Loaded RP" 'rM'

[recklessmatten]

Reckless:Williams, To the best of my knowledge, I have 2 wins with no loss record against yourself. The first match we showed our respect and shook hands in the middle of the ring. You showed great talent and we went out there and had one hell of a match. I beat you. You made a single mistake and it cost you.

Reckless is walking down an empty street, wrapped up warm as the cold wind blows outside. There is no people around, the only thing thats moving is litter that is scattered over the floor.

Reckless: Match Two. I beat you again. This time, I represented F.D.S, and you, a H.S representative. You had a problem with me being on the PPV, and you not. Well, i proved why i was booked ahead of you. By beating you, One, Two, Three. Williams, what makes you think its third time lucky?

Reckless stops in front a bus stop and takes a seat down. He takes off one of his gloves and takes out a small note pad and a pen from his coat pocket.

Reckless Vs Williams Part 3

Match Preview: Reckless takes on Williams for the third time. Will it be third time lucky? Or will Williams feel the Reckless Abandon. We will find out, Loaded.

Reckless gets up and walks off after putting away the notepad. He walks over towards a beat down, boarded up, park. On the gate there is a note reading 'No Entry'. Reckless kicks down the gate and walks in. In the park there is a few benches, old sofa's, boxes litter all over the place. Reckless smiles.

Reckless: This will do fine. Needs a few adjustments, but will be fine for what is needed. Now lets see...... Everything seems empty, perfect.

Reckless walks over to the gate. He puts his bag down, rips of the sign on the gate and leans over to his bag. He takes out a can of spray paint from his bad and sprays 'rM' over the door. He lifts the gate up and places it on the hinges.

Reckless: Perfect. This place will be looking good in no time.


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Rush job here. Decided that i will have a set location for most of my RP's, thats why i have introduced this 'park' area.

[veronicaaaahhhh]

For a rushed piece, this was actually pretty good. Something I rarely see in rushed pieces, mine's included, is focus and direction. While you may have whipped this RP up in around fifteen-to-thirty minutes, this does have some strength and direction; you knew what you wanted and, despite its length, you executed it perfectly.

You're fast becoming a good RP'er and I can see a lot from you in the coming year. Great job here, man.

[recklessmatten]

Thats probable the best comment ive had on an rp Thanks alot

[Markw]

Yeah great RP, I guess all we can do now is wait and see 3rd time lucky or 3-0, I wish you good luck and for a rushed piece it was good, your slowly getting back to the Reckless I remember, your deffinatly improving, so yeah nice rp, and good luck, I'm really looking forward to another encounter because I've been waiting for a long time to get my hands on you, so good luck, I'm really looking forward to it, good job man, and it's 3rd time lucky, I promise

[Revvie®]

I have to agree with what McGurk said..yep yep..hehe

[Deleted]

I don't like shoot promos . . . and that's really what this was. But this is personal opinion. For me, again, it's too matter-of-fact. Work on your tenses. Opening line:

"I have two wins . . . against yourself."

Kind of just choppy. I like that you're going to have your own little "Reckless Roleplay Round-Up" . . . not that you should call it that . . . but it's good to see that you're making some place you own.

[sonstuds]

I'll always have a soft spot for someone having a signature location they use for RPs. It worked out very favorable for me when I did it with the EBR Emporium, so hopefully you'll have the same success.

You admitted it was rushed, so not much more to say other than the fact that you've improved overall in how you write the description.