11.30.07 Obo "Dialog of a Catchy Nature"

[cureforthesickness]

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Warning; This roleplay contains bad, bad words. Very bad words. Everything contained here within this roleplay are in charecter views and in charecter speech. Any bashes or in charecter comments should not be taken seriously in an out of charecter enviroment.

I seriously hate having to do that, but there's idiots out there that take this crap seriously..

[brklynbraller]

Why do you gotta diss diet coke

[Revvie®]

Theres the Obo I want to see more of. This rp was fantastic, the only complaint is the opening with the blog felt a little long winded, but it was a rant so that wasnt to bad. I think you made your point there quite well.

The rp itself was nicely put and gave for a new and interesting point of view and look at Obo that I'm really liking and feeling. Great stuff doing it in a second person's perspective.

The end was a little sketchy on the meaning. I think I caught it but it was still a little messy in my opinion.

Over all this is the stuff that I would have liked to see you put out as champion. This didnt feel forced and didnt feel overly idiot and just blood and violence with little point or perspective like you have been.

Seriously nice job man, you have my intention again. Try to keep it up.

Revvie

[sonstuds]

I liked this a lot but cut down on the swearing in your myspace pages. I dunno, it seems every week it's just " __. __. And __ too". It isn't effective anymore, not to mention I hate how try to include IC from OOC and the whole "this is real, this isn't fake" aspect. I still don't think it makes any sense with all the loose ends, which is a real shame because you take both of those basic premises out of the myspace and I think it's really effective and well written.

The second part I thoroughly enjoyed, and whether you admit it or not Obo realizing his office is plain is totally a homage to me.

The Kurt Burton message was good just for the "you're Obo circa 2006".

[bad guy™]

According to you guys, it is really good. But what is it about? I can't read it...lol All I am getting is that it is bashing Diet Coke.

[sonstuds]

halo said:

According to you guys, it is really good. But what is it about? I can't read it...lol All I am getting is that it is bashing Diet Coke.

After losing the title Obo is fed up with his life. Unsatisfied with the way things are going he decides to rob a liquor store, but on the way in his conscience comes into play. He battles in his head the urge to rob the liquor store, with a comedic line about how he can run to his aunt's house afterwards and cross dress, specifically shave his legs with Renee's razor blades. But after realizing that the store clerk is older then George Burns he knows that it's not worth it and he walks away.

[Revvie®]

EBR nailed the rp right on its head....it was beautifully written..even the cross dress scene...the little black dress looks amazing on Obo

[bad guy™]

Ouch Rev.

And if EBR hit the nail on the head, then it sound rather intriguing. I am going over my friends tomorrow, and I might be intrigued enough to read.

[cureforthesickness]

I really should have called this roleplay "Guilty Conscience" in retrospect..

[Calvin]

I dont' get why you constantly tell us you can't read the rp. It's like you are trying to make us believe it more and more, which you shouldn't have to do really. Unless you are just trying to remind us over and over..which is kinda suspicious to me. But don't worry, I won't point that out to anyone.

[sonstuds]

halo said:

Ouch Rev.

And if EBR hit the nail on the head, then it sound rather intriguing. I am going over my friends tomorrow, and I might be intrigued enough to read.

Coo', hopefully you're not disappointed.

cureforthesickness said:

I really should have called this roleplay "Guilty Conscience" in retrospect..

I'm stoked someone got it.

[CBT]

squeaks said:

I dont' get why you constantly tell us you can't read the rp. It's like you are trying to make us believe it more and more, which you shouldn't have to do really. Unless you are just trying to remind us over and over..which is kinda suspicious to me. But don't worry, I won't point that out to anyone.

Oh my god!

Horror is stealing Hexus' gimmick and doing so badly.

While E pointed out the one thing that left a bad taste in my mouth. The "it's not shooting unless I say it is" and the no third wall having... I definitely see a positive side to this role play.

It's twenty to three in the morning so I'll either edit in or post a more formal response.
I doubt you are getting feint praise but if I'm critical it's for the character. Not you, honestly.

[Kurt Burton: Script Doctor!]

I think breaking kayfabe, or the fourth wall, was a bad move, but otherwise it was really well written. I enjoyed it, and thought it gave you some great places to go. I especially liked the part where Obo was considering whether or not to have sex with the passed out girl. Just keeping the joke alive people.

[sonstuds]

xkaliburr said:

I think breaking kayfabe, or the fourth wall, was a bad move, but otherwise it was really well written. I enjoyed it, and thought it gave you some great places to go. I especially liked the part where Obo was considering whether or not to have sex with the passed out girl. Just keeping the joke alive people.

Now let's hope someone can finish it.

[bad guy™]

Yo, I am going to tell you this now Obo, I am down Warren Peace's house, sop I can read your RP. It was very graphic, but very good. I enjoyed reading this, even thoug I was dissed enough...lol

Burton was right, you have gone back to Obo-2006. Welcome back.

[sonstuds]

halo said:

Burton was right, you have gone back to Obo-2006. Welcome back.

Obo's stuff is better now then it was a year ago.

. . . And you were in the WFWF in 2006?

[Calvin]

I was thinking the exact same thing. Didn't he win the title in 2007?

[Thunder]

sonstuds said:

halo said:

Burton was right, you have gone back to Obo-2006. Welcome back.

Obo's stuff is better now then it was a year ago.

. . . And you were in the WFWF in 2006?

And even if you were, you wouldn't have been able to read the RPs, apparently.

[bad guy™]

No....when I had my old PC I had no firewalls. Now, as you know I got into some trouble, and I was expelled from school on May 1. So there were only two other schools that I could attend. One was Serra Catholic, which is about $7,000 a year. The other was PA Cyber School, so I had to go there. And common sence says that School PCs are not going to let you go on innapropriate stuff.

However, I have a court date on December 13, and if all goes well, I will be able to get my old PC back soon after, so all should be well soon.

[Calvin]

there's always a way around firewalls. And t his place isn't like, "inappropriate" either really, so I fail to see how that would stop you from viewing the site. Although I remember JV mentioning your program only CENSORS words so you could still read rps.