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Post by Markw on Nov 10, 2007 9:46:50 GMT -5
I didn't want to break it up into two posts so it's on Freewebs, It's so long because it shows flashback from past RP's and Matches which relate to it eventually, it's basically about Williams life mostly present but a tiny bit of past www.freewebs.com/david-williams-ss-battle-royal-rp/index.htmNot the best in the world and a little too long IMO, I got carried away with it a bit  I only did it today because I've been busy and will be busy later  (Hence me doing some Flashbacks of things I've already written, bits of RP's and Matches ect. hope you bother to read it and enjoy it if you do so  |
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Post by Calvin on Nov 10, 2007 21:30:19 GMT -5
the fact that you say I'll only reply to your rp if you reply to mine just made me not want to reply in general, because that theory is flat out stupid...no offense.
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Post by Markw on Nov 11, 2007 2:32:03 GMT -5
the fact that you say I'll only reply to your rp if you reply to mine just made me not want to reply in general, because that theory is flat out stupid...no offense. No, if you reply i'll deffinatley reply to yours, I might anyway, where did I say only if you reply to mine? |
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Post by bad guy™ on Nov 12, 2007 12:50:50 GMT -5
Dude.....I am sorry. I really did not like this. And I will now tell you why. First and foremost.....I hate flashbacks. More importantly, I hate that you reposted an entire match in your RP. Now one thing with the flashbacks that worked, though only slightly was you reposting your RPs. Although you went a little overboard. Description....ehh, leaves a lot to be desired. Think about my Wiley Coyote comment I made to you Williams..... Where to improve: I hate this part. I really cannot tell you where to improve because I am not perfect. Sure there are things you can touch up on, but those things you could already be better than others at. So.... Overall....ehh....I think you will make it far just because no one is going to RP....lol but if everyone did, I would say top 10 definately. If that helps you at all.... |
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Post by Markw on Nov 12, 2007 12:53:53 GMT -5
Dude.....I am sorry. I really did not like this. And I will now tell you why. First and foremost.....I hate flashbacks. More importantly, I hate that you reposted an entire match in your RP. Now one thing with the flashbacks that worked, though only slightly was you reposting your RPs. Although you went a little overboard. Description....ehh, leaves a lot to be desired. Think about my Wiley Coyote comment I made to you Williams..... Where to improve: I hate this part. I really cannot tell you where to improve because I am not perfect. Sure there are things you can touch up on, but those things you could already be better than others at. So.... Overall....ehh....I think you will make it far just because no one is going to RP....lol but if everyone did, I would say top 10 definately. If that helps you at all.... Thank You, thats all I wanted a little evidence would help but thats good enough I'll rweply to your RP when it's up and your Fantasy Booking and I'm annoyed it took so long and so many PM's for you to say it was S*** cause without you saying that it'l never get better I know I went overboard with it so thank you and I'm sorry I was an ass ok  |
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Post by bad guy™ on Nov 12, 2007 12:58:36 GMT -5
I never said you will not get better. If you read what I say, I do say that you have gotten better, I just said that you will not win the BR. You are like CNN, you take things out of context. |
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Post by Markw on Nov 12, 2007 15:09:36 GMT -5
I never said you will not get better. If you read what I say, I do say that you have gotten better, I just said that you will not win the BR. You are like CNN, you take things out of context. No your taking it out of context I said if you hadn't replied saying it was S*** I wouldn't get any better I'm in a bad mood and I'm taking things a little over the top ok I'm annoyed i'm sorry if I'm acting stupid/anyoing  |
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Post by Markw on Nov 12, 2007 16:21:52 GMT -5
the fact that you say I'll only reply to your rp if you reply to mine just made me not want to reply in general, because that theory is flat out stupid...no offense. i've deleted it, sorry  |
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Post by Calvin on Nov 13, 2007 0:22:12 GMT -5
I never said you will not get better. If you read what I say, I do say that you have gotten better, I just said that you will not win the BR. You are like CNN, you take things out of context. This from the guy who thought the Calvin Lee challenge was serious. |
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Post by sonstuds on Nov 13, 2007 11:50:10 GMT -5
Meh. This was basically just a "best of David Williams". No offense, but majority of it was just reposting various RPs and segments, which got tiring after about the second flashback.
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Post by cureforthesickness on Nov 13, 2007 12:06:24 GMT -5
I agee
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Post by Revvie® on Nov 14, 2007 9:04:32 GMT -5
Meh. This was basically just a "best of David Williams". No offense, but majority of it was just reposting various RPs and segments, which got tiring after about the second flashback. EBR is right. |
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Post by cureforthesickness on Nov 14, 2007 10:31:55 GMT -5
this reminds me of the roleplay I wrote when someone was doing like 50 roleplays (I think Immune) just to have a big long roleplay with no point.
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Post by Markw on Nov 14, 2007 10:53:50 GMT -5
this reminds me of the roleplay I wrote when someone was doing like 50 roleplays (I think Immune) just to have a big long roleplay with no point. I've almost finish writing one that actually has a point |
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