KamillioN®
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Post by KamillioN® on Dec 2, 2006 2:55:43 GMT -5
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Post by jakksfoshizzle on Dec 2, 2006 3:24:58 GMT -5
Here we go.. another good show, another big reply.
Ok! Lets get started! Triple H Vs John Cena, right here right now? Goodness Grasious! Triple H is dominating.. The Pedigree! 1,2,3! Hunter won! Here comes Samoa Joe. Its The Animal, Batista! Another Intresting match getting started. Joe taking a page out of Angle's book. Muscle Buster! Joe has won the match! I'm suprised with the outcome of that match, for I thaught Batista was going to win. Sabu! Drop Kick to the chair! Joe has been layed out cold! Arbian Face Buster! I hope Jim Ross dosn't mind me saying this but, Bah Gawd! Here comes one of my personal favourites, Chris Masters! Shelton Benjamin, Thats cheap bastard! Whatchy tellya? Masters got the victory! Masters & Christy 4 Eva! Oh My God! Suicide Dive My Benjamin! Hemme & Masters are both out cold! Here comes The Heartbreak Kid, Shawn Michaels. Dirty Tactics shown by The Show Stoppa, shoving the camera out of his face. Sharp words by Michaels, but enough talk! Its Chris Benoit! Benoit is attacking Michaels! Crippler Crossface! Shawn has been crippled! Benoit advances! Here comes The Legend Killer Orton, IMO one of DIW's best superstars. Lashley has hit the ring. Both men exchanging stares in the middle of the ring. Massive Clothesline starting the match! Awesome match. Lashley wins? Aww. Oh No. Its time for the destruction device we call A steel cage. Here comes Sabin. Hail Sabin! Its the Fallen Angel himself. Kamillian? Aww Man. He just interupted a match in the making. Here comes the GM, who looks stoned as always. Extreme Gaunlet! Now thats a way to get ratings. Skipper in the ring. Here's Killings. Here's all of the other entrants! I'm behind Rhino in this one. Damn! James Won! Hopefully RHino will become a serious contender. AJ Vs Williams for 2 titles should be awesome. Williams wins both titles! Here comes Jericho, is he gonna sneak attack of celebrate? I had my hopes up for Jericho to sneak attack him, but never mind.
Untill next episode!
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KamillioN®
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Post by KamillioN® on Dec 2, 2006 3:31:38 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply Leon, I appreciate it. I had some mind changes while doing alot of the show so, just depend on some SERIOUS things goin down like always in DIW!
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Post by deskjet on Dec 2, 2006 7:39:23 GMT -5
Very entertaining Show KAm. I like the mix of figs in your fed. Pictures were real clear and the poses were good. Also the storylines flowed well together. The main event was entertaining and had a good ending. All the matches were just really good but I think i Liked Masters vs Benjamin the best. Keep up the good work.
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KamillioN®
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Post by KamillioN® on Dec 2, 2006 12:34:45 GMT -5
84 views and only 2 actual replies? Come on people, how hard is it to watch a show then post thoughts/comments huh? Thanks to those that have replied but please, keep the replies coming.
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Post by alessicustoms2 on Dec 2, 2006 13:06:16 GMT -5
That was a entertaining show I love the begining with Tripple HHH hitting Cena with a pedigree and showing him yell at KamillioN, The Joe vs Batista Match was a good match I didnt like the ending but it was still good match and with Sabu appearing by attacking Joe ,I didnt really care for the Masters vs Benjamin match but I like the diving out of the ring by Benjamin,I think the HBK Benoit match went to fast but i like how he reversed the suplex into a Crippler crossface,I love the match with Lashly and Orton good back and fourth match, but my favorite was the cage match that was amazing when Sabin hit a cradle shock off the top. Now the battle in the extreme gauntlet match was great but it was another match that went back and fourth I thought the off the ladder fame asser was cool and the ending with kip james. I kinda of skimmed the AJ and Williams match but it was cool to see Jericho celebrate with Williams and the off and on interfeirance.Overall great show
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Post by Deleted on Dec 2, 2006 14:15:39 GMT -5
