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Post by createawrestler on Oct 22, 2007 12:13:12 GMT -5
I am the Create A WRESTLER!! YOU SHALL FEAR my reign of tear. i come to the wfwf for one reason and one reason only, fame, fortune, and the wfwf heavyweight title. you see, i see this OBO fellow and i see no threat. he is nothing to me.
camera zooms out
i am the create a WRESTLER! I come from Parts UNKNOWn and i come for the championship. I wear a zebra mask to hide my IDENITY. because i am myseteryous. i will win the battle royel and win the title at SUPERBRA. because i am like hulk hogan and watcha gonna do when these pithons run wild on you brotha?
camera zooms in as the church i am in explodes
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Post by createawrestler on Oct 22, 2007 12:15:56 GMT -5
oh, I forgot cuz i say
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Post by sonstuds on Oct 22, 2007 12:18:34 GMT -5
That was excellent.
The description was alright, but I think you explained everything well enough so that it kept me on the edge of my chair regardless.
But the dialogue was just...wow. I don't know if anything this year was as well articulated and intense as that. After reading that I know that Create-A-Wrestler wants to win the match. Just brilliant.
The only thing I can say is maybe don't mention the camera, but everything considered it's a small blip on a radar of perfection.
Almost flawless.
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Yukio Blaze
Main Eventer
WFWF Record: 58-54-03-02
Joined on: Dec 15, 2004 21:50:34 GMT -5
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Post by Yukio Blaze on Oct 22, 2007 12:27:14 GMT -5
I'm seriously locking this.
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