Post by Kyzer on Aug 31, 2006 0:41:02 GMT -5
1) Work on saying as much as possible with as little words as possible. Everyone has their own style but I hate having to drag through long blocks of description that have no point or meaning.
2) Don't use 'we'. It doesn't do anything but ruin the flow of the rp.
3) If you are a face, don't go using tons of profanity and calling everyone bungholes. Stone Cold was a fan favoured heel. Not every feud is a face vs. heel feud. Stone Cold vs. McMahon was a heel vs. heel feud. If you want to be over as a face, don't act like Stone Cold. By that token if you want to be a heel don't act like a **** either.
4) This one is important, monologues are almost NEVER as interesting as two people coversing. By having two people conversing you have emotion. You have more character depth, and it is generally more entertaining to me. Now there are exceptions to this like EBR's and MOD's SB rps. They are the only two who pulled the monologue off well at the PPV.
5) Grammar, grammar, grammar. I am not going to give wins to people who can't take five minutes to re-read their rp and fix some of these intellectually- disabled mistakes I keep saying.
6) Try new things. Don't be afraid to do something other than your normal. That is how I got better and how Drakz got better. He wouldnt' have won the World title if he didn't try new things.
7) Work on giving your character more depth. Show more emotion. A flat character isnt' interesting compared to someone who isn't. That is why I write Kyzer so well, and he is so interesting. He isn't a one dimensional character. There is more to him than drugs. Look at Wayne McGurk, he isn't just a biker, he is a father and a husband. That is depth.
These are just tips if you want me to like your rps more and if you want to get above your current level in the fed. You can follow them or not, that is up to you. I will leave this open for discussion.
2) Don't use 'we'. It doesn't do anything but ruin the flow of the rp.
3) If you are a face, don't go using tons of profanity and calling everyone bungholes. Stone Cold was a fan favoured heel. Not every feud is a face vs. heel feud. Stone Cold vs. McMahon was a heel vs. heel feud. If you want to be over as a face, don't act like Stone Cold. By that token if you want to be a heel don't act like a **** either.
4) This one is important, monologues are almost NEVER as interesting as two people coversing. By having two people conversing you have emotion. You have more character depth, and it is generally more entertaining to me. Now there are exceptions to this like EBR's and MOD's SB rps. They are the only two who pulled the monologue off well at the PPV.
5) Grammar, grammar, grammar. I am not going to give wins to people who can't take five minutes to re-read their rp and fix some of these intellectually- disabled mistakes I keep saying.
6) Try new things. Don't be afraid to do something other than your normal. That is how I got better and how Drakz got better. He wouldnt' have won the World title if he didn't try new things.
7) Work on giving your character more depth. Show more emotion. A flat character isnt' interesting compared to someone who isn't. That is why I write Kyzer so well, and he is so interesting. He isn't a one dimensional character. There is more to him than drugs. Look at Wayne McGurk, he isn't just a biker, he is a father and a husband. That is depth.
These are just tips if you want me to like your rps more and if you want to get above your current level in the fed. You can follow them or not, that is up to you. I will leave this open for discussion.
