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Post by Deleted on Aug 30, 2014 18:33:09 GMT -5
"So, will someone face LKJosh (impromptu name) at the next PPV?"Tag Team Championship #1 ContendershipZaydsberg vs. Jack Zaydsberg: Jack: i.minus.com/ibzbKFw3Uz3LAS.gifHow to vote on matches No polls or bad replies. Your vote will only and only count if you do the following: 1) State the username of the person you are voting for. (should I even have to say this?) 2) You must give reason on why you have voted this person as the winner. Could be anything from smoother animation, to most creative. However you need to compare with the other animations in the match. Put thought into your votes, don't just say who you are voting and leave a sentence, put some effort in. 3) Forum status must be above Jobber If you cannot complete these simple rules, then your vote won't count and will be deleted on the spot, no exceptions.
Note: Alot of users like to get a mark out of 10, but I can't force you to give a mark. Just take it to consideration when voting to make a mark to compare each animation in the match.
If a title match ends in a draw, the champion retains.VOTING ENDS IN 48 HOURS WINNER OF MATCH PICKS TAG PARTNER FOR NEXT PPV
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ace
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Post by ace on Aug 30, 2014 19:13:17 GMT -5
Zaydsberg: It was alright for what it is, not really a move, but it was smooth, a bit slow and stiff, a big improvement from your earlier few. Good Job.
Jack: Glad to see you are still animating, The lighting was the biggest problem, try to turn that down a bit so its not so bright. It was a bit choppy in mid air but had a good flow otherwise, the reaction was good too. Nice job.
Vote: Jack.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 30, 2014 19:50:39 GMT -5
Zadysberg: It's not bad for one of your first animations, I presume. It's really stiff. Just look at other animations and see how they do movements. You want to capture the actual move, rather than have ultra stiff movements. Work on string as well.
Jack: Not bad at all. I would have liked to see Evan have more of a knee-bend and lift off, as well as more elbow joint movement. I thought the move was executed well, it was stiff in some places, but it was better than your opponent's.
Vote: Jack
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Post by Cooperman on Aug 30, 2014 20:07:46 GMT -5
Zaydsberg : It actually was pretty smooth for one of your first anis. The figures were really stiff though which made it look unrealistic, so make sure to bend the joints before taking every single pic next time. Just keep on practicing and you'll get the hang of it in no time.
Jack : It had a decent overall flow. The impact and reaction were alright, and the SSP itself wasn't too bad. It was just a bit choppy/stiff in places but nothing biggie. Also, try to fix your lighting as it looks too bright - you might want to reduce your light sources or something. Nice to see you're still around man.
Vote goes to Jack.
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spiritjd33
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Post by spiritjd33 on Aug 31, 2014 4:28:58 GMT -5
Zaydsberg: This animation flowed nice, but it's stiff and the camera angle change kinda disrupts it a bit...2.5/10
Jack: The lighting glare caught my attention. But, Evan flowed nicely and Seth and Evan had a nice reaction. I think Evan was a bit stiff in midair (like moved his legs a little more and put his arms back, like what he actually does.) String stood out, but it didn't really bother me much...4.5/10
Vote: Jack
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Post by Colter on Aug 31, 2014 20:25:03 GMT -5
Zaydsberg: Hmmm. I'd magine this is one of your first animations and its not too bad for a first. It was fine until the actual chairshot and then Carlito froze stiff like a block of ice. Giving him a follow through would've definitely helped this animation. The reaction could've used a bit more. Work on moving those joints and stiffness.
Jack: Nice ani. Evan probably could have used more of a knee bend to make it look like he launches into the SSP (if that makes sense), try to fix that lighting glare, too. It seemed kinda choppy after the impact, but it wasn't a huge problem. Good job.
Vote goes to Jack.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 31, 2014 22:03:15 GMT -5
Zaydsberg: The animation was smooth in parts but didn't feature a continual flow of smooth movement, some parts were good then others were fidgety. Joint movement was pretty good until the actual chair shot where both figures lacked a lot of movement, Primo should've extended his arms in the fall and Carlito should've thrown the chair or put it to the side instead of keeping the same position once hitting. Impact was good, I liked Primo's little bounce upon hitting the mat, the rope bounce was good too. Lighting was alright but the camera fidgeted a bit during the animation. 2.5/10 Jack: The animation had a pretty good flow but it wasn't smooth. Joint movement by Bourne in the mid air part was alright but the elbows always stayed in the same position until Bourne landed and his arms extended back out, I was disappointed to not see Rollins moving around on the ringmat as he stayed completely stagnatory. Impact was largely non-existent in the sense of how Bourne landed and Rollins reacted to it but the addition of the rope bounce was nice. Reaction was very disappointing as Rollins just rolled over and didn't show being impacted at all by the move. Lighting was alright but I saw some string and a camera fidget. 3/10 Vote: Jack
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Jamie
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Post by Jamie on Sept 1, 2014 6:24:33 GMT -5
Zaydsberg - Very simple move. For a first animation, pretty good. The move was sort of stiff, remember to move the joints a little bit in every frame. It seemed pretty smooth. The fall looked a little odd with no impact really. Reaction was pretty unrealistic and looked quite odd. Flow was a tad off with some frames showing movements and others not. Good effort though! 1.5/10
Jack - Good stuff Jack! Your lighting is really annoying, I hate the large glaring light in the corner. The string is really noticeable and sort of bugs me. A bit more of a bend on the rope would've helped from Bourne, but joint movements were pretty solid throughout. Saw a nice amount of pictures and a nice flow. Got a little fast near the end, but only a tad. Impact looked alright, could've been stronger. Rollins was pretty stiff, but I loved his turn. Reaction could've also been a bit heavier. A bigger rope bounce would've helped heaps as well. Overall, very solid animation. 5/10
WINNER - Jack
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zaydsberg
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Post by zaydsberg on Sept 1, 2014 15:15:08 GMT -5
good job jack i really liked your annim thank you guys for the advices
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