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Post by jigsawkiller14 on Feb 10, 2008 11:27:22 GMT -5
[“Average” Joe Watts stands proudly by a WFWF backdrop, his CONTRA Universal Heavyweight championship over one shoulder and a smirk proudly bestowed on his face. WFWF interview Jim Gracey approaches him for an interview]
Jim: I am here with newest WFWF Superstar, “Average” Joe Watts. Joe, I know you from other places, but what brings you to the WFWF?
Joe: One thing. Fame, fortune, and the shot at greatness. You see Jim, you don’t hold the CONTRA Universal Heavyweight championship for 21 months without being something special. You don’t carry the federation on your back to the dying days, until the sun sets.. Unless you’re phenomenal. I am far from “Average”.
Jim: But Joe, the WFWF is a whole new breed of competitors..
Joe: And they will soon learn to bow to Average Joe. There’s nothing around here I can’t handle. From the hardcore wrestlers who will bleed like virgins on prom night, to the pompous technical wrestlers, who will be locked in places they didn’t even know they had. And soon.. That WFWF title.. I don’t care if it’s Thunder.. Or if it’s EBR.. Soon that title will be around MY waist. You could say I’m watching tonight’s main event with a vested interest..
[Joe walks away from the interview set, leaving Jim a little puzzled as to how to sign out.]
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2008 12:16:54 GMT -5
HAHAHAHA! THAT'S THREE THINGS, Contra Boy . . .
. . .SuperBrawl isn't tonight, either . . .
. . .and I hope this was just for fun and nothing like what you'd really be RPing in competition.
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Post by Mr. PerpetuaLynch Motion on Feb 10, 2008 12:49:51 GMT -5
Well this is a realistic size for a backstage promo... I could honestly see this on TV. That's what I hate, people who have backstage promos and it's like a page and a half long... that would be like a 5-7 minute promo... Yeah, if I saw a 7 minute backstage promo... regardless of how good it was, I would change the channel. This however is something I could see on TV... it's got a nice tone to it. However, what I am getting at is that it is good for an introduction RP however there are two things wrong 1) You can't march in here and expect a WFWF title shot... there have been people waiting in line for a LONG time and you sir are at the back of the line. 2) This was good enough for an introduction to your charecter. HOWEVER, this better not be indicative of your future work. In the future, describe the setting you are at. How does everything look around you, how is your charecter dressed? That kind of thing helps an RP become more real. 3) Your dialog was alright but it could really use some improvements. I understand what you are getting at with the whole "Average Joe" thing but I think you need to develop a personality. Right now, reading this it reads like a guy who has the charisma of a potato... The writing just seemed very... Average. I think you need to go above average with Average Joe  Other than that, it's looking promising. Welcome to WFWF, I'd anticipate you being on the House Shows for a little while... |
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Post by Wez on Feb 10, 2008 14:41:17 GMT -5
Very short, even for a promo. Don't include your non-WFWF titles here, they don't mean anything, especially when CONTRA is not a well known, if real, e-fed. There are plenty of people much more deserving of a title shot than you so stop trying to run before you can walk. Try to establish yourself on the House Shows as soon as possible and then you'll get the rewards. I have done only one House Show (and 2 other matches) and am been moved up aready.
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Post by Calvin on Feb 10, 2008 14:59:15 GMT -5
Very short, even for a promo. Don't include your non-WFWF titles here, they don't mean anything, especially when CONTRA is not a well known, if real, e-fed. There are plenty of people much more deserving of a title shot than you so stop trying to run before you can walk. Try to establish yourself on the House Shows as soon as possible and then you'll get the rewards. I have done only one House Show (and 2 other matches) and am been moved up aready. to be fair jay mayhem is also on loaded sooooo. |
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Post by wfwfcaw on Feb 10, 2008 15:58:43 GMT -5
However, what I am getting at is that it is good for an introduction RP however there are two things wrong 1) You can't march in here and expect a WFWF title shot... there have been people waiting in line for a LONG time and you sir are at the back of the line. 2) This was good enough for an introduction to your charecter. HOWEVER, this better not be indicative of your future work. In the future, describe the setting you are at. How does everything look around you, how is your charecter dressed? That kind of thing helps an RP become more real. 3) Your dialog was alright but it could really use some improvements. I understand what you are getting at with the whole "Average Joe" thing but I think you need to develop a personality. Right now, reading this it reads like a guy who has the charisma of a potato... The writing just seemed very... Average. I think you need to go above average with Average Joe To quote this Deville character - "That's three things". |
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Post by zombiesx on Feb 10, 2008 16:40:50 GMT -5
