Calvin Lee SB RP (2nd): It's time to rebuild

[Calvin]

We come into the scene. The first thing that comes into our mind is the smell. It’s an odd scent, the kind you would expect as maybe a race track, or a mechanic shop, but this place is way too small to be either of those. We hear hammering, drilling, and sockets in action as we look around. To our left, a desk filled with tools. Wrenches, air guns, and many different sizes of pieces for sockets. To our left, is yet another shelf. This one however, is full of fuels and other liquids. There is gasoline, oil, anti freeze, and other fluids founds on the shelf, however there wrappers have been pulled off, so they are a mystery as to what they could be. Straight ahead, is the remains of some sort of motor. Pieces lie everywhere. The carburetor is right in front of us, other pieces are scattered all around. Right behind all this separated pieces is the body as to the motor belongs too. It’s the body of a motorcycle. The metallic maroon coloured body shines in it looks like it’s just been painted. This seems to look like a crowded shop. It’s probably what the look of an amateur mechanic would work at. Calvin Lee is seen sitting right next to the body. He seems to be wiping the body with a cloth. He is whistling as he whips. He then looks over at the different parts, and goes to reach for one. He starts to place it onto the motorcycle body. He grabs a socket, and some nuts that are in a container right beside his right foot, and starts to screw it on as he begins to speak.


Calvin Lee: Looks pretty good now doesn’t it? I have been working on this thing for a while now, slowly rebuilding the motor, and all in all reconstructing the whole thing as a whole. I am quite proud of myself here. It seems with a little work and effort, you can rebuild anything. It’s taken me a couple weeks, about 3 or 4 actually, to rebuild this baby, but it’s almost done. I just need to reattached everyone. There are some people I know that are broken down too that I wouldn’t mind giving a shot to rebuild, or at least point them in the right direction. Lots of people actually. But one in particular I have been watching. Wayne McGurk. Wayne, you beat me last time we met. And you showed me you have SOME talent, but it seems you have been losing as of late. It looks like you are losing your edge, you that you are being worn down. I’ll tell you why. You say you are bad ass, and people are starting to believe you. You may be bad ass, but guess what, in this world, being bad ass gets you no where but in jail. I am sure you drive down the street being all bad ass, with your bandana on tight on your head, and you shades. Yeah, I bet lots of people like how you are…


Calvin lee finishes with the piece, and grabs for another. This one look like it needs washers as well. He grabs washers and nuts, and repeats his process.


Calvin Lee: It’s wearing off on your buddy, you need a new look. Luckily for you, I’m here to show you the way. I guarantee you if you drop your bad ass look, you will start improving right away. People will stop judging you by how you look. People will stop using the annoying stereotypes that have gotten you in this mess in the first place. People will actually listen to you, and not just the drugged up losers that listen to you already. The only reason they listen to you, is because they are so doped up on their drugs, everyone you say makes them laugh. You entertain a bunch of hoped up losers. Good for you Wayne! I have to say though Wayne, you do have the ways of making friends. You are in a stable out there, although I have no idea who the members are, I am sure they will help lead you to success. But who knows. Hopefully, they are better then you so they can teach you the ways of wrestling, and hopefully they help you with new fashion tips too.


Calvin Lee stops again, as he is finished with his second piece. He reaches up on the desk, and grabs a water bottle. He opens the lid, and starts to drink. When he is finished his drink, he puts the cap back on, and sets it back in it’s place. He grabs another piece with nuts and washers.


Calvin Lee: Now that you know what’s wrong with you Wayne, I am here to say, I can help! I am a nice person. I may not appear to be, but I am. You just don’t like me being nice because I tell the truth. But once you see that it’s only to help you, you’ll thank me later. Anyways, all you have to do is watch me Wayne. It’s that simple. Watch me as I destroy you, and Obo at Superbrawl. There is nothing to it. Watch a real champion in action. It should be a good show for you, well, except for the part where you get hurt. That part probably won’t be fun, but it’ll show you that I know what I am doing. You beat me before, but now I know your moves. I know you weakness, and I know what to avoid, and what to attack. Wayne, I know you now like I know my own mother. I never make the same mistakes twice. I will beat you at Superbrawl, and just show you how your bad ass look is going to work. I won’t win any title with it, because no one will let someone with your appearance hold that title. It’s just not right. It’s wrong, very wrong. It’s more wrong then your parents creating you in the first place. I think if they looked at you now Wayne, your parents would be ashamed of you. They would shake their heads, and wish they never created you. That’s how bad you look right now. I hope you realize that you are just making a huge fool out of yourself, and I hope you see the right way and you take that path because I really do think you have something. Just not with that ridiculous look that you have adapted to. You can take my advice, or you can leave it. I am sure you will make the right decision Wayne. Good luck Wayne, because you are going to need it.


Calvin Lee grabs yet another piece, and we slowly fade into darkness.

[Calvin]

wow, now that I look at this, other then the opening, it might be lacking description. But I think the speech makes up for that. We'll see. Ummmm, I like how I related this rp together...it wasn't mmy origional idea for Wayne, but this seemed to be how it turned out...so we'll see. Comments if you can please!

[Yukio Blaze]

I enjoyed reading both your rp's. I replied to your first one and thought it was great, but I read this rp and the speech about McGurk seemed alot less than your speech about Obo. I dont know if it's a big factor or not.

They were both solid, but the first one stuck out more. Good luck to you at Superbrawl

[Revvie®]

This rp looks pretty good, just like your other one. I really think you have a real shot at pulling off a victory in this match up after reading both of these. Well good luck in your match!

Rev.

[Kurt Burton: Script Doctor!]

Good work Clavin. I like how your character is always pulling comparisons. It gives him a storyteller feel. And I could have used some more description, but the speech was excellant.

[Kyzer]

They were solid rps. I would have liked to see this one in a different setting. You did a good job except that we crap again. Get rid of that and I will be happier.