SB RPS: The Ties That Bind Us (2 RPs)

[Kyzer]

The following rps contain vulgar language and a few racial remarks. It is all in character. I hope no is offended. If you are easily offended don't read.


Hate

Love


Let me know what you think. It has been a while since I had written two rps I liked so much.

[Revvie®]

Absolutely loved every word. Great job man...wow this is goin to be one hell of a match, I hope I still have a chance lol...It was worth the extension and the wait....Awesome Rp and Good luck in our match.

Reverend Shadow

[cureforthesickness]

hate was a great roleplay. The lines about Drakz calling for the drugs and the party had me laughing my ass off. Will read Love tommorrow.

edit: love was equally interesting. the discussion with Alex Sean was something I didn't really see coming, but it was good.

Solid stuff really. I like how both roleplays kinda tied together at the end of love.

[ant1s0c1alk1d]

Wow.....you know I leave and you were awesome...I come back and you are a million times more awesome.....rape me please.....do something I need that awesomness....as always u are too good for words....here's to you and rev...can't wait to read the big ppv results ...i'm so glad I came back yay

[veronicaaaahhhh]

Awesome rp's; I love the first person narration, it really brings a much more vivid scene. Nicely done.

[Yukio Blaze]

These were both awesome. I perfered Love over Hate, but I get a reference in Hate, I'm liking that. Good luck boss

[CBT]

You know, I actually doubted you, not to say I felt you were taking your time. But that the delay was by some hitch in your RPs. Some dissatusfaction. But I can't believe that anymore.

Hate was equal to Love, but I'll talk about Love in just a minute. Hate showed a interesting side of Kyzer, one that is often forgotten, and one that isn't seen of you and Drakz's friendship. I thought the story was very coherant and speech was on par with anything you've done. But also better, if that makes sense. Hate truly was the type of RP I expected from you. which is a good thing.

Love was by far my favorite of the two, while the Hate was good, the story told with Love had me intrigued. I love the fact you brought the bond between you and Alex, into this rp. I mean, its not a name that throws people off, and in reality. It makes sense that you'd go to Alex. I don't know how you capture his vocal points. but you do. I would never try to take that from you, your RPs are so much more then depth, there creative. But I liked how you compared Alex to Drakz in Love, but also made it seem like Kyzer was putting closure on all the bullcrap that didn't matter.

Good job boss, I'm impressed. I think you and Rev both lived to your expectations, while raising the bar on what you do. Can't wait to see you guys lock up. good luck man

[Deleted]

;D

[Calvin]

Hate:

I love you tou continued to tell the story of Kyzer and Elise (sp). I especially love how you say you use the WFWF as a distraction....do I sense a break down from Kyzer in the ring possibly soon???

Love:

Ummmmm, what can I say? I love how you used Alex Sean to help Kyzer remember who he is. I think I actually like Hate a little better...it's hard to tell, they both are so good.

I can't really find any flaws, and I certainly can't give any advice for improvement. Better late then ever I guess!

[Swarm]

Fantastic work bro, very well done.

I've found in RPs the most important thing is to create a unique approach to your set-up as well as having the best fundamental skills possible. Now I'll usually get on someone for not actually writing a setting word for word and describing the surrounding area, which true most people aren't description whores like me, but with RPs like this I find that while it may help, it doesn't really need any of that. You do a fantastic job of creating an aura and a mood and feeling, it's kind of strange too. Your writing style is very literal and not dramatic or mystical but yet you can establish such deep themes and emotions. That's probably your greatest asset. Nonetheless, I guarantee anyone reading this RP could probably close their eyes during and actually picture the setting. Your work almost plays out like a movie, we get the shot of the clock, Kyzer sitting, etc... It's all really great stuff.

The subject matter was very good and very patient. There's a fine line between escalation and patience and writing too much. I felt Shadow's major mistake in his RPs was his excessive, pointless writing and then the lack of patience to follow through with the long RP. But, nonetheless, your story escalates here very well. It's very interesting the character points here and it makes for an interesting dynamic with Kyzer selfishly not wanting Shadow to have his glory and Shadow feeling obliged to destroy Kyzer. Once again, great stuff.

Overall I really enjoyed both RPs. My only real complain was I wish you linked them somehow. These play as part one and part two very clearly and I felt the lack of seperating them in time was the only detriment. Shadow's work for this show was mediocre, but he had a very clever setting and seperation of time and such. It's sort of ironic that's the one thing I'd say was a little hazy here.

Great work, glad to see you RPing if it's only for a short time for now.

[Deleted]

Hate I loved, And Love I loved.. You're such a great writer... seriously Im not kissing ass, but you shouldnt be rping you should be doing more, go write a book about Kyzer... and we'll all be sure to read it.. and all have like. 5 copies jk

I really enjoyed this line in love for some reason

"You feel special cause God likes you? Let me let you in on a secret, I am GOD…

And I hate you…"

it was just the perfect line for kyzer to say. Good Luck Boss..