Very short, even for a promo. Don't include your non-WFWF titles here, they don't mean anything, especially when CONTRA is not a well known, if real, e-fed. There are plenty of people much more deserving of a title shot than you so stop trying to run before you can walk. Try to establish yourself on the House Shows as soon as possible and then you'll get the rewards. I have done only one House Show (and 2 other matches) and am been moved up aready. to be fair jay mayhem is also on loaded sooooo. You know it's sad but true! Well not good man, atleast not to me. |
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Post by jigsawkiller14 on Feb 10, 2008 20:12:32 GMT -5
there are plenty of people much more deserving of a title shot than you so stop trying to run before you can walk. Try to establish yourself on the House Shows as soon as possible and then you'll get the rewards. who's the WFWF Cruiserweight champion right now? |
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Post by Mr. PerpetuaLynch Motion on Feb 10, 2008 20:26:27 GMT -5
there are plenty of people much more deserving of a title shot than you so stop trying to run before you can walk. Try to establish yourself on the House Shows as soon as possible and then you'll get the rewards. who's the WFWF Cruiserweight champion right now? No Cruiserweight champion... just stop focusing on trying for a title right at the moment and try to improve yourself on a house show... And when I said "Two things" I meant "A few things" |
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Post by jigsawkiller14 on Feb 10, 2008 21:11:50 GMT -5
who's the WFWF Cruiserweight champion right now? No Cruiserweight champion... just stop focusing on trying for a title right at the moment and try to improve yourself on a house show... And when I said "Two things" I meant "A few things" if there's no champion, then why does Wez have it listed in his banner? isn't that a little silly? besides, what do I have to improve on? I already held the CONTRA Universal championship for 23 months.. and would still be holding it today but the board closed down.. Beat some of the very best there.. |
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Post by Thunder on Feb 10, 2008 21:25:04 GMT -5
No Cruiserweight champion... just stop focusing on trying for a title right at the moment and try to improve yourself on a house show... And when I said "Two things" I meant "A few things" if there's no champion, then why does Wez have it listed in his banner? isn't that a little silly? besides, what do I have to improve on? I already held the CONTRA Universal championship for 23 months.. and would still be holding it today but the board closed down.. Beat some of the very best there.. Wez held the Cruiserweight Title several years ago. Should we really care what titles you held somewhere else? Holding some title somewhere doesn't make you worthy of getting title shots here. It doesn't matter if you were declared The Greatest Roleplayer That Ever Lived in whatever fed you were in. That doesn't hold any water here. And if this RP is what you usually put out, then you do have some stuff to improve on. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 10, 2008 21:27:39 GMT -5
No Cruiserweight champion... just stop focusing on trying for a title right at the moment and try to improve yourself on a house show... And when I said "Two things" I meant "A few things" if there's no champion, then why does Wez have it listed in his banner? isn't that a little silly? besides, what do I have to improve on? I already held the CONTRA Universal championship for 23 months.. and would still be holding it today but the board closed down.. Beat some of the very best there.. Question: Did you own CONTRA? |
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Post by wfwfcaw on Feb 10, 2008 21:29:07 GMT -5
You know what Thunder, you go around flapping your gums about this and that and everything in between yet you fail to acknowledge that you have list of your accomplishments in other feds in your bio. Dr. Pot, meet Mr. Kettle. He also goes by the name of THUNDER.  < ---- you. |
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Post by jigsawkiller14 on Feb 10, 2008 21:32:02 GMT -5
if there's no champion, then why does Wez have it listed in his banner? isn't that a little silly? besides, what do I have to improve on? I already held the CONTRA Universal championship for 23 months.. and would still be holding it today but the board closed down.. Beat some of the very best there.. Question: Did you own CONTRA? no. Kane owned it |
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Post by Mr. PerpetuaLynch Motion on Feb 10, 2008 22:34:22 GMT -5
Question: Did you own CONTRA? no. Kane owned it Glen Jacobs? Really? |
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Post by jigsawkiller14 on Feb 10, 2008 22:50:54 GMT -5
no, a guy who roleplayed as Kane |
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Post by Wez on Feb 11, 2008 6:08:09 GMT -5
No Cruiserweight champion... just stop focusing on trying for a title right at the moment and try to improve yourself on a house show... And when I said "Two things" I meant "A few things" if there's no champion, then why does Wez have it listed in his banner? isn't that a little silly? besides, what do I have to improve on? I already held the CONTRA Universal championship for 23 months.. and would still be holding it today but the board closed down.. Beat some of the very best there.. The Cruiserweight Title has been discontinued, I held it all the way back in 2002. I then took a six year break and returned last month. |
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Post by Deleted on Feb 11, 2008 9:00:23 GMT -5
no, a guy who roleplayed as Kane El Oh El* Paid for by friends of EBR |
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