Honestly, does this suck?

[P@ul]

Well, I've started writing some music that I'll be playing with a few friends. This is one of the slower tunes.

It's extremely rough, as I recorded the guitar, bass, drums, synth, and vocals myself. When we actually play they'll be female vocals, and I'll only be taking on the bass (thankfully).

My question to you guys ,looking past the timing and vocal issues, is; is this catchy (even if it's not particularly your cup of tea music wise)?

I'm going to be bringing this, as well as a few other tracks to our rehearsal and thought I'd get your opinions as well as the guys I'll be playing with.

Thanks

[DontHassleTheHoff]

When i started reading I was worried this would be something dreadful but it isn't actualy bad at all! It has elements to it which tear me as to if i feel they are retro or outdated, but it shows promise, just keep working.