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Post by Deleted on Oct 28, 2015 11:51:14 GMT -5
Threw this together quickly. I like it.
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Post by screech on Oct 28, 2015 23:13:52 GMT -5
First off, I gotta say it's cool to see graphics still being posted here even though it's mostly dead. I used to post on here back around 2002-2007ish and we had amazing designers and even had a graphic battle league. It was awesome. We also had a lot of people around to offer good, constructive criticism and I, myself, learned from guys like Kliquid me giving advice. It's too bad this board isn't like that anymore.
As for your graphic, I think it's a very nice concept that would look a lot more professional with a few very easy tweaks:
- The size is a bit wonky. I would stretch your canvas vertically about 15% or so. - In doing this, I would keep all of the text down towards the bottom but crop everything in a little closer away from the edges and lining them up perfectly even across. The WWE Network logo is almost touching the bottom of the graphic while the AT&T logo on the other side is clearly placed a little higher up while both are a little too close to the left and right edges as well. I would move them inward slightly and even both up to the height of the date and location text, while also collectively raising all 3 a little bit higher than that to give it a little bit of black space at the bottom. - The cut on the Wrestlemania logo seems to be slightly off. Using the lasso tool or polygonal lasso can help you cut out straight even lines. It also seems to be off center. - Lastly, the main thing I don't like about the two photos is how they don't match in their respective effects. Sting looks bright and slightly blown out with a legacy contrast effect, while Undertaker has more of a monochromatic look to him with a sharp, dark contrast effect. I prefer the look of Taker. I think if you matched this effect with Sting, it look look awesome. I would also touch up Sting's face with the sharpen tool. To top it all off, I think it would look incredible if you blended a gradient of the WM32 colors over their faces.
Overall I think it's a great concept and I love the design concept and even the font choice for the date and location text. I think a few tweaks would really make it a great graphic. Nice work man!
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Post by HVMMONS on Oct 30, 2015 12:45:18 GMT -5
^ I'd be all over a GBL.
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Post by A-Rob on Oct 30, 2015 13:10:25 GMT -5
Looks great!
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Post by ¡Twist Of Lime Green Jello! on Nov 9, 2015 3:37:22 GMT -5
Very simple but effective poster. One thing that I instantly noticed that bothered me is that Taker is obviously behind Sting yet his image is bigger. Taker should be shrunk down to give it a more realistic look. I'm liking the warm look. Normally you wouldn't have a warmer looking image with those two but it does work.
The bottom text looks super professional too, spaced nicely apart and centered.
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