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Post by justintyger on Feb 11, 2006 19:24:43 GMT -5
The screen comes on with Justin Tyger, wearing a black hat, A grey hoodie, jeans, with headphones around his neck.. Standing In front of an arena, in very bad shape, with wood Covering busted windows, with “Cage vs. Falcon” lit up In bright lights
I don't need my name up in lights I just want to be heard whether it's in the ring or the mic It's not about the salary It's all about reality and making some noise..
Who the hell am I anyway? I never really talk much Never concerned with status but still leavin them star struck Humbled through opportunities given to me despite the fact That many misjudge me because I make a livin from fightin I’m only focused on what I do, my destiny is beyond reach And now when it all unfolds, when I have some gold Risin the strap in the air, my destiny Will be found, and when it all ends, when I have to retire, I will Look back on that moment, rememberin the feelin, a feelin Few people ever feel, but that’s a long time away, I gotta rise though the ranks, and the person that stands in my way, Right now, his name is GaZ, he makes me want to gag, He thinks he can run with me, he can’t even run With his Mother, I guarantee he won’t even show And If he does, it’ll be a pure job, he’ll be on the Mat so quick, he won’t even know what hit him..
This business is ten percent luck, twenty percent skill Fifteen percent concentrated power of will Five percent pleasure, fifty percent pain And a hundred percent reason to remember my name, JUSTIN TYGER!!
Tyger puts the headphones around his head and walks off as The l in Falcon flickers off..
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Post by TZ on Feb 11, 2006 19:40:43 GMT -5
I'm sorry, but your RP's have really gone downhill as of late. I know this is for a house show, and you are facing a new guy, but still. The description was lacking severely. You said a few things, but that's about it. You need tons more detail. If you didn't want to add a lot of detail then you could have at least added in a few key remarks about other parts of the surrounding area. With what you provided, it's even hard to, "set a scene" in the reader's mind. Honestly, I didn't like the dialouge that much because, well, the rap thing is bad, and it is so overdone. You should have just stuck to your normal character, your normal speech, you would have been fine. For one, the rap wasn't all that great, and I just didn't like it. I've tried to be nice, but you've been RP'ing for a while now, and I just can't be, "soft" anymore. Your RP's have really gone downhill.
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Post by justintyger on Feb 11, 2006 20:20:16 GMT -5
Ok, thanks for replying to most of my RPs man, believe it of not, I do listen to replies and read other RPs on the boards.. I'm trying, I'm just not good at RPing..
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Post by TZ on Feb 11, 2006 20:44:30 GMT -5
Ok, thanks for replying to most of my RPs man, believe it of not, I do listen to replies and read other RPs on the boards.. I'm trying, I'm just not good at RPing.. That's not the attitude to have at all. Everyone can improve.
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Post by talkingtoast on Feb 11, 2006 21:02:21 GMT -5
Ok, thanks for replying to most of my RPs man, believe it of not, I do listen to replies and read other RPs on the boards.. I'm trying, I'm just not good at RPing.. That's not the attitude to have at all. Everyone can improve. Yeah, some of the best WFWF wrestlers have started out in bad shape.
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