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Post by "Living Legend" Duttanized on Feb 25, 2012 17:16:09 GMT -5
Let's welcome two new competitors to the WF PPV world!Beginners Showcaseconnormcgaw1236 vs CoopermanV3 Stip(NickNitro):s129.photobucket.com/albums/p232/bik100/?action=view¤t=PoetryInMotion.gifconnormcgaw1236: CoopermanV3: How to vote on matches: No polls and no suckish replies. Your vote will only and only count if you do the following: 1) State the username of the person you are voting for. (should I even have to say this?) 2) You must give reason on why you have voted this person as the winner. (Could be anything from smoother animation, to most creative. Compare other's animation is recommended) If you cannot complete these simple rules, then your vote won't count and will be deleted on the spot, no exceptions. Note: Alot of users like to get a mark out of 10 (or 5 if you must), but I can't force you to give a mark. Just take it to consideration when voting to make a mark to compare each animation in the match.
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Post by wwextreme25 on Feb 25, 2012 17:21:44 GMT -5
connor - ithink you did it wrong bro as you did a running splash not a legdrop thing. the runnign was slow and stiff....needs more photos and move joints more. 3/10
vote: coop
coop...start was cool, lighting was blury and a bit weird - the jumps delayed a bit which was not very realistic but i think that the overall ani was the best and flowed best. 6/10
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Post by wweanimation09 on Feb 25, 2012 17:22:33 GMT -5
Connor: It was extremely stiff so move the joints more, it was incredibly slow, i saw shadows so use a lamp or edit it out, Move the joints in a realistic manner to ensure a better animation, TBH i think you should of re-done stip a few more times
Coop: Quite smooth but choppy in areas, it was blurry i dont know why, you need to work on your handling of string as when ever string was involved it was choppy, Anyway it was an Ok animation.
Vote - Cooperman
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Post by 11stopmotion on Feb 25, 2012 17:27:03 GMT -5
conner:pretty slow and not even the right move 3/10
Coop:Really good but only needs better lighting and a few more pics 7/10
vote:Coop
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Post by wrestlingfreak39 aka nico on Feb 25, 2012 17:27:30 GMT -5
Vote Cooperman
Conor yours was slow needed more pics and it wasnt a poetry in motion as you did a running splash anyway wasnt bad 2/10
Cooperman not bad start was good but it took while for him to jump and the second jump was ok it could use a couple frames here and there other than that not bad 5/10
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Post by Deleted on Feb 25, 2012 17:30:52 GMT -5
Coop: Good animation. I didn't like how kofi had to get momentum again and again with every jump. why didn't he take the momentum from the first jump to the second? it would've looked way better. but anyways it was smooth but blurred. 6/10 Connor: Very stiff. but good for your first animation. keep practicing like jack said: move the joints more! speed the animation up. [and you made the wrong animation but nevermind] 3/10
vote: Coop
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Feb 25, 2012 17:32:15 GMT -5
Somewhat of a disadvantage but I'll go with Coop on this one.
Connormcgaw1236: For your first you have alot of improving to work on. The running was choppy, stiff and fidgety. The movements didn't match well with the walking and in one frame changes angles. The jump onto the ladder was very stiff and choppy and the jump onto Rey Mysterio was choppy and also stiff nor didn't the move following according to the stipulation. It was a nice attempt however. 2.1/10
CoopermanV3: The running was only one frame which made the ani skip over a little bit, I like the bend before the jump, the jump itself could have used a few more frames. The poetry in motion itself was a bit choppy in mid air and both Matt and Kofi looked stiff while falling. 5.2/10
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Post by jake4698 on Feb 25, 2012 17:48:42 GMT -5
Oh sweet! Dutt started posting matches. However onto the match - Thanks guys for the comments, they are highly apreciated. I must say that I had to work on having a better lighting, on taking more pictures (mostly in the running), and on pratising my stip more, but it was my first shot at a Poetry in Motion ever, and it was my first use of Deluxe Figures since a year. Mostly, that I didn't want to remake it. Anyhow, good luck Connor
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Post by Deleted on Feb 25, 2012 18:22:57 GMT -5
Vote: CoopermanV3
Obvious reasons as to why Cooper won...
