SuperBrawl IV RP: "There's Going to Be a Fight"

[Almost Like Flacco]

Shields is walking down an empty corridor in the backstage area. The sound of his sneakers slapping against the cold, grey concrete echoes throughout the hallway as he slowly walks along the wall. Some of the white bricks that make up the wall are stained and others are beginning to crack and the paint is peeling off. The hallway is empty except for a few rusty ladders and chairs. Shields is in his traditional black jeans and sneakers and is wearing a long sleeve white shirt. He looks straight ahead and begins speaking.

The biggest event in WFWF history, SuperBrawl IV, is almost upon us. This event is bigger than the Super Bowl, World Series, Stanley Cup Playoffs, and the Olympics all rolled into one. Why is that exactly? It’s because I, Christian Shields, the greatest wrestler in WFWF, am on the card. I, for one, am excited to be taking part in this event this early on in my glorious career. Not only does this event mark my biggest match yet, it also is my third title match in my short time here in WFWF. If that doesn’t prove to all of you fans that I have what it takes to be a big match player in this company, then I guess I’ll just have to prove my point by winning the titles tonight alongside OKAMA. As many of you may or may not know, OKAMA and I made our Odium debuts in a triple threat match. We never saw eye-to-eye in that match and I’m certain that we won’t see eye-to-eye in this one either, but I’m going to try my absolute hardest to keep from losing my temper with him. I’m sure his mindset is almost exact with mine. We both know that if either of us get out of line, a fight is going to break out. I think it’s that kind of mentality that is going to take us to the top. It’s that kind of mentality that is going to get us the belts.

Shields stops walking but continues to look straight ahead. He has a very serious look on his face.

Winning the Tag Team… I mean Orgy titles will not be easy by any means. We have to take out The Revolution to do so. They have all the means to thoroughly beat both of us to a bloody pulp but there is one thing that neither Kurt Burton nor Manny C. possess, and that is the drive and determination to not only be the Orgy champions, but to be the absolute best in this business. Both OKAMA and myself possess this drive and are prepared unleash all kinds of pain on The Revolution tonight. We have been waiting for this moment our whole careers and we’re not going to let anything stand in our way.

Shields grabs a black steel folding chair that is folded up and starts walking again. The corridor slowly begins to fill with other crew members and wrestlers that are showing up for the event.

Like I said earlier, winning those belts will be no easy feat, but boy will it be one hell of a ride! I’m prepared to go through tables, tacks, ladders, and barbed wire just to be able to hold gold in WFWF. I just hope that OKAMA is prepared to do the same, because I sure as hell can’t do it alone.

Shields walks into his dressing room and slams the door. You can hear a chair being slammed against the wall. Shields screams from the top of his lungs. The view zooms in on the door as it fades to black.

[El Manny of Fresh]

Good stuff, its going to be a good one. I might have to do a second RP to come back at this one.

[Yukio Blaze]

This was pretty good CS. You had the speech down well, but the description could have been a little more, but as your day's go by in the WFWF, you'll get better and better. For some reason this line stood out to me "I’m prepared to go through tables, tacks, ladders, and barbed wire just to be able to hold gold in WFWF" I've done everything in that line and perhap's ill be getting my first title too.


Good job and good luck CS

[immune360]

not bad not bad at all actually, I see you have true potential, just need a little bit more experience under your belt. and you are going to be a great contender here in the wfwf. great work man. of course the description could have been more detailed but that will all come in time. good job

Immune

[Kurt Burton: Script Doctor!]

So, you think you can take this!

* Holds up belt*

Well, I am impressed with your speech. Your description could use more. I like how you complimented us and bashed us at the same time. Good luck to you, I hope OKAMA shows.

[Calvin]

Good rp here, I can tell you have what it takes here.

Description is really good. I love the opening, it's really really good for someone as new to the wfwf as you are. It has basically all that it needs, I think just going more into depth with what you descrive here is all you really need to take it that extra step.

Speech is great too. I feel though, this rp more deals with your partner rather opponents. I think if you talked a little more about your opponents here, it would have made this rp that much better. I like your speech though...I thinkwith experience it'll take you somewhere. You have the right tools thats for sure....keep up the good work.

[CBT]

You know, when the House Shows 1st started, the the Internet title came in, I was unsure about you. I liked your style and RPs. But you were uncertain. but hopefully now your set.
This was a good rp, that flowed well. To bad Okama is not likely of showing. this would have been a great challenge for the Revolution.
I do have some advice. If you plan to succeed, try to get alittle more creative in where your RPs take place, I mean. Outside of corridor, ring, locker room. it can work. but not the best idea.

[Revvie®]

This rp was descent for still being fairly new and you definitely have alot of pontential, one thing I will say for sure is you could have said more about your opponents and such, this rp in general seemed cut off a little to early.

On description, you could have went more in depth on it and really got into details such as if you said "Jim is walking down a corridor" you could have said " Jim with a quick pace, and a look of discontent hasted down the long corridor"...maybe not the best example but I am sure you get what I am saying

over all this rp was descent and good luck in your match!

Rev.

[Kyzer]

This was good. You just cut it off too soon. I like how you played the love hate thing, very nice. I hope you stick around. You can definitely go far. If you expand more as far as discussing your opponent, you will do wonders.