison. You treat her like **** the whole marriage, and now you want her back. Not because she is your trophy, but because she is with me when she drives away into the night. There is a word for that.



ENVY



You realize then, that I am better than you. You can't match up to me. I have the money, your wife and your child. You wish you had everything I have. You want to take it all away. You want to acquire all my belongings and see me in the spam and dirt on the streets quivering in the cold instead of being in a warm mansion. But you just can't do that. You lost everything and you want it back from me you envious son of a bitch. There is a word for all of that. It's called.....



ENVY


- Miguel Sanchez, "The Object of Envy"



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[M]: Against Justin Tyme. Allison, Do you see what has been happening? I'm just the average day go to guy! Everybody wants me. But they can't have me. Ill give Kyzer and Drakz their match with Tyme at Odium. It shouldn't be too hard.

: Tyme won't be too easy. Trust me I know.

[M]: You know what? Oh....I get it

: Get what?

[M]: Look at yourself. You sleep with every guy in the locker room. You must know something.

: What?

[M]: Listen. That is what I pay you for. To be my goddamn sidekick and find out some dirt. Cough it up.

: What are you talking about, Miguel?

[M]: Look at you. You have slut written all over your face. I know you made y y with Tyme already. Tell me what you know. NOW.

: YOU MIGUEL!

[M]: YOU ALREADY DID!


Allison turns away from Miguel in disgust. She stomps her way to the short distance across the office and slams the door in anger. Miguel just looks with a smirk on his face and goes behind his desk to sit in his chair. The leather squeaks as he sits. He leans back and puts hit feet on the maroon table top. He just sits there and thinks.


[Thoughts]


I know she knows something. I just do. Tyme won't be much of a problem. Look at me compared to him. Really. He has money and he's inferior to me. That's it. Me though. People want to be like me. People want to be me! People look at me and say, "Damn...I bet god loves him more than us...Look at what he has. The women, the money and all the glory". Children want to grow up and follow me. That is the beauty of it.


Wives want to leave their husbands. Girlfriends want to leave their boyfriends. Children want to disown their parents. You know what they all want? To have me. They can't though. I'm just untouchable. JT will find that out soon enough. He will find out why I am the object of affection and envy. Envy. I love that word.



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Envy:


A feeling of discontent or covetousness with regard to another's advantages, success, possessions, etc.

An object of envious feeling: Her intelligence made her the envy of her classmates.

Obsolete. ill will.



{verb}

To regard with envy; be envious of: He envies her the position she has achieved in her profession.



{verb}

Obsolete. to be affected with envy.




{Synonyms}

Enviousness. Envy and jealousy are very close in meaning. Envy denotes a longing to possess something awarded to or achieved by another: to feel envy when a friend inherits a fortune. Jealousy, on the other hand, denotes a feeling of resentment that another has gained something that one more rightfully deserves: to feel jealousy when a coworker receives a promotion. Jealousy also refers to anguish caused by fear of unfaithfulness. Resent. Envy, begrudge, covet refer to one's attitude toward the possessions or attainments of others. To envy is to feel resentful and unhappy because someone else possesses, or has achieved, what one wishes oneself to possess, or to have achieved: to envy the wealthy, a woman's beauty, an honest man's reputation. To begrudge is to be unwilling that another should have the possessions, honors, or credit that person deserves: to begrudge a man a reward for heroism. To covet is to long jealously to possess what someone else possesses.


[Thoughts]

What envy means to me, is that it is the feeling of somebody wanting more in life. Wanting to have greatness. Wanting to have fame, money and women. Basically everything I have and more. They want to keep the person that will be taking their spouses under the covers and taking their kids under his wing. Its like cancer. They can suppress it, but they can't stop it. I am that envy. I am the green that flows in their body. They hate me more than anything else in the world. And I love every minute. Seeing their lives flush down the toilet makes it all worth it. I make you want to have that same feeling that when you come home from a long day of work, your wife and children will be standing in the doorway with arms wide open. Sad thing though. This is the real world. What you will be doing is sleeping in your trunk with a photo of them in your hand, most likely crying the night away. Is it my fault that they want something better? No. God gave us free will. So who is the one to blame here? Thats right. Look in the mirror and find out who. You will be sitting in nothing just like Justin Tyme after odium. You would want to get back at me just like he will. You will want to get your family back from me and take every thing you damn want from me as well. But it just won't happen. There is a word for that. That word is called.....


ENVY



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Fin


EDIT: I credit Mr. Kyzer's Superbrawl RPs for giving me such inspiration to do this. Thankyou and enjoy. ;D

[cureforthesickness]

reminds me a lot of Kyzer..

[CBT]

This rp was very impressive, I didn't know you had it in you. To bad this wasn't done for SB.
I love your intro, it felt like it was gonna lose the flow, but it kept me interested. You've had good speech, sometimes really good, sometimes lacking. But your entry and defining Envy were unique to what I've seen from you. This had some real committment put into it.
Best Miguel Sanchez rp you've ever done in wfwf, is my opinion. good luck man.

[tobeornottobe]

It wasnt done for superbrawl for 1 reason and 1 reason only.....I didnt have this gimmick. This gimmick is gold. So many ideas floating around and bam! The next thing i know, i write and i just can't stop! This is one good rp and definatly not the last. I told everybody i was going to try to establish myself here as a top competetor, This was only the tip of the iceberg

[Yukio Blaze]

This does look like some Kyzer work like Obo said, but this is a very good step up from your earlier work's. The gimmick is good for you and good luck.

[Calvin]

This was a really good rp.....but I found one...maybe you things I may have missed.

I liked the description....and I love how you defined Envy...but I really noticed how you used big word after big word in the rp...sometimes it's good...but sometimes you can tell when people are trying to make their character look intelligent...not saying that happened here...just watch out though in the future on it.

Speech was good too...however, you were so obsessed with the envy word....you barely really used it AGAINST Tyme. You mentioned him a couple times with it.....but really didn't go into huge detail with it. Like...you really didn't explain WHY Tyme was Envious...which is what I'm guessing you were intending to do? You explained it well....and related it to Tyme....I just don't think you really went into detail when you related it to Tyme.

Other then that...I loved it. I huge step in the right direction....I could be wrong with what I say...it's merly (sp) an opinion....and I may of just missed it in the rp....I'm bad with that....Good luck

[CBT]

squeaks said:

This was a really good rp.....but I found one...maybe you things I may have missed.

I liked the description....and I love how you defined Envy...but I really noticed how you used big word after big word in the rp...sometimes it's good...but sometimes you can tell when people are trying to make their character look intelligent...not saying that happened here...just watch out though in the future on it.

While true, I think a great example to use of this is Obo, when he first went solo. It was as if he was portraying a character, and a genius was revealed. I guess, its all a proccess. You gotta work to get right.

A great heel can play the role of a face, and still come off heelish, while a great face can portray a heel, and come off to soft.

just my two cents.

[Deleted]

Your best work for sure Sanchez. This RP was actually good
I felt, like Cal, that you should have mentioned Tyme more and applied the envy theme to hima dn your match some more but overall I liked this RP. Good luck in your match