Justin Tyger - Superbrawl RP "Softly Say Goodbye"

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The scene fades into a pretty busy road, with cars whizzing by in both directions.. There are a couple of hotels, Papa Johns, Gas Stations, McDonalds, and the like.. There is also a Waffle House, all brick, except for the signs, which are yellow and Black Letters.. There are a few cars parked in the parking lot beside it.. The scene zooms into the window, eventually going into the building.. We see a few people scattered around, and Justin Tyger, leaned up against the counter, legs crossed, wearing jeans, a dress shirt, and white shoes, standing at the counter looking at a menu when a clerk, a rather large African American, walks up to him..

Woman: What can I get cha honey??

Tyger Well, This Slam Breakfast thing..

And what to drink??

A Dr. Pepper..

Tyger chuckles alittle and pays the Clerk..

Ok, it‘ll be ready in a few..

Ok, thanks..

Tyger walks over to a table against a window, and sits down.. There is a sports coat and a Bible on the opposing stool.. He rubs the stubble on the right side of his face with an open hand

There’s a song.. The beginning of it says “Separated, I got myself clean, from a past that comes back in my darkest of dreams..” And that kinda explains my life now.. Separated from wrestling, I tried so hard got my life clean.. And my past come back in some dark dreams.. You want to know what I’ve been though?? Think I haven’t been though a lot?? My mama gave me up when I was four years old.. It was cold 'cause I was sleeping in my back seat.. I never had a chance to dream.. Ten years old finding love in dirty magazines.. Ms. December, you remember?? I bought you twice.. Now I'm twenty and still paying the price.. Had a sister that I barely knew.. Kind of got separated by the age of two.. Same mama, different daddy, so we couldn't fake it.. I saw my sister's daddy beat her in the tub naked.. Now take it serious the demons in the man's mind.. The same daddy with rape charges now he's doing time.. Crack followed and like daddy, prison thirteen years.. Haven't her but she's traded tears for fears.. No G.E.D, no High School diploma, all I saw is failure in my eyes.. I was raised falling in the church.. Made mistakes heard the lord calling in the church.. After service on the parking lot getting high.. Wanted to be excepted so bad I was willing to die.. Even tried to tell the pastor but he couldn't see.. Years of low self esteem and insecurities.. Church taught me how to shout and speak in tongues But preacher teach me how to live now when the tongue is done.. You know when I see.. This is for that little child with no father.. That man standing on the corner.. He has no home.. He has no food.. And his blue skies are gone.. Or that girl.. Searching for a father and a friend.. Praying that the storm someday will end.. Every time I look at them… I think about me.. Then I have flashbacks of the pain I felt.. And the pain they must be feeling.. Now tell me tha….

Here you go sir, you in the dress shirt..

Tyger gets up, walks over to the counter, and takes a plate, with eggs, bacon, French toast, and sausage, and a cup of Dr, Pepper..

Have a bless day..

You too..

Tyger walks back over to his table, sits down, gets a fork, and takes a bit of the eggs.. He chews, swallows, and puts the fork down..
I can't erase the stupid things I‘ve said and say and do and done.. Everyone’s better than me.. Even the homeless guy in front of Wal-Mart named Heb.. I’m struggling and I keep struggling just to find a better way..

Tyger picks up the fork and eats more of the eggs..

At WFWF Superbrawl in the second match is my “big farewell to WFWF” match.. I REALLY emphasize the quotation marks on that.. But it‘s against Joe Kessen.. I‘ve always wanted to do business with him ever since I‘ve gotten here.. Not in some ultraviolent match or anything.. Just a regular pure-type match.. May the best man.. Probably you, Joe, win..

Tyger eats the toast in a couple of bites, eats the sausage, and takes a few drinks from the Dr. Pepper..

