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Post by Andeh on Nov 18, 2013 11:12:02 GMT -5
"More no shows than Scott Hall... Chico"
Intercontinental Championship #1 Contenders
Jamie Vs. Jairo Kurosaki Ichigo ECW Cooperman SuperBradOpig -Stip: Michinoku Driver
Jamie:
Jairo:
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Post by Jack on Nov 18, 2013 11:29:19 GMT -5
Jamie - Liked the fact you had build up in your animation, nice effort with that. I felt the lighting let you down a bit in stages here also. The running of the ropes looked pretty weird to me I have to say, pretty fidgety and the tack was annoying. Evan was pretty fidgety also. Right, I will rant now, the way he paused before he did the driver isn't the way the move is done, it is meant to be one lift up and lift down movement which really took away the realism for me. The start of the driver was pretty weird looking but I liked the end and the impact. 3.75/10
Jairo - Build up was simple here but pretty good. I felt both men were pretty slidy on the matt, so just work on lifting their feet of the matt. Pick up was pretty smooth here and had a nice flow, although I felt Bryan was a tad stiff in stages. The turn over and impact were both very nice, nice bounce back. Well Done. 7/10.
Easy win for Jairo.
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Post by [The Ukrainian One] Dimburuk on Nov 18, 2013 12:43:51 GMT -5
Jamie : i like how you tried to add a build-up, but it wasn't good enough. I suggest for now you try to practice on the move itself, like do a lot of tries to get it right, and maybe then add a build-up. The animation was kinda fidgety and stiff, especially the running looked weird, the Michinoku Driver itself looked kinda choppy, movements weren't smooth enough. The reaction was good.
Gyro : I like this, the punches looked simple yet effective, the pick up into driver was very well done and i like how fluid the move looks, but i noticed the tac on Miz's feet, but i like the impact and reaction, really well done. Nice job on this one.
Vote : Jairo, flowed way better and wasn't as fidgety as Jamie'
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Post by Scotty on Nov 18, 2013 16:20:21 GMT -5
JamieChung: The fact that his elbow pads are lower than his rist tap really bothers me. Also the pauses made it kind of weird. I'd try not use use as much tack as well. The moves were kind of slow and fidgety. The reaction was not that well also. Jiggyrhino: Nice smooth great punches in the beginning. The liftup was actually really good. The drop was not stiff and great as well. But could have had a few more pics. But the bounce was pretty bad. The tape was annoying and it coulkd have had a better reaction. Vote goes to Jiggy Rhino: Smoother and flowed better.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 19, 2013 1:21:49 GMT -5
Jamie: I see some very small improvements here, flow wasn't all there, speed too was lacking during the running part for Gabriel, but then on the other side I think the Michinoku Driver was too fast overall, there was a major lack in joint movement through-out, running lacked some lower arm movement and the Michinoku Driver seemed to have little to no movements from Gabriel, impact wasn't very realistic, should've gotten rid of a few pics instead of staying there for a few pics too long, I like that you added a real reaction, could've used some arm movements through that though, lighting was very good, saw no string but a LOT of blu tac. 2/10 Jairo: Nicely done, this is the first animation I've commented of yours on here, nice to see you here, animation was very smooth and had a very nice flow, I felt that the Driver move was too fast though, seemed to just go incredibly fast, joint movement was alright but it seemed as though you only moved the arms not the elbows, which looked awkward, Miz could've used more movement during the fall aswell, impact was severely lacking, reaction too was alright, the big bounce really didn't fit the move, just a rolling over and holding the back would've fit it better, nice to see you here, nicely done. 6/10 Vote: Jairo
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Post by MyyQee™ on Nov 19, 2013 11:11:59 GMT -5
Jamie:I like the build up,I see you tried running and to be honest it wasn´t a bad attempt at all,the kick was good but the shadow kind of ruined it,the move itself was stiff,didn´t move the joints when Bourne was holding the victim,impact was abit better but the animation in overall was very stiff,nice try.
Jairo:Was smooth,the punches were good but the legs of both figs were very stiff for a punching scene,the rest of the animation flows awesome but you have to work on shadows,impact was great an reaction even better.
My vote goes to Jairo.
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Nov 19, 2013 19:07:34 GMT -5
My vote goes to Jairo.
Jamie: At the beginning, the punch exchanges very slow and stiff, there wasn't much precision and impact behind them either which distracted from the realism in this ani. The block into the running to the ropes were also a bit stiff in Gabriel's back and knees but I see you definitely put a considerable amount of effort towards the running off the ropes towards Bourne so that's something I can appreciate. The scoop was a little choppy and the Michinoku Driver itself was a little very stiff and choppy from both Gabriel and Bourne. I didn't really like the reaction at the end. 5.8/10
Jairo: At the beginning the punch from Daniel Bryan and block from Miz was very nicely done imo. I didn't like Daniel Bryan's reaction to the punch as it seemed quite lackadaisical and unrealistic. The scoop was very smooth and the movements from both were pretty good, I didn't notice any stiffness, fidgetiness or choppiness at all. The tape on Miz's feet took away a bit from the quality of the animation but it wasn't anything detrimental in this case. The impact was good, the bounce reaction looked nice but it seemed a little delayed for some reason. 8.3/10
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