Post by Markw on Jul 18, 2007 16:57:03 GMT -5
FDS RP After Shock
David lay slumped in the corner of the padded chairs in the Pub slowly taking a small sip of beer. David shook his head in pain, still his head was in pain but now he was also angry he looked up his face was bright red with fury, he still couldn’t believe he had lost. He caught a glimpse of a thin man walking towards him, but David’s vision seemed blurry, the man slumped down in the chair opposite him, he was clutching a glass of Ale in his thin claw like hands. He placed the drink on the table, the man looked at David his eyes shining like Fire. David’s vision was now getting better and he could tell the man was looking at him but he still couldn’t make out who he was, he waited for the man to speak but he didn’t. David went to speak but no words came out of his mouth. A few minutes passed and David’s vision came back to him he could see who the man was now, he had changed a bit since there last encounter all those years ago but he could still tell who it was, the man smiled
Man: “I guess you remember me then”
David was still silent he wanted to speak, he wanted to ask so many questions but he couldn’t, he could no longer even look at him
Man: “So your not going to talk to me then I figured you might not, you never let anything go”
David bit his lip trying to stop himself from talking
Man: “I hear you’ve got into Wrestling”
David took a sip of beer to calm himself down, he looked at the man for a few minutes. He had long white hair that was tangled together and he was holding a long walking stick, which he had laid down by the side of the table
Man: “I’m sorry”
David looked down at the ground he had almost forgot him, deep down he had known who he was, a teardrop trickled down David’s face
Man: “I didn’t leave because of you and I came back because, well I missed you”
David managed to start to speak
David: “well you managed to cock it up a second time didn’t you”
There was silence, nothing but silence, minutes passed that seemed like Hours it seemed for ever that there would be nothing but silence. A young Woman walked up to him, she was about thirty four years she was of small build and was carrying a glass of orange in her hand, she place it down next to him and sat down.
Woman: “Who’s this Dad”
David looked up at her, his face frozen in shock. He took a sip of beer and interrupted as the man went to speak.
David: ” Oh My names Dave I’m an old friend of, your err… Dad“
David took a long sip of beer, the woman started to drink at her orange juice a few minutes passed as she and the man talked, all of a sudden the conversation stopped and she went of to the toilet David was furious.
David: “Nice Little trip out with your precious little daughter eh Dad!”
Man: “Look Dave….”
David: “No you look, you walked out on me, you decided you would come to Brazil set up a little Family and forget about me, well thanks Dad. I mean it wouldn’t have been that hard to track me down I’ve been on TV the past couple of weeks, you must of heard my name at least at some point and you could have tracked me down, at least you would have if you had cared”
Man: “It wasn’t that simple, I did want to get in contact I really did but you see well me and the girl’s mum had been arguing and she and I had just split up, it was a hard time and well I just didn’t find the time”
David: “Yeah Right”
Man: “Don’t say anything to her, I’ll be back in a second”
The Man went to the toilet as his step sister came out and sat next to him.
David: “So what’s your name”
The Woman seemed shy but she smiled and said
Woman: “Tracy, my names Tracy”
David: “Well nice to meet you Tracy, how is Mark getting on now”
David was referring to his and her Dad
Tracy: “Oh he’s doing great he runs his own business now, with Mum of course but she’s got a meeting at the moment”
David smiled and took another sip of beer
Tracy: “So how did you meet Dad”
David: “Oh long story our paths just seemed to cross but he was always there for me he was like the father I never had” David said trying to hide the sarcasm in his voice.
Tracy: “That sounds like Dad he was always there for us”
Dave: “Us?”
Tracy: “Oh me and my brother Dan, we were twins at birth”
Their Dad walked towards them
Dad: “So are you to getting along ok”
Tracy: “Yeah fine Dave was just telling me how you were always there for him like a family figure and we talked about your business with Mum”
Dave: “I hear you’re a great business man”
He smiled at his Dad and took a sip of beer
Dad: “Yes well we had better be off “
Dave: “Stay in touch”
David passed the man a note with his number on it and an envelope
Dad: “What’s this”
Dave: “Oh nothing just open it when you get home”
Dad: “we’ll… erm, Thanks and bye”
Dave: “Yeah see you D…. Mark and you too Tracy”
Tracy: “Bye’
The two left and David slumped back down into the chair he now regretted giving him the number and regretted giving him the tickets even more. He took a small sip of beer but the glass was almost empty now, David’s phone began to rang he flicked it up and it was Dad he smiled and flipped the lid down again putting into his bag.
David: “Shut Up”
David grabbed a brown bag out from his rucksack he unscrewed the whisky bottle top and gulped the fiery liquid down he then slammed it down.
