Post by bad guy™ on Nov 30, 2007 20:40:55 GMT -5
OOC: Just a recap here, Jacob Michaels is Horror’s daughter’s killer. Jessie is Horror’s girlfriend.
OOC: I think this turned out OK. I like it at least.
So as usual, all criticism is welcome.
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~Michaels~
Store Keeper: Hey sir. I know everyone in this town, but I do not know you. What’s your name stranger?
“Jacob.”
Store Keeper: Well hello Jacob, nice to meet you. Is there a reason you came to town?
“…..To meet up with an old friend, but he never seems to be home.”
Store Keeper: Maybe I can contact them, what’s his name?
“Shawn Thomas.”
Store Keeper: Shawn, man, I have not seen him since his little girl was killed. A couple of years ago. He never even comes back to town anymore. Figures, he becomes a famous celebrity, and he forgets about us little folk.
“Celebrity? What do you mean?”
Store Keeper: You must not be good friends then. He works for the WFWF.
“The wrestling promotion?”
Store Keeper: Yeah, he has worked there for over a year. He is known as The High Horror now. Odd name. And how did you not know that? His face is everywhere anymore.
“I have been…..away for a while, and I never got out much.”
Store Keeper: Oh.
Store Clerk: You know what, I just remembered. He is going to be over in Springfield later today. He has a match in the Springfield Arena. And I believe he is also making a speech a little bit before the show. So that would be a good place to catch him if you want to see him.
“Thanks. Good Bye.”
Store Clerk: You are welco……Hey what is that, what are you doing? No don’t, I have a wife and kids! N….
*BOOM BOOM*
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~Horror~
“Hey Jessie, we gotta go, I have to be there so I can start my speech on time.”
Jessie: I’m coming, I’m coming. So, how do I look?
[Jessie walks out of the bathroom dressed in a sleek, strapless, scarlet red dress.]
“Uhh……ummm…..”
Jessie: I’ll take that as a ‘great’….ha.
“Yeah. Umm….the mayor called and told me that the limo was waiting to take us to city hall for my speech.”
Jessie: Nervous?
“Nah, I love talking in-front of people. I am more nervous about my match later tonight with Lee and Castle….ha.”
Jessie: I can see why.
“Yeah. Well, there is the limo….so lets go. Driver!”
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~Michaels~
“Finally. I have been waiting for this day for four years. I never thought I would have a chance to exact my revenge against this guy. He is going to get what he deserves. He testified against me, and that was the biggest mistake of his life. He is going to pay for those four years that I will never get back.”
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~Horror~
Jessie: So Shawn, what are you planning on saying in your speech?
“Uhh….here, read it.”
[Horror takes a couple of pieces of yellow tablet paper out of his pocket and hands it to Jessie]
Jessie: Interesting. You really have outdone yourself with this.
“Thanks. I was a little saddened, but mostly grateful when they asked me to speak before the show.”
Jessie: And I can understand why. Especially since Michaels is loose.
“Especially.”
Driver: We have arrived. I was instructed to tell you to go inside City Hall, and everything will go from there.
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~The Meeting of Horror and Michaels~
“Hello Mayor Davlin. Mayor, this is Jessica Hadam.”
Mayor Davlin: Why hello there Ms. Jessie.
Jessie: Hello.
Mayor Devlin: Well, are you ready to ‘rumble’, Shawn?
“Ha. Yes, let’s go.”
[Horror, Jessie, and Mayor Davlin all walk out to a podium right outside city hall. There are photographers and spectators everywhere. But little does anyone know, is that one of those spectators is Jacob Michaels.]
“Hello, Springfield. My name is Shawn Thomas. But some may know me better as The High Horror. Now, Mayor Devlin has asked me to come here today and talk to you about gang violence. When you think of gang violence, you probably think of the Bloods of East L.A, or the Greasers in Tulsa, Oklahoma. But they are actually everywhere in this city, in this state, in this country, in the entire world, whether they are well known or not. And I, like many other parents before me have found out the hard way. You all know that I had a beautiful little girl named Xana. And as most of you know, she died really young. But what only a few of you know, she was murdered. Murdered by a man who belonged to a local gang. Now whether he meant to kill her or not is not known for sure, but nonetheless…”
[While Horror was talking, Michaels was slowly, yet surely making his way to the front of the pack. He was now in about the second row when he screamed.]
Michaels: I did not want to kill her, but you did want to put me in jail for years. So I got, mine, and now you are going to get yours!
[Michaels shoves everyone out of the way, lifts his hand up and fires.]
*BOOM BOOM*
[Everyone is running and screaming around at the sound of the gunfire. Michaels dropped the gun and ran through the crowd again, into his car, and drove away. However, all was not over.]
Mayor Davlin: Hello, 911? Yes, we need an ambulance quick at city hall. A young woman has been shot!
“Jessie! No, not you too!”
