Grade My History Project!

[cjs.]

This is a project about Martin Luther King, I am in Year 9. (9th Grade) I've put alot of effort into it and I'm happy with it I'm just wondering what you would say, and what you think my teacher will say?


Grade Percentage of passed students
A 90–100
B 65–90
C 35-65
D 10–35
E 0–10
FX —
F —

The grade FX indicates that "some more work required before the credit can be awarded." The grade F indicates "considerable further work required."


Here's the actual pictures/project:






(I have to do handwriting on the poster.)




Thanks.

[ruthlessagression]

Your teacher will probably say you put effort into it. More than likely an A.

[Wato Stan Account]

I'm sure you'll get an A, but I would give you a B. It's well done for being in 9th grade but I believe your last two slides/pictures are a bit busy. The amount of words combines with font size and picture, I see can't keep focused on one thing. It's good but the last two look kind of rushed.

[purpleisaaw]

very nice looks like you put alot of effort into it

[kanekilledvince]

You'll likely get an A. I gave an A, But definitely listen to Seanzor's advice. he is right on the money (money, yeah, yeah)

[Mark]

Tyr not to use He so much and the words "then"

[I am CANADIAN]

your sentences are huge. you should also indent before paragraphs. i would give this a b or b-. you're missing a lot of punctations.

[TooShort4]

Freaking short.

[Deep Figure Value]

C

Your photo editing skills don't hide your terrible structure in your paragraphs, which should be the meat and potatoes of the project. I mean, Christ, you're in ninth grade, and you spelled 'said' s-e-d.

[PsychoDriver]

B or a C. The content and information is plentiful but your grammar, spelling and punctuation let you down.

[Mark]

Saying MLK was a very good person is an understatement. The paragraphs, sans the grammar errors, seems to be written as if you copied it.

Instead of saying he was clever, replace it with "an intellectual man" or something It seems so middle school-ish

[Greg Weinstein]

You should've revised it before you made this thread.

[Get A Rhythm™]

Very nice. What font did you use on the "I Have A Dream" text for the cover?

[THE *Legendary* STINGER]

I gave you an "F"

for "Fun"

[Rated-R-Superstar-159]

i gave it an F because i was in 9'th grade last year, and my projects didn't even come close to being as good as yours, so i'm a bit jealous. If that wasn't the case, i would have given it an A.

[perilloboy123]

If your teacher's a hard grader, you're screwed. There's a shit-load of grammar errors in there. However, the project does look pretty nice, so if I were your teacher I'd give you an A for effort.

[Tim Tebow™]

F. Because.......... I don't know.

[nibz]

I'd give you an A for effort, as it's nicely thought out and well organised. But it looks a bit crammed on the last couple of pages.

[Hulkamaniac]

I have to give you a C for the horrendous spelling and grammar mistakes. The content is good, but not outstanding. The writing is piss poor to be honest. A simple spell checker would catch all or most of the mistakes. It makes it look like you just didn't care enough to try IMO. I'm tempted to give you a D, but I'm a soft grader.

[Deleted]

I gave you a C. Being in 9th grade myself, my teacher would destroy me for those gramatical errors and spelling errors. Along with some sentence structure.