The Ultimate... VVV PPV RP

[Yukio Blaze]

“Cherish your visions and your dreams as they are the children of your soul; the blueprints of your ultimate achievements.” - Napoleon Hill

“The ultimate tragedy is not the oppression and cruelty by the bad people but the silence over that by the good people.” - Martin Luther King JR.




The buzz going around the locker room is this whole EBR trying to take Yukio out, along with the Tag Team Titles. You have EBR and his mystery partner telling Blaze that his time is almost done as champion, but boy are they completely wrong. He was wrong from the get go that he can control the man that is Yukio Blaze, who isnt easily persuaded. Its time for someone to step up and draw the real battle lines because this will be a dragged out war with many casualties, but there will be one man left standing and he then shall be called the Ultimate because he was the only one to lead army against a army that was thought to be unstoppable............

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At the WFWF west headquarters in California, is new WFWF reporter John Jackson. He is getting ready by looking at his cards, while the camera men preps up the camera, microphones, and other electrical items. The producer says that the time is almost ready and he opens the door and Yukio Blaze comes in with a smile on his face. He shakes everyones hand and Jackson is a little nervous and his hand is shaking, but Yukio gives him a pat on the shoulder and shakes his hand/ Jackson takes a seat in the chair, as does Yukio and the producer gives the countdown, 5......4......3 the producer gives the signal and the cameras start to roll.


Conscience

This is going to be really good. I can feel it....


This is a man who has a very detailed past in the WFWF. He has faced men like Obo, Reverend Shadow, Justin Tyme and just about everyman that has stepped in a WFWF ring from early 2005 until now. He is set to defend the WFWF Tag Team Titles at the next WFWF pay-per-view, Veni Vidi Vici against EBR and his mystery opponent. Some has said that his chances arent that great this time, but hey what do I know. I'm new WFWF reporter John Jackson, and this is the wrestling interview that everyone is talking about. So Yukio, what is going on with you ?


The producer throws Yukio a bottle of water. He breaks the seal and takes a swig of it, but he starts to talk. Yukio screws the lid back on and he starts to talk.[/b]


Damn, I dont even get a basic hello Blaze or how you doing. You have made your first mistake of being a news type of guy. Just remember to say that to everyone or else you may get canned, but then you would probably end up as one of those medicine types like EBR. I hear he loves the steroids, but whatever. You know what I'm talking about, they all drink the cough syrup over there instead of the grape kool aid, but then you think about it. You just think about it.


You are a damn hypocrite to everything and everyone around here. I cant take this anymore because I'm offended and I dont want to be here anymore. F*ck you Blaze. F*ck the whole WFWF company, and F*ck everyone in this room, I F*cking quit.


Jackson starts taking off all of his microphones and he throws his cards down. He goes to lean over and thats when Yukio lands a stiff left to him, knocking him to the ground and he appears to be knocked out. The producer shrugs her shoulders, the camera men just laugh about it and it looks like Yukio is going to interview himself.


Conscience

Damn my hand is in pain. That jackass has a strong jaw.


Now, before I was abruptly interrupted by that ass clown, I was talking about this whole Blaze vs EBR feud. I'm liking this because each of us are fighting like chickens with there heads cut off. Not many men will admit to that, but I am. EBR wants me to just give up one of my belts and he would just leave me alone. I pondered this for a while, but I decided not to give in. I can run with everyone, unlike some and then you have the him bringing in a partner to try to destroy me further. I really cant take them seriously just because EBR used to be partners with Alex Sean and Calvin Lee. How many times did they put me down and how many times did they just claim me as a blip on the WFWF radar. I've come here with a agenda and its to be known for giving EBR the greatest beat down he has ever felt. I've been put in a title match against EBR and I will come out on top.


Yukio gets up from his chair and he signals the camera man to follow him out of the door. Yukio and the camera man exits the room to show a big hallway lined up with photos. Yukio walks over to the pictures and starts looking at each one of them stopping at certain ones.


Yukio and the camera takes a few steps to the next photo of the mystery guy. The face is blurred out along with the rest of his profile, but the shadow of this character is very striking.


The shadow on this mystery guy looks like a clean cut little whiteboy, but I'll have to tell the whole world that I'm a little scared by him because he has a very strange demeanor, he has been known to mess some people up and I believe he is a part of a mob type of family, that or possibly a hobo type of character. I love the suspense in this guy, but I just cant let him give me the kiss of death because I'm going to be the one to deliver the death blow to you. You wont even see if coming when I take care of you. What I do to you will make The Sopranos finale look like a old episode of Mister Rogers Neighborhood. You look and act badass, but you are truly a child at heart and if I slap you once on your ass, you will cry like the day that you came from your mommas belly. I'm sorry but a contract has been put out on you and I intend to be the one to collect on it. You are going down in a Blaze and you will have a little Glory, but not to much.


Yukio then runs down the end off the hall towards the lobby and he starts gazing at the photo. The camera man has yet to reach there and he is having a hard time getting to Blaze, but he finally does, but he is breathing heavily.


You alright man. I dont want your ass to have a heart attack on me. Just take a breather right here and lean up against this. I'll take the camera and finish this up.


The camera man leans up against the wall as Yukio takes the camera and he focuses on the WFWF Wall Of Champions and more specific, he is zeroed on EBR.


Look at that face, thats face is a face that only a child molester would enjoy. I look at you and I kinda snicker at your name because I think of Catwoman with blood mixed it. If you dont get that comment then I'm going after you and hit you in the head with a tack hammer. I will not have you as the tag team champion by the end of Sunday night because I'm going to show you what I do best. I cant stand a loser superstar holding a championship because they are just second rate. EBR and company will not hold the titles because I've brought both of these belts back up to the serious title that they used to be and they are no longer joke title. EBR will be a fitting name for you because I'm going to take you to the extreme, make you bleed, then force you into retirement, and I'll be the one standing with the gold high in the air while your laying on your back.


The camera man finally gets his breath back and he takes the camera back. Yukio takes the EBR photo and he throws it to the ground breaking the glass of the frame. He picks up the picture and he reaches into his pocket and takes out a lighter.


EBR and the mystery guy is more of a threat than anything the WFWF has to offer and thats why I'm going to take to both out in a blink of a eye. You both could be good, but not good enough. EBR, this photo is all that you will leave with when your tenure is done here and then you mean nothing. I'm the only one trying to make a difference in the WFWF Tag Team scene and I'm going to do that by first winning the match at Triple V. I'm the Ultimate and everyone that steps in front of me will go down in flames.......


With that said, Yukio takes the EBR picture and sets in on fire. He places it onto the broken glass as he signals for the camera man to cut and he does........fade to black



He is the Ultimate indeed. No one will be able to take him out, I can just feel it. He needs to be the one to change things up in this match where EBR has this history and the advantage. Yukio has the ball and with three seconds left on the clock, he must pull of the winning shot to be known as the Ultimate...........[/b][/i]



“It is your work in life that is the ultimate seduction.” - Pablo Picasso

“Goals are a means to an end, not the ultimate purpose of our lives. They are simply a tool to concentrate our focus and move us in a direction. The only reason we really pursue goals is to cause ourselves to expand and grow. Achieving goals by themselves will never make us happy in the long term; it's who you become, as you overcome the obstacles necessary to achieve your goals, that can give you the deepest and most long-lasting sense of fulfillment.” - Anthony Robbins[/center]

[Yukio Blaze]

I had some free time and I just decided to write another rp. It only took me about 45 minutes to whip it up.

[Calvin]

So, it looks like EBR was correct. He'll know what I mean when he reads this.

NEVER NEVER EVER!!! Attack a interviewer. I HATE when people do that. Totally ruins the flow for one, shows weakness and cowardness for two, and three, it's just meaningless. What are you going to accomplish by beating a camera man? Like come on.

Also, I don't think a face talksl ike this:

"Damn, I dont even get a basic hello Blaze or how you doing. You have made your first mistake of being a news type of guy. Just remember to say that to everyone or else you may get canned, but then you would probably end up as one of those medicine types like EBR. I hear he loves the steroids, but whatever. You know what I'm talking about, they all drink the cough syrup over there instead of the grape kool aid, but then you think about it. You just think about it."

That's the talk of a heel and not a face in my eyes.

I really don't think a second rp was needed. All this kinda tells me, is you thought you were beaten, so you quickly whipped up a second rp to try to match EBR's one rp, but I could be wrong. Either way, this rp is no where near as good as your other one you wrote this week.

[sonstuds]

Honestly, that was pretty bad considering what you're capable of putting out.

There was no real consistency or purpose here. You essentially said the exact same thing you said in your previous roleplay, only a different setting and not as good.

You start off with it as an interview, which could have been interesting, but for some reason you kill that within the first two paragraphs for no apparent reason and anything you had before that ends up being pointless and filler. You start with something you rarely, if ever do, then just squash that and do another monologue. As Calvin mentioned, beating up an interviewer is lame. I mean, you've been in the WFWF for like three years. I hate to throw in a condescending "you should know better", but you seriously should.

The general idea here is that it's you taking shots at EBR and whoever the mystery partner is, which is fine, except there's nothing there. You could literally replace "EBR" with any other name in the WFWF and it would probably still work and apply (sans the name thing). It's all just so vague.

Your character development was pretty strange in this. You basically just became a full fledged heel, though I'm unaware if that was intentional. You even mention the hypocrisy in the roleplay, yet you never advance on that.

And again, you go on about E trying to take the titles away from Blaze, yet never bringing up anything E said on the last FDS, which is one of the main stories of the match.

Lastly, burning a picture is a lame, stereotypical, and clichéd form of symbolism.

The only thing I can really say I liked about this was how you didn't use the conscience and red text much. But even when you did use the red text it was almost verbatim what was said in your other RP.

I can respect the effort, but it comes off as a case of quantity over quality.