Thunder
Main Eventer
WF 10 Year Member
WFWF Record: 59-60-1
Joined on: Aug 6, 2003 9:44:07 GMT -5
Posts: 2,941
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Post by Thunder on Jul 7, 2007 15:53:15 GMT -5
I'm happy with the way this turned out. This time I didn't do it from Thunder's POV just because it really didn't seem to work that way. The message at the end is something I normally don't do and didn't plan to, but at the last second I got some ideas to use. Anyway, feedback is appreciated.
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Post by sonstuds on Jul 9, 2007 13:10:20 GMT -5
Probably your best roleplay to date, and thus far, one of the best roleplays of the week I'd say.
Excellent story telling. No real complaints from me. The interview part was well done, and while I thought it'd work better if you had included a setting, the monologue against JD was pretty good and the last sentence ended it pretty strongly. As many people will tell you, the first and last sentences of roleplays tend to be the hardest, and you were really able to make it work.
It's nice to see you get the International title. I've liked your work since I started reading roleplays around February.
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Post by thesouthsidekid on Jul 9, 2007 18:36:20 GMT -5
Thunder, this RP was one of the best rp's you have done since I've been here, and I feel bad that I couldn't get an rp up before the deadline, I even asked for an extension because I had to work late, and still couldn't finish. But, you are not going to get a no show off me, I'm still going to put an rp out. If you do win, it won't be because I didn't put out an rp. You aren't going to get a no show from me.
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