Well I will leave a quick reply; I might go into more detail later. First off the arena looks good, I like the colours, layout and it looks very clean. Cena's entrance pic looked a little goofy to me, no big deal though. It would have been nice if you added a Triple H entrance. You could have worked on the first stomp to Cena, give Cena more of a reaction next time. Trip's punch looked good, Cena's scan really worked to your favour there. Triple H's Irish whip could have used work, you could have a pic of Cena running towards the ropes and bouncing of, and the high knee by Trips looked good, though Cena needed a better reaction again. Kammilion looks interesting. Nice pedigree, but the match is already over? Really short.....Also you don't need six pics of the ref counting the pin in my opinion its just overkill. Samoa Joe attacking Batista before the bell, that has already happened twice in the show, I hope it doesn't happen anymore. The angle slam looked sorda sloppy to me. The counter to the half Boston crap was pretty nice; I liked the camera angles you took. Power bomb into the turnbuckle was really quite nice. The suplex type thing needed another pic in the middle to help it flow better. I hate how you do ref counts. The enzunguri from Joe looked pretty nice, would have liked a slightly more zoomed out camera angle though. Muscle buster and its over, pretty nice match again short though you really have to work on match length. The Sabu segment was pretty nice, the poses needed allot of work though, try playing around with your angles more to get the best looking pic possible. Another match starting with an early shot, oh dear. Benjamin’s dropkick could have used some work, put his legs closer together and bend his knees a bit to give him that arching feel, and also you could have improved on master’s reaction. Benjamin should have been like crunched up in the torso after the knee...After Masters clothesline you could have had a pic of Benjamin on the ground, rather then right after the clothesline having Masters sliding Benjamin into the ring. I liked the modified rib breaker; you pulled it off really well. The lack of a mid air pic for the moonsault really disappointed me....The "modified top rope suplex into a pic" looked pretty cluster f*ck to be honest, I couldn't tell what happened. Master's rolling into his own pic was actually pretty nice, I liked it. This match was pretty good, again a little short but you seem to be getting better. Benjamin’s, cross body to the outside really needed work, you cut so much of the figure off, it really wrecked the look of it for me. I really like the heel Michaels. Nice promo and here comes Benoit. The reversal by Benoit into the submission was nice, it flowed really well. Benoit already wins!? Jeez that was a short match; I really would have liked to see it expanded on. Lashley vs. Orton should be a boring match to be honest. Lashleys clothesline could have been improved vastly with you having Orton’s arms thrown up in the air. Power bomb to the turnbuckle bored me a bit; you have to use string at times to make your poses more exciting. Orton's boot the Lashley was pretty nice. The bulldog needed a pic of Orton actually running towards Lashley, also the mid air pic of it would have been much better if Lashley was sorda hunched over, rather then standing straight up. The dropkick looked good, Orton again could have been arched back more though. The counter to the RKO seemed to have a good idea bout it, but it wasn't really pulled off to well. What was with the weird backbreaker? I didn't understand it much, could have used at least another pic. Lashley wins, pretty good match both, it bored me but the wrestlers do in real life so not really your fault. ""From Detroit.Michigaaaan, weighing in, at 21 pouuunds, Chis, Saaaaiinnnnnnn!" Wow, Sabin has sure lost allot of weight. I don't like the noticeably missing side to the cage....Sabin's belly to belly into the cage looked great. Nice dropkick to Daniels, it could have been better with an improved running pic but not a big deal. Sabin trying to escape, Daniels catches him. Cradle shock of the top of the cage was great looking, but not really all to accurate, doesn't Sabin normally keep the legs grasped in mid air? Why did you end the match? Darn it was going to be a good one to. Ha-ha, Tony Montana is your GM, nice. Elix Skipper vs. Killings, could be great. Enzunguri needed another pic. Front drop suplex was just a little meh looking to be honest. Dropkick of the ladder, looked a little lazy to me, you need some work with your poses in this match. Hoyt's slam to Skip again looked boring to me, you have to add something to your poses to make them look realistic and such. Killing's spine buster was nice, except I think your finger is in one of the pics. The gore wasn't great but it wasn't