Dreