Thunder
Main Eventer
WF 10 Year Member
WFWF Record: 59-60-1
Joined on: Aug 6, 2003 9:44:07 GMT -5
Posts: 2,941
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Post by Thunder on Oct 19, 2007 22:48:03 GMT -5
I wanted to do more here and expand on some of the stuff but I did have to rush to some degree. For rushing, I think it's not too bad.
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Post by sonstuds on Oct 20, 2007 9:02:56 GMT -5
A strange RP. I don't know if I could really go in and point out anything I particularly disliked or anything you did wrong. All I can really say is I found it a bit bland, and somehow, less character oriented then your other's. It was almost as if nothing new was really delivered, as weird as that sounds considering the context.
However, props on the dream thing. I'm glad I'm not the only one who apparently has realistic dreams that aren't all over the place. You read a lot of these dream sequences where random dwarfs appear and people start eating toast for no reason. It was nice to see you do it, I dunno, better than the majority.
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Post by kingkraig on Oct 20, 2007 9:12:21 GMT -5
That was fantastic and as Tony the Tiger would say it was great.
But is Robert the same Robert that was in EBR's RP? Cause that kind of ruins the perception I had of him.
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