bad either. With the power bomb through the table, you should have had Hoyt, bent over more, to show some force. Hardy's leg thing off of the barricade wasn't really too good, you have the camera way to close to Hardy. Skips is out, he was probably my favourite in this match as well. Nash's power bomb to Rhyno was looking great, until Rhyno's reaction came around, I don't like how he kind of bounced off the ladder into the ropes. Kip James just made this match so much better. Except what did James do to Nash? I couldn't tell to be honest. Ugh its Jarret, the match just got worse. Gore through the table was pretty stiff, would have helped to variate Rhyno's legs more. Hardy's gone, good. BG's attack to Jarret was sorda stiff. Nash's big boot the Kip just left something to be desired, really boring looking pose. I actually liked, Hoyt's bomb this time. The black hole slam was nice for the most part, a little sloppy though. Why do more and more people keep coming into this match, it is getting far to large. Stings death drop was really just boring looking. The dropkick needed tons of work, first off get Stings legs together at least, and also give Killings a reaction. Abyss slamming Hoyt’s head into the ladder was alright. Very nice Fameasser from the top rope, pose of the match I think. Shopping cart to Sting, nice. Kendo stick shot to Abyss looked terrible, so boring and stiff. Another nice fameasser. I am really glad Abyss is out. The spine buster to the table legs didn't make all that much sense, wouldn't the table legs collapse? Hoyt's leg drop was really a nice pose. The Kid destroyer thing was a really nice move, I like the innovativeness. Killings is out, I wouldn't have minded seeing him win. Work on you weapon shots, they are really stiff. The set-up for the fameasser off the ladder took a long time, I think you could have cut a couple of pics out of it. Thank god Jarret is out. Rhyno getting slammed into the ladder looked alright, nothing really good or bad about it. I hate how you did Hoyt's power bomb, why would you only have his Legs in the shot? Stings suplex was alright up until when they landed, they were like in different directions and such. Hoyt’s leg drop looked alright I guess, a tad stiff though and had a bit of a flow problem. The pile driver by Kip was fine, except you could have had Stings legs positioned so it looked to have more force. Work on reactions for your weapon shots, or basically any striking move. Kip's dropkick to Rhyno looked alright until he landed in like the opposite direction, try to pay attention to details like that. Kip's leg drop to Sting looked good. Hoyt is gone, that’s alright I guess. Sting is out, good, nice fameasser again. Nice pile driver off of the top rope, it was one of your better poses. Kip James wins nice. Ha-ha Kip taking BG out nice. Well the match was good, I found it was way to long and had way to many people to be honest. Aj vs. Petey, should be pretty good. Petey hits a brain buster, but then AJ is doing a moonsault all of a sudden, wouldn't AJ be a little dazed? Nice DDT by AJ though. Get more of an arch in AJ's body for the German suplex. How did it go from Petey setting up AJ for a move off the top rope to AJ doing a power bomb? Petey kicking out seems a little unrealistic. Aj brings out a garbage bin? Well okay. The drop kick by Petey was nice, but you have like all your fingers in the one pic, really not professional looking, but it happens. Petey dropping AJ's neck across the garbage bin looked good for what it was. You need work on your match flow here, you have Petey setting up tables one pic and Styles getting ready to give him a styles clash this next pic. Peteys DDT looked nice, the blood is a little ehh. Nice fameasser, even though that us like ten in one show . Kips chair shot looked really poor, he was hardly even holding the chair. Kip's leg drop was really nice. Petey's splash was simple but fine. The power bomb to Kip onto Petey was a nice idea. Here comes Raven? Raven's attack to AJ was good. Raven's chair shot to Kip was the best you have done through out the show. Clothesline to petey was a little boring. DDT into the trash can was pretty nice, a little confusing though. Chair shot needed a better reaction again. AJ's kick looked good, sorda had a flow problem though. The Canadian destroyer had some flow issues but wasn't bad for the most part. Petey wins, not bad wouldn't have minded either wrestler winning though. Good match, didn't like the interference though. Ok well for a first show I thought it was great. You could have added some backstage segments though. Also work on poses for your next show and try to use string.
