Jamie
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Post by Jamie on Jul 12, 2014 6:04:38 GMT -5
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DIESEL
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Post by DIESEL on Jul 12, 2014 9:57:19 GMT -5
Nice job.
I feel that the running was a little weird. The lighting was a little off to me, but was OK. The shadows were also a little annoying. I liked the impact, but maybe add a little more of a reaction by Slater. I liked the rope bounce. Also liked the taunt.
Nice job Jamie.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 12, 2014 10:34:37 GMT -5
One thing you've never grown out of doing since I've watched your animations, is get the amount of frames right. The animation while it did have decent movements was slowed down by the lack of frames. The running was strange and almost as if Bray was sliding across the mat while moving his legs. Brays jump was really choppy and it didn't flow well at all with the running. And the senton was choppy and fidgety in mid-air as well. The rope bounce wasn't the best as it wasn't consistent, and the ropes just kinda were all over the place. Slater didn't have much of a reaction and you definitely could have done more there. All in all your movements aren't bad, but you need to work on frames. Nice effort Jamie, you'll get there eventually.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 12, 2014 11:46:16 GMT -5
The running was a bit figity and it also looked weird. But other than that it looked nice.
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