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Post by therealdealbookr on Aug 14, 2006 13:43:29 GMT -5
Scene opens, to a completely dark room, no light. Complete silence, alls you can hear is slight breathing. Then you hear a click that sounds like someone turning on a light. The room lights up and over all of the walls is “WIN” written in what looks like blood. Autopsy is sitting in the corner demonically looking into the camera. He is shaking and sweat drips down his head, he then narrows his eyebrows and smiles, and silently chuckles.
Autopsy: Violence, ha, what an overrated word. Violence can be verbal or physical, violence can even be written. Death is overrated, people like to play with it, speak about it, but yet never have dealt with it. Hate is overrated, people hate for no reason, and hate causes wars that have no meaning. Obo, it’s obvious I haven't been dead before, and you say you will kill me…You’re work is sloppy Obo, barbed wire, light tubes, I don’t need that. There is a certain evil inside of me, which gets the best of everyone.
Autopsy then chuckles and rolls up one of his sleeves, and we zoom up on his arm, where WIN is carved into his arm. We fade out.
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Post by cureforthesickness on Aug 14, 2006 13:47:13 GMT -5
not bad, but it definately felt cut short, due to the 200 word limit. Word limit matches are interesting. You have to focus on not only the word limit, but also putting out a good roleplay within the limit
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Yukio Blaze
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Post by Yukio Blaze on Aug 14, 2006 14:02:42 GMT -5
This wasnt bad at all and good work for a limit rp.
Good luck.
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Revvie®
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Post by Revvie® on Aug 14, 2006 14:29:04 GMT -5
I think it come off pretty descent for the word limit that you had.
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