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Post by bwf on Dec 2, 2006 15:45:10 GMT -5
O.K the debut of DIW - Nice entrace setup, diggin the green Impact logo. - Woah! LOL at Cena's entrance ;D - Wait, Trips is already in the ring, lets get this match started! John Cena vs. Triple H- Man Trips is dominating - Pedigree! ALREADY! - lol at the Mickey ref - And Triple H picks up the win, SQUASH! - Didn't really like this match, way to short, you should have let Cena get a little offense in. Samoa Joe vs. Batista- Joe's gonna kill Batista! - Good god what a kick by Joe! - I LOVE THAT PIC! - Uh oh! MUSCLE BUSTAAAAAAAAAA!!!! - It's over! - 1,2,3 - JOE! JOE! JOE! - Wait lights go out! - SABU!!!! - Holy crapwhat a way to debut! Chris Masters vs. Shelton Benjamin- Woah, Shelton attacks Masters from behind - T BONE SUPLEX FROM THE TOP!!!! - Wait Masters reverses the pin! - Masters steals one! - Masters & Hemme > All - Poor Christi Shawn Michaels vs. Chris Benoit- First off nice HBK promo - CROSSFACE! - Benoit wins!? - Again another short match Randy Orton vs. Bobby Lashley- This should be a good match, I'm picking Orton - RK-NO! Lashley counters - Ohh! What a move by Lashley - 1,2,3. Lashley advances! - Steel cage time baby! Chris Sabin vs. Christopher Dainels- Nice head towel thig on Dainels' head - Since I'm a Michigan boy, I'm going with Sabin - Sabin going to the top, but Dainels in hot pursuit. - HOLY SHIT! CRADLE SHOCK FROM THE TOP OF THE CAGE!!!!! - Both...men.....are.....dead! - Here comes sexy Kam! ;D - Booo! I wanted a winner - Tony Montana!!! - Extreme Gauntlet match! AWSUM!!!! Extreme Gauntlet- Primetime and Killings to start it out. - Hardy's out - HOYT! HOYT! HOYT! - Hoyt will own - Rhino! GORE!! - Back in the ring, Hoyt powerbomb through the table, bye bye Skipper. - Big Sexy (Not you Kam ;)lol, j/k) Kevin Nash is next out - Wait! A Hoyt and Nash alliance!?!? - KIP F'N JAMES!!!! - WAIT! BG JAMES!!! VOODO KIN MAFIA BITCHES!!! - Double J - Rhino gores Hardy through the table! And Hardy is eliminated, Yay! - ABYSS! - BLACK HOLE SLAM!!! - Wiat, no It's STING!!! - Scorpion Death drop! - Fame-asser onto Nash - Nash is outta here - Shopping cart to the face of Sting - Fame-asser to Abyss (Kip is pwning here tonight) - And Abyss is eliminated - Killings is gone - FAME-ASSER THROUGH THE TABLE!!! - Holiluah (sp?) Jarrett is gone - No! Hoyt is gone - Fame-asser again! I see fingures!! - Sting is gone! - So it's down to Rhino and Kip, LETS GO KIP, LETS GO KIP! - PILEDRIVAAAAAAA FROM THE TOP!!!!! - KIP WINS KIP WINS!!! - WTF is wrong with you Kip?!?!? Why'd you do that 2 BG??? - Steph? ?? - Ooo la la ;D - We're back and we see Kip again? Didn't he just have a match? Petey Williams vs. AJ "The best in the world" Styles- This should be an Awsum match, I really don't know who I want to win, The're both my favs - Some nice wrestling here - Petey's got wood! lol ;D - AJ's got a dumpster! Fook yeah! - Where's Kip going?? - AJ's busted - Fame-asser 2 Petey!! - Chair shot to AJ - Petey's wearing a crimson mask. - Wait! Raven! FTW!!! - EVENFLOW TO AJ THROUGH THE TABLE INTO THE DUMPSTER!!! - Styles Cla----NO! CANADIAN DESTROYER!!!! - Petey wins! - Jericho!?!? - Poor AJ Dude what a show! It felt like a PPV! The only parts I didn't like was that I could kind of see your fingers in some shots . Anyway can't wait for DIW Impact 2 Best match: Extreme Gauntlet Best pose (s): I loved all of the Fame-asser poses
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Post by P@ul on Dec 2, 2006 16:34:17 GMT -5
I'm diggin' the arena. - I hate seeing promotions open with squash matches. There's plenty of time to show H's dominance. - A lot of blurry pictures. I'm not a huge fan of all the angles either. Stay further back and try to get all of the figures in each shot. - A bit more commentary could be used, some moves it's hard to tell what's going on. Try watching some spelling. - Another quick match, still alright I suppose. - You need to work on shots like this one. - Hopefully we find out why Sabu attacked Joe. - I would have liked to see a picture of the moonsault by Benjamin. - Masters/Shelton/Christy love triangle? - Again, some things to work on. - Shawn giving up to Benoit that quickly? This tournament is losing a lot of credibility. - Lashely/Orton was a bit better, still it could use more pictures. - Daniels/Sabin it a cage could be so amazing, please make it amazing .... - 3 Moves? And what was with the 'ummmm' when you were on the microphone Lol. - Your poses with the TNA figures are a bit better. - The gauntlet was ok. A lot of good action. Kip is laying the hurt with those Fame-asser's. - It was clear from the beginning that Kip was going to win, still original though. - Was AJ vs Petey suppose to be a No DQ? Why all the weapons? Overall it was enjoyable. I'd suggest for future shows cutting down on the number of matches are focus on making them longer, with better poses and angles.