~Michaels~
Store Keeper: Hey sir. I know everyone in this town, but I do not know you. What’s your name stranger?
“Jacob.”
Store Keeper: Well hello Jacob, nice to meet you. Is there a reason you came to town?
“…..To meet up with an old friend, but he never seems to be home.”
Store Keeper: Maybe I can contact them, what’s his name?
“Shawn Thomas.”
Store Keeper: Shawn, man, I have not seen him since his little girl was killed. A couple of years ago. He never even comes back to town anymore. Figures, he becomes a famous celebrity, and he forgets about us little folk.
“Celebrity? What do you mean?”
Store Keeper: You must not be good friends then. He works for the WFWF.
“The wrestling promotion?”
Store Keeper: Yeah, he has worked there for over a year. He is known as The High Horror now. Odd name. And how did you not know that? His face is everywhere anymore.
“I have been…..away for a while, and I never got out much.”
Store Keeper: Oh.
Store Clerk: You know what, I just remembered. He is going to be over in Springfield later today. He has a match in the Springfield Arena. And I believe he is also making a speech a little bit before the show. So that would be a good place to catch him if you want to see him.
“Thanks. Good Bye.”
Store Clerk: You are welco……Hey what is that, what are you doing? No don’t, I have a wife and kids! N….
*BOOM BOOM*
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~Horror~
“Hey Jessie, we gotta go, I have to be there so I can start my speech on time.”
Jessie: I’m coming, I’m coming. So, how do I look?
[Jessie walks out of the bathroom dressed in a sleek, strapless, scarlet red dress.]
“Uhh……ummm…..”
Jessie: I’ll take that as a ‘great’….ha.
“Yeah. Umm….the mayor called and told me that the limo was waiting to take us to city hall for my speech.”
Jessie: Nervous?
“Nah, I love talking in-front of people. I am more nervous about my match later tonight with Lee and Castle….ha.”
Jessie: I can see why.
“Yeah. Well, there is the limo….so lets go. Driver!”
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~Michaels~
“Finally. I have been waiting for this day for four years. I never thought I would have a chance to exact my revenge against this guy. He is going to get what he deserves. He testified against me, and that was the biggest mistake of his life. He is going to pay for those four years that I will never get back.”
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~Horror~
Jessie: So Shawn, what are you planning on saying in your speech?
“Uhh….here, read it.”
[Horror takes a couple of pieces of yellow tablet paper out of his pocket and hands it to Jessie]
Jessie: Interesting. You really have outdone yourself with this.
“Thanks. I was a little saddened, but mostly grateful when they asked me to speak before the show.”
Jessie: And I can understand why. Especially since Michaels is loose.
“Especially.”
Driver: We have arrived. I was instructed to tell you to go inside City Hall, and everything will go from there.
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~The Meeting of Horror and Michaels~
“Hello Mayor Davlin. Mayor, this is Jessica Hadam.”
Mayor Davlin: Why hello there Ms. Jessie.
Jessie: Hello.
Mayor Devlin: Well, are you ready to ‘rumble’, Shawn?
“Ha. Yes, let’s go.”
[Horror, Jessie, and Mayor Davlin all walk out to a podium right outside city hall. There are photographers and spectators everywhere. But little does anyone know, is that one of those spectators is Jacob Michaels.]
“Hello, Springfield. My name is Shawn Thomas. But some may know me better as The High Horror. Now, Mayor Devlin has asked me to come here today and talk to you about gang violence. When you think of gang violence, you probably think of the Bloods of East L.A, or the Greasers in Tulsa, Oklahoma. But they are actually everywhere in this city, in this state, in this country, in the entire world, whether they are well known or not. And I, like many other parents before me have found out the hard way. You all know that I had a beautiful little girl named Xana. And as most of you know, she died really young. But what only a few of you know, she was murdered. Murdered by a man who belonged to a local gang. Now whether he meant to kill her or not is not known for sure, but nonetheless…”
[While Horror was talking, Michaels was slowly, yet surely making his way to the front of the pack. He was now in about the second row when he screamed.]
Michaels: I did not want to kill her, but you did want to put me in jail for years. So I got, mine, and now you are going to get yours!
[Michaels shoves everyone out of the way, lifts his hand up and fires.]
*BOOM BOOM*
[Everyone is running and screaming around at the sound of the gunfire. Michaels dropped the gun and ran through the crowd again, into his car, and drove away. However, all was not over.]
Mayor Davlin: Hello, 911? Yes, we need an ambulance quick at city hall. A young woman has been shot!
“Jessie! No, not you too!”
OOC: I think this turned out OK. I like it at least.
So as usual, all criticism is welcome.
The ending seemed a little weird, it would have been better if you'd left the cliff hanger at the end of the speech and not done the whole shooting bit at the end, it would have been more of a suprise if you'd saved the last bit till your next RP IMO. I don't think you pulled it off but none the less good luck, sorry I no showed and I'll follow your RP's to see what you do next.