CoopermanV3`s animation: Very nice animation, a bit slow in the run up, and required some more pictures, would`ve liked some movements during the actual hit, and before that in Hardy, didn`t have a big reaction, which is alright, but would`ve preferred a bigger one, saw quite a few shadows through-out, and the camera was quite shaky through-out.
connormcgaw1236`s animation: Really fidgety through-out, slow, and was stiff through-out the whole animation, no reaction, as it was cut-out, overall, an alright animation for a first, but you really need to work on it...
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Post by axelwarjp on Feb 25, 2012 18:26:02 GMT -5
connormcgaw1236:
I like the ladder there but you should have kept it side ways so he would have more of a jump. There was an unnessary frame before you used string when you look a rey. The run was so slow and shadows were distracting. Truth needs to spread his legs (lol). I don't like how it suddenly ends, for one it needs more of a reaction also you should put the beginning frame and end frame longer.
CoopermanV3: Nice job, I like the jumps but I think it would be better if he ran, instead of jumping then stopping to jump again. I like how Matt moves his arms up before getting hit.
Vote CoopermanV3
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Post by Deleted on Feb 25, 2012 18:58:04 GMT -5
connormcgaw1236:your animation was quite rigid, but you must move the joints! try to use a consistent sound to the animation also in the moment of impact must take more pictures and make the reaction and not just cut the animation on the impact,and is slow cooper:your animations is good but very rigid take more pictures ,and is very slow.
vote coopermanv3
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Post by Deleted on Feb 25, 2012 19:16:53 GMT -5
connor: oue animation was very stiff. the camera was on a good postition, the lightning was ok. try to move the joints more and the animation didn't end D: overall: 3/10
coop: your animation was smooth, i liked the jump,heanimation was ok and i really like how it comes out, it is just a bit slow overall: 6/10
vote: coop
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Post by Deleted on Feb 25, 2012 21:11:11 GMT -5
Vote Cooperman
Connor your video was slow stiff and the camera moved in a bad way but you will improve
Cooperman slow stiff and I thought matt hardy should of moved a bit but still it was one of your best nice job
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Post by Deleted on Feb 25, 2012 23:28:46 GMT -5
Connor- It's too slow and stiff, there was some shadow. Which distracts me the most, I don't really like the one picture of Rey when R-truth was half way through his running? and btw, I think it wasn't high enough to be a Poetry in Motion... Coop- I think you put effort into this, the running needs a lift. The effect distracts me a bit, I think it was too dark. You might need to get a new background. The reaction was nice too Vote- Coop
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Post by wccwmaster on Feb 26, 2012 0:13:38 GMT -5
Connormcgraw1236: Connor's pose was extremely stiff, and it needed to be speed up. Also, the shadows were very awkward and distracting. I give it a 4/10.
CoopermanV3: Although the lighting wasn't very good, the animation was smooth for the most part, and the jump was pretty good. The only problem is that Matt Hardy was life-like and he should of had a reaction. 6.5/10
Vote: CoopermanV3
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Post by [The Ukrainian One] Dimburuk on Feb 26, 2012 2:06:35 GMT -5
Cooperman gets my vote. His was easily better, it had a better speed, it wasn't stiff, when connor's was, i liked the lil running in Cooperman's, when connor's was very slow and stiff. Jump in Coopermans was easily better, because it flowed very well, and it was smooth. Connor's didn't even had a reaction, when Cooperman had a nice reaction. Coopermans didn't have strings or shadows, when connor had shadows.
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Post by 0,Y on Feb 26, 2012 8:51:24 GMT -5
Vote: Copperman Reason: smooth, had a reaction, was a bit slow at times connors was way too slow, didn't have a reaction and just stopped abruptly
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Post by Scotty on Feb 26, 2012 9:40:48 GMT -5
connormcgaw1236: extremely slow and stiff, also no reaction. Cooper: Stiff but not as stiff as connor. It also had a reaction. Vote Cooper
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Post by wwecool09 on Feb 26, 2012 14:26:11 GMT -5
connormcgaw1236: its very slow and extremely stiff u really need to animate and use feedback so u can improve at least move joints show reactions!
OVERALL: 0.4/10
CoopermanV3: i just cant wait to face u! anyways good job wasnt so stiff a little slow nice reaction though u could have added a rope bounce!
OVERALL: 5.1/10
VOTE: COOPERMANV3
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Post by AdamLofthouseTV on Feb 26, 2012 16:21:59 GMT -5
Coop: very good, it was smooth and the jumping and reaction was very realistic
Connor:it was slow and I don't think you did the right move
My vote goes to turrah
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