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Post by mathewcorleone on Dec 2, 2006 18:14:23 GMT -5
The greatest GM ever, I think that I may have to steal your idea. Overall, the show is very good. It flow good. Pictures are really clear, poses are ok, gotta watch those hands though. Personally, I think that a pic fed can be great with or without strings, your is a fine example. Some poses could be better but for the most part job well done. Hope to see some more DIW in the future.
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KamillioN®
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Post by KamillioN® on Dec 2, 2006 20:06:10 GMT -5
Thanks for the replies to all, especially Goalie, very good reply. This is in all actuality my third show but debut of a new name and arena. I might try to use string again but the last time I did it went horrible, so I'll figure it out. Keep the replies coming though people.
KamillioN
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Post by boybe123 on Dec 2, 2006 20:21:46 GMT -5
That was en awesome Great job on the canadian destroyer
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Post by straightedge on Dec 6, 2006 20:29:32 GMT -5
i like how you actually captured a true triple h match
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Post by Man Without Fear on Dec 6, 2006 22:18:06 GMT -5
great show dude ive been waiting a long time for this one and you delivered...the Joe Batista match was great...Joe would destroy batista in real life and im glad you at least gave Dave a chance haha...love the fed dude...me and you have similar feds i think thats why.
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Post by BOOM! #WDE on Dec 7, 2006 0:00:15 GMT -5
I liked the show. Very interesting to say the least. Kepp up the good work man.
P.S. Where did you get the tony Montana? I love it!
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Post by tnafan17: The Total Package on Dec 8, 2006 23:29:08 GMT -5
WOW.....What a show!! I loved every minute of it from the beginning. Your stage is awesome man! Tony Montana.....best GM ive ever known to be in a pic fed. Samoa Joe vs. Batista loved it. Sabu's debut. My favorite was the Extreme Gauntlet some many twist and turns kept me on my feet. Great show man, I can tell you put a lot of effort into it.
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Post by maniac12 on Dec 11, 2006 14:57:21 GMT -5
Man, what a show that was awesome, just might need to use string not your hands really does make it sucky sometimes i mean like this pic Great work though i know you worked hard on this.
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Post by dmallett4 on Dec 16, 2006 9:29:43 GMT -5
I have no idea why i havent replied to this, i viewed it a while ago, and thought, i will reply to this, and forgot completely, sorry about that. So here we go.... A site would be nice, it just makes it more proffesionall iyam. Your forum does look sexy though. Cena V HHH - Not too keen on the entrance graphic, seems a little bare. Using string would gain you marks as well I really dont like that counting for some reason Joe V Batista - Should be a good match if i think about it. That reversal into the corner was uber sexy. At least joe won, thats pleasing. I heart that Sabu headcloth and chair. Shelton V Masters - I really liked Masters entrance there. Not really much to say, except it was short. Michaels V Benoit - Michaels V AJ will be godly. That Crossface looks kinda weak. Another short match, which is a big shame. Lashley V Orton - I really like the fact that most of your roster is combined of DA's and the TNA series. That pin looks impressive, but again millions of shots ruins it Short match again Sabin V Daniels - This better be good, cos you'll pay if it isnt Awww . 10 Man - Should be excting if i say so myself. That dropkick was excting OMG, that Gore ruled. That gore ruled as well lol at sting getting hit, i loved that. I'm pleased Rhino is still in this tbh. I really liked the idea of that turn, Steph with hm is very good. Petey V AJ - Not too keen on some words, but thats all a different story. I really like that dumpster. WTF, i see fingers, sucks. That Fame Asser looked really good, and i like that blood. Raven!! Cool! Very Sweet ending there. Good for a first complete show, but please try to make the matches longer. Maybe less matches, and longer matches, uhhh, yeah, that would help.
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Post by greatandpowerfuloz on Dec 16, 2006 11:54:13 GMT -5
GREAT SHOW!!! I thought the close ups where great, the poses where great, and the storylines where great!!!! The only minus was the ramp looked a little sloppy. It was close to a perfect show. 4/5 -[oz]
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Post by perilloboy123 on Dec 16, 2006 21:28:27 GMT -5
Awesome show! I'm going to continue watching it from now on! Tony Montana as general manager is an awesome idea. I was actually thinking about putting Rocky Balboa as a wrestler in my fed.
Nice work. 9.5/10.
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