Loaded RP: Epitaphs

[bad guy™]

“The deepest human defeat suffered by human beings is constituted by the difference between what one was capable of becoming and what one has in fact become.”

~Ashley Montagu~

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Super-Brawl V. It was go big, or go home, and apparently after it was all said and done, I went home. Why though? Was it the fact that I turned my back for one minute, and we were eliminated? No, of course not. Was it the fact that Reckless’s misguided jealousy got the better of him and he interfered in my match that I had won?? Maybe. But most likely, it was the fact that my under-achieving excuse of a tag partner Dave Williams could not take a simple pat on the head. Yeah…that’s it. We could have won that match, Dave. We already knew we were better than The Axis and The Survivors. And I am pretty sure we could have taken on Obo and Deville with little trouble. Like that? Well we ae just getting to the best part now. After the match, Dave had the nerve to tell me “Good match dude” and “Cheer up dude, why don’t we go get a couple drunkies and have some fun tonight.” Ok Dave. You go enjoy your consolation c***. I’m going to prepare for what you should be equally worried about. Next weeks match. Good luck against EBR, partner. Oh, on a side note. As for my personal life and the fact that my ex-wife is now on trial for the apparent murder of Jacob Michaels…yeah…thanks for the support…ass hole.

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Reckless. This is not going to be the first time you and I have been in that ring together. And if memory serves me right, I won that last bout. Some called that a lucky win by me…a mere fluke. Others called it a hard fought battle between two men who would not give an inch. You know what I call it? I call it me just being that damn good. And this week, it will be no different. But put that out of your mind for a minute and let’s go back to last week. You knocked out Williams with a cinder block. Now, I am not saying he did not deserve it, but why not me? You had a chance to take me out, but instead it was Williams. Why? Was it because of your “impeccable timing?” Did you have unfinished business with Williams that the other 5 men in that ring were un-aware of? Or was it because you were scared? Ah-ha! That’s it. You were afraid I would retaliate against you and being the smart man you are, you did not want to anger me. Well guess what, by sabotaging my title match, you did not anger me. You infuriated me. And normally, I could really care less about you knocking Williams sillier than putty. But by doing that you helped cost me that one thing that I had been longing for years now. You infuriated the most dominating force WFWF has seen in a long time, and that is not a good thing. Reckless, you had better have your epitaphs written out, because by angering me, you just committed career suicide. And this week on Loaded Reckless, it is your funeral.

OOC: I hit some major writers block, and a lot was on my mind this week, but I think for being "rushed", it turned out decent. ;D

As always, advice is welcome.

[Swarm]

Not the worst thing ever. It had a point and something of an arc. I would've preferred a setting, perhaps, but whatever. Glad to see the effort put forth.

[sonstuds]

That was probably the best RP of your's that I've read.

[Calvin]

this seriously was amazing. It's a shame you couldn't have put time into it to make it better.

Whatever you did different on this rp, you gotta keep doing..


in other words... rush all your rps and keep this writers block going..

[bad guy™]

Thanks guys!

And for the record Lee...Usually I do not start writing until the day before or day of the deadline. But I usually have an idea of what I want to do. So I guess I pre-write it in my head. But this week so much came up I really did not think.... Guess I got lucky

[Drakz]

Your speech seems well written and you don't repeat yourself which is good, I think you could touch more on certain subjects though such as this weeks opponent. Like Alex said I would have liked there to have been a setting of some description as well just to add a bit more realism and context to what your character was saying.