People ask me.. How am I gonna get out of WFWF?? Why am I.. Why?? “Night Train“ By Bouncing Souls explains it perfectly.. “Goodbye to me and you. Goodbye to the life we knew. One last long embrace. Let go and walk on through. I'm leaving everything behind for a peace that I can't find. The ghosts that roam this house like winter air right through our souls. And it feels like dying. It just feels like time to go. Goin down south to dream another dream. Maybe check out Memphis, Tennessee. Take the night train and an extra pair of jeans. Can't think of anything else I really need. And all my experiences ride with me. This town is dead to me. And I can't stop chasing my dreams. I love you more than anything, but what you want I could never be. I love you more than anything, but only alone can we both be free. Goodbye to me and you. Goodbye to the life we knew. Wipe the tears from your eyes. Let go and walk on through..”

Tyger eats the rest of the food on his plate

People also ask how.. I could I leave something I love so much..

Tyger pauses for a second..

Just take a breath and softly say goodbye..

Tyger gets up, picks up his plate, and places it on the counter, and hands the clerk five bucks.. He walks over to his table and picks up his sports coat and Bible and walks out of the store as we fade to black..

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Please remember, I haven't RPed since the last WFWF PPV, so, I'm a little rusty..

[Yukio Blaze]

A nice sound off Tyger, but I do think you should have added more on about your opponent.

The setting was fine and so was the speech, but you just could have done a little more.

Good luck.

[Revvie®]

Sweet mother of merci, did you steal my bible? "looks at you suspiciously" jk.

I think this rp lacked b/c you didnt say alot about your opponent and the stuff you did say was negative towards yourself which is not really a plus in this case. Then most of the rp was covered in lyrics and not your own personal thoughts and views which caused it to lack in speech a great deal.

The description at the beginning was a bit confusing at first but I was able to make sense of it after a minute. Over all I feel more needed to be said and in a more positive light for you instead of just admitting defeat in the way you did. well thats all.

Good luck against Kessen!

Reverend Shadow

[Kurt Burton: Script Doctor!]

This was not too shabby, but not sparkling either. I didn't get the middle section being a rap when I first starting reading through it, although I have been hit with a stupid stick recently.

Hate to see ya go without even having that one match with me, but have funny Mr. Tenispee.

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greyshadow04dna said:

Sweet mother of merci, did you steal my bible? "looks at you suspiciously" jk.

uuohh......



*Runs and hides*


heh



I told you I was rusty..

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Adverage RP Tyger.

Man, it sucks to see you go. I seriously will miss my favorite Tenessee (sp?) gangster. Well hopefully I will meet againt in this fed or another fed. Its kind of funny because it seems that we both came and went around the same time.

[Calvin]

This was a pretty good rp.

The description was ok, I think you should have just described the inside of the restaurant rather then the outside, then the inside though.

Speech was good too. But, I don't know if we needed so much info on his past. I think less about the past, and more on your opponent might have had a little more effect in the rp.

Other then that, it was pretty good. It sounds like you are leaving again, so thats a shame to see you go.

[ZMaster]

Such a shame you're leaving right after Superbrawl though. I think what could have helped it more was more mentioning your opponent a bit more. The RP as a whole wasn't that bad. Good luck at Superbrawl and best of luck to you outside the WFWF.

[CBT]

Good rp, though it was alittle funny to see you not give focuse on your opponent.. I guess the match will be a 1 trick pony..
Retiring from wfwf, I think its a shame, but sometimes its not a piece of the pie that people want, but a bigger plate. So maybe your clearing your plate for more room for other priorities.
Either way, good luck with future endeavors, always a spot for you in RPing and WFWF.

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Thanks for the replies guys...I really don't know if I'll ever comeback to WFWF, I may......well...probably at one point or another...And return to RPing in general?? Well...I have Obo's thing, and that's it....I had another RP thing, but it got cancelled....so... I have's his thing to do that I'm done with RPing for awhile....

So will I ever comeback to RPing?? Probably for the another fed for a match or two...... WFWF?? Probably at some point...

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What the hell was with that rap?

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drakz said:

What the hell was with that rap?

Who the hell SAID it was a rap??

[Kyzer]

Your best rp is your last here. Kinda ironic. I liked the whole rp for the most part. Your description isn't anything special. You will never find french toast at a waffle house and you don't pay for your food up front. Grammar mistakes out the bunghole too. This rp was pretty good. The speech was definitely your selling point on this rp. Recounting your life was a nice touch since this is your last match here. Good luck.