Loaded RP: Laughing matter

[dustinrenegade]

Vinson Evorett is in his large black truck listening to music trying to find a hotel, when he pulls out his cell phone and calls his girl freind/manager Brooke Hollister...

Brooke: Hi Vinson whats up?

Vinson: Hey babe, I cant find any hotels that have rooms, do you think I could Crash at your hotel room tonight?

Brooke: Hmm..haha..im sure we could work something out and you would have to deal with me and all of my Girl freinds.

Vinson: Im sure I can deal with it, I just need rest for my match comin' up, its gonna be crazy.

Brooke:(there is giggling in the back) Right baby, well ima have to let you go.

Vinson: Alright well see you in a lil' bit when I get over there.

Brooke: ok bye baby.

Vinson: Bye babe.
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Vinson arrives at Brookes Hotel room and knocks on the door. He can here can here Giggling in the room as Brooke opens the door...

Brooke: Hey Vinson come on in and ill tell you who everyone is.

Vinson: ok(he walks inside)

Brooke walks in front of Vinson...

Brooke: Now girls this is my boyfreind Vinson(she points at Vinson and he raises hand and gives a cheesy smile), Now Vinson this is Kate(she points to a girl sitting in a black leather chair)

Kate: HI!

Brooke: This is Jessica(she points to a girl sitting on one of the three beds)

Jessica: Hey!

Brooke: And last but not least Brandy(she points to a girl sitting on the floor watching a TV show)

Brandy: Thats me(she raises her hand)

Vinson: Well hey there everybody, I guess ill be stayin' here tonight.

Brooke: Well Vinson I said in order for you to stay we had to make a deal.

Vinson: Babe I thought that was a joke.

Brooke: Well it wasn't(she reaches in her pocket and pulls out a pink thong)

All the girls start laughing and Vinson stands with a goofy smile on his face.

Brooke: Well you are going to put this on and then you can stay.

Vinson: You're playing right?

Brooke: No baby, I'm not.(she put the thong to his chest and grabs his hand and drops it into his hand)

Brooke: The bathroom is over there(she points to a door on the other side of the room)

Kate: Vinson tonight you're going to be our little slut boy.

Brandy, Kate, and Brooke start laughing and Brooke pushes Vinson to the door and Kate gets up and opens the door and Brooke, Brandy, and Jessica push Vinson inside the bathroom and Vinson starts pushing the Door back open.

Brooke: Vinson if you want to stay you will come out of the bathroom wearing the thong.

Vinson: Babe come on.

Brooke: I mean it Vinson.

Jessica: Yea sexy legs.

The girls start laughing.

Vinson: Well damn it I have no choice..ill do it.

Brandy: You better.

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After a long period of cursing, sounds of falling and complaints of feeling violated Vinson walks out wearing nothing but the pink thong.

The girls laugh alot and Vinson stands laughing sarcastically.

Kate: Now spin around princess.

Brooke: Yea baby do a dance.

Vinson spins around and the girls keep laughing.

Vinson: ok you've had your fun now can I put my cloths on?

Brooke: HAHA no, not just yet.

Vinson: God damn it.

Jessica: talk dirty to us.

All the girls laugh.

Vinson: Are you serious.

Jessica: Yea.

Vinson: ok...uhh...I have a package for some dirty girls...

the girls keep laughing.

Brooke: More...

Vinson: Now that I learned all your names can I hear your Bra sizes?

The girls keep laughing and they all grab him and pull him down and beging putting on a Pink Bra on his chest and close it and pick him.

Jessica: I like your outfit.

the girls laugh.

Vinson: HAHA(sarcastically) now can I put my cloths on?

The girls get close together and start whispering the Brooke turns around...

Brooke: Well come here.

Vinson comes close to her and she hugs him and the girls say awww but Brandy opens the door and the girls throw him out side to the hallway and the girls shut and lock the door leaving Vinson outside wearing a pink thong and bra. Vinson Punches the door...

Vinson: Come on let me in...God damn it people will see me...HELLO COME ON NOW WE'VE HAD OUR FUN LET ME IN.

The girls do not let him and Vinson stands with his back to the door continuing to ask if he can come in until Thomas Brewington walks up in the Hallway...

Vinson: ITS NOT WHAT YOU THINK, LET ME EXPLAIN...

Before he can explain Brewington shoves Vinson down.

Brewington: I dont know about you but I plan on winning my match and insist you wise up and get serious if you plan on walking away from the match and not took away to be put in a coffin.

Brewington walks away with Vinson laying on the floor the girls open the door to find him laying on the ground.

Kate: Oh my god what happend?

Vinson: I dont want to talk about it.

Vinson stands up and walk in the room the girls laugh as they watch him pick out his weggie on the way to his bag to get his cloths on...

-OOC-
This is my first RP out of the house shows...Its supposed to be funny tell me what you think

[Kurt Burton: Script Doctor!]

Well... wow! That is the single most humiliating thing anyone has put their character through on here. Although I find it funny your character is being pushed around by girls. The Thomas Brewington bit was interesting. I guess the main thing is the lack of description. Do you people know how many different types of hotels there are? There are dirty dingy fleabags, your decent days in, mid-class holiday inn, high class Hilton, I mean come on. A little bit to set the scene would have been great. I liked your situational humor though. Good luck on your match.

[dustinrenegade]

xkaliburr said:

Well... wow! That is the single most humiliating thing anyone has put their character through on here. Although I find it funny your character is being pushed around by girls. The Thomas Brewington bit was interesting. I guess the main thing is the lack of description. Do you people know how many different types of hotels there are? There are dirty dingy fleabags, your decent days in, mid-class holiday inn, high class Hilton, I mean come on. A little bit to set the scene would have been great. I liked your situational humor though. Good luck on your match.

Thank you...this week was very entertaining to me, and I couldnt stop thinking, whoa this idea would be interesting...i never though about the hotels thing. I'll remember next time

[sonstuds]

You get my props for taking a creative idea, that frankly, no one would ever do. Admittedly, description and dialogue probably could have been written better, but it was entertaining and different. Kudos on that.

Though, my big complaint was the random appearance of Brewington, but at least there was a decent enough comedic pay off. Again, kudos on that.