FDS RP 2: Dont sh*t on a prophet!

[superbad]

[glow=red,2,300]Disarm you with a smile
And leave you like they left me here
To wither in denial
The bitterness of one who's left alone
Ooh, it is burned
Ooh, it is burned, burned, burned [/glow]

A white glow is shown over a hilltop. A motorized vehichle is heard in the distance, as a dirt bike is shown riden up the hill. Kamardo is shown getting off of it, and stares into the sunrise. He has a napsack on the back of his bike, he reaches into it, he first pulls out a bottle of water, then the same camcorder seen for weeks. He turns it on and takes a sip of water.

[glow=black,2,300]BLACK AND WHITE CAMCORDER VISION[/glow]

Kamardo takes a large and long gulp of water, then looks towards the camera.

Kamardo: For whatever reason, I was chosen for a shot at the Hardcore X title. At the same time I want this shot at glory and the Hardcore title, I am wondering how the hell I got here.

Kamardo takes a swig of water then looks towards the sunrise.

Kamardo: Was it the fact that I put heart and soul in all of my matches, and they knew that I'd put the most into this? Was it that they know how much this means to me? Or do they want to see me get my ass pounded in front of a nationwide, no scrap that, international audience? Because they know that I am willing to hurt myself so I can give fans a hell of a show.

The K looks up, then stares out to forward, not bringing to attention what he is staring at.

Kamardo: I watched a movie the other day, similar to the position I'm in right now. American History X was the name of it. I felt alot like the character Danny, who, like me, got to a certain point of his life, and wasn't sure how he got there. Sure, he was killed in the end, but he was at that point where he didnt know what was next. That gets me to think, what's next for me? Will I grow to bigger and better things, stay where I am, or get killed by society? That all leads back to how I got here. If I knew, I might have a clue about my future. Thing is I may never know.

Kamardo takes a small drink of water, and looks straight into the camera.

Kamardo: And here I am, talking to a ing camera, on a hill. Do I have no life, or do I just love wrestling THIS much? This is my life. I couldn't give two ****s about where I will be. Though I may not know how I got here, I know I'm proud of it. That's why I'll make a ing show, not just for buisness, but for everyone who is like me. From the kids, who want to do what I did, grow up and work hard at something. And even all the adult fans who know it may not be too late for their dream. This used to be a dream for me, now it is a reality. I will show my reality, and prove that I need to be where I am, and stay here!

Kamardo shuts off the camera, puts everything back in his napsack, and gets on his bike.

Kamardo: The day Charles Manson gets out of jail, is the day I give up my dreams.

He drives off, and he knows that this will be one hell of a fight.

OOC: I liked this rp. This is one that I didnt plan like my others, this just came to me, which made me feel good because I got everything out. I tried not to drift off in this one, but I may have once or twice. So either give me good reviews or give me advice, because there is nothing I hate more than some bitch going "OMG TEH RP SUCKZ!!11!!!!1!!"

[Calvin]

I'm pretty sure Thunder will give you the lecture he's given to pretty much every new comer this week. Thunder, take it away.

[Thunder]

realscan said:

I've said this before, and I'm sure others have too, but it's better to spend more time making one great RP instead of 2 that won't be as good.

realscan said:

It's been said to death before, but it's always better to spend more time on making one RP great instead of posting two mediocre ones.

[superbad]

so This is mediocre? I didnt feel like my last one was good enough, as I only planned on making one, so I wouldnt have to hear that again. Still, why is it always when someone does two rps, both suck in comparason to 1?

[Thunder]

I didn't say this one was mediocre, I was just doing what Calvin told me to do.

[superbad]

than can you give me actual advice instead of just repeating what calvin says?

I dont try to do two half assed rps. I tried to do one good rp, but I didnt like it, so I did this one. If the limit was 10 rps per show, I wouldnt do 10 rps, id do 2, maybe 3, even 1 if i only had time for that. its quality not quantity, so chew on that, since I usually dont do 2 rps because I get heat for it from people like You, Calvin, and Obo.

[Calvin]

the whole thing is you keep the rp to yourself unti you like it. Don't post a rp you don't like....Unless you have to. That way, if you get spare time you can add or take away things...to make it better rather then posting right away, realize you hate the rp....and posting an all new one.

[sonstuds]

superbad said:

its quality not quantity, so chew on that, since I usually dont do 2 rps because I get heat for it from people like You, Calvin, and Obo.

That's exactly why it's kind of frowned upon to be doing multiple roleplays. If you weren't feeling your first then I don't understand why you'd post it instead of starting over unless you had time issues.

I'm not totally against doing two roleplays a week if there's a point, but both were similar. There's really nothing that truly separates them or makes either stand out from one another. Instead of coke he had water (and it got repetitive how it seemed every description break was "he takes a sip of water"), he talked about his passion for wrestling again, he ends with a mention of Charles Manson.

[superbad]

its kind of a gimmick, the charles manson thing if no one has understood yet