David: “Rodriguez, once that name would have sent a shiver down my back, once I would of thought oh no me v him not any more! I mean look at you, in fact you know what, I shouldn’t be wasting my breath on you. But you know what I’m going to say, I’m going to say this, the Fans are all that count and I’m going to give them what they want, I’m going to kick your ass in Brazil, I’d kick your ass in Mexico, I’d kick your ass in Canada, I’d kick your ass in England! I’m going to kick your ass wherever this f***ing tour takes us because that is what the people want and I’m going to give these people what they really want, I’m going to show them why they liked me in the first place. You see I lost to Possessed Child and I hear the fans have lost faith in me, well I’m going to show them tonight that Veni, Vedi, Vici didn’t mean anything, I’m going to show the fans that it was a fluke, I’m going to show them that I am still worthy of the Title and then Possessed Child I’m coming for it, and this time Dane won’t get in my Way”
OOC: It’s not up to the quality I would have liked. I have triple duty for the first time ever it, may become quadruple and the most I’ve done before is double, so I think I know what needs improving and I’m just sorry this isn’t as good as I would have hoped. But whatever reply if you want and think it will help
David lay slumped in the corner of the padded chairs in the Pub slowly taking a small sip of beer. David shook his head in pain, still his head was in pain but now he was also angry he looked up his face was bright red with fury, he still couldn’t believe he had lost. He caught a glimpse of a thin man walking towards him, but David’s vision seemed blurry, the man slumped down in the chair opposite him, he was clutching a glass of Ale in his thin claw like hands. He placed the drink on the table, the man looked at David his eyes shining like Fire. David’s vision was now getting better and he could tell the man was looking at him but he still couldn’t make out who he was, he waited for the man to speak but he didn’t. David went to speak but no words came out of his mouth. A few minutes passed and David’s vision came back to him he could see who the man was now, he had changed a bit since there last encounter all those years ago but he could still tell who it was, the man smiled
Man: “I guess you remember me then”
David was still silent he wanted to speak, he wanted to ask so many questions but he couldn’t, he could no longer even look at him
Man: “So your not going to talk to me then I figured you might not, you never let anything go”
David bit his lip trying to stop himself from talking
Man: “I hear you’ve got into Wrestling”
David took a sip of beer to calm himself down, he looked at the man for a few minutes. He had long white hair that was tangled together and he was holding a long walking stick, which he had laid down by the side of the table
Man: “I’m sorry”
David looked down at the ground he had almost forgot him, deep down he had known who he was, a teardrop trickled down David’s face
Man: “I didn’t leave because of you and I came back because, well I missed you”
David managed to start to speak
David: “well you managed to cock it up a second time didn’t you”
There was silence, nothing but silence, minutes passed that seemed like Hours it seemed for ever that there would be nothing but silence. A young Woman walked up to him, she was about thirty four years she was of small build and was carrying a glass of orange in her hand, she place it down next to him and sat down.
Woman: “Who’s this Dad”
David looked up at her, his face frozen in shock. He took a sip of beer and interrupted as the man went to speak.
David: ” Oh My names Dave I’m an old friend of, your err… Dad“
David took a long sip of beer, the woman started to drink at her orange juice a few minutes passed as she and the man talked, all of a sudden the conversation stopped and she went of to the toilet David was furious.
David: “Nice Little trip out with your precious little daughter eh Dad!”
Man: “Look Dave….”
David: “No you look, you walked out on me, you decided you would come to Brazil set up a little Family and forget about me, well thanks Dad. I mean it wouldn’t have been that hard to track me down I’ve been on TV the past couple of weeks, you must of heard my name at least at some point and you could have tracked me down, at least you would have if you had cared”
Man: “It wasn’t that simple, I did want to get in contact I really did but you see well me and the girl’s mum had been arguing and she and I had just split up, it was a hard time and well I just didn’t find the time”
David: “Yeah Right”
Man: “Don’t say anything to her, I’ll be back in a second”
The Man went to the toilet as his step sister came out and sat next to him.
David: “So what’s your name”
The Woman seemed shy but she smiled and said
Woman: “Tracy, my names Tracy”
David: “Well nice to meet you Tracy, how is Mark getting on now”
David was referring to his and her Dad
Tracy: “Oh he’s doing great he runs his own business now, with Mum of course but she’s got a meeting at the moment”
David smiled and took another sip of beer
Tracy: “So how did you meet Dad”
David: “Oh long story our paths just seemed to cross but he was always there for me he was like the father I never had” David said trying to hide the sarcasm in his voice.
Tracy: “That sounds like Dad he was always there for us”
Dave: “Us?”
Tracy: “Oh me and my brother Dan, we were twins at birth”
Their Dad walked towards them
Dad: “So are you to getting along ok”
Tracy: “Yeah fine Dave was just telling me how you were always there for him like a family figure and we talked about your business with Mum”
Dave: “I hear you’re a great business man”
He smiled at his Dad and took a sip of beer
Dad: “Yes well we had better be off “
Dave: “Stay in touch”
David passed the man a note with his number on it and an envelope
Dad: “What’s this”
Dave: “Oh nothing just open it when you get home”
Dad: “we’ll… erm, Thanks and bye”
Dave: “Yeah see you D…. Mark and you too Tracy”
Tracy: “Bye’
The two left and David slumped back down into the chair he now regretted giving him the number and regretted giving him the tickets even more. He took a small sip of beer but the glass was almost empty now, David’s phone began to rang he flicked it up and it was Dad he smiled and flipped the lid down again putting into his bag.
David: “Shut Up”
David grabbed a brown bag out from his rucksack he unscrewed the whisky bottle top and gulped the fiery liquid down he then slammed it down.
David: “Rodriguez, once that name would have sent a shiver down my back, once I would of thought oh no me v him not any more! I mean look at you, in fact you know what, I shouldn’t be wasting my breath on you. But you know what I’m going to say, I’m going to say this, the Fans are all that count and I’m going to give them what they want, I’m going to kick your ass in Brazil, I’d kick your ass in Mexico, I’d kick your ass in Canada, I’d kick your ass in England! I’m going to kick your ass wherever this f***ing tour takes us because that is what the people want and I’m going to give these people what they really want, I’m going to show them why they liked me in the first place. You see I lost to Possessed Child and I hear the fans have lost faith in me, well I’m going to show them tonight that Veni, Vedi, Vici didn’t mean anything, I’m going to show the fans that it was a fluke, I’m going to show them that I am still worthy of the Title and then Possessed Child I’m coming for it, and this time Dane won’t get in my Way”
OOC: It’s not up to the quality I would have liked. I have triple duty for the first time ever it, may become quadruple and the most I’ve done before is double, so I think I know what needs improving and I’m just sorry this isn’t as good as I would have hoped. But whatever reply if you want and think it will help
