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Post by jesterslaugh on Dec 14, 2007 3:22:58 GMT -5
Thunder lets be honest, I really love this storyline you are doing with your character.
It has got all the good twists and turns of a phenominal book.
Keep up the good work.
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Post by Deleted on Dec 14, 2007 13:38:27 GMT -5
Is your new motto 'Keep 'Em Hanging?'
Some minor flaws that wouldn't be caught by Word (missing words) but overall a great segway in the story. I'm anxious to see if there are going to be more twists involved. Like . . . well, without giving anything away I'll just say that there's something that would really just boggle the minds. I'll PM you.
Great piece.
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Post by Revvie® on Dec 14, 2007 14:09:34 GMT -5
And Thunder, WFWF's Mastery of Suspense does it again. The building on this story is really well done, though your week to week rps seem shamefull compared to the ppv one you put out, I do have to say im enjoying keeping up with the story. Great Stuff man. Revvie  |
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Post by sonstuds on Dec 14, 2007 19:43:57 GMT -5
I love Kurt just bouncin' after Thunder tells him everything.  |
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Post by Thunder on Dec 15, 2007 14:38:09 GMT -5
Is your new motto 'Keep 'Em Hanging?' Some minor flaws that wouldn't be caught by Word (missing words) but overall a great segway in the story. I'm anxious to see if there are going to be more twists involved. Like . . . well, without giving anything away I'll just say that there's something that would really just boggle the minds. I'll PM you. Great piece. I'd love to hear what you're thinking of. I've pretty much got the ending set in stone, but I'm still working on all the stuff in between. Just a few minutes ago alone I came up with another major thing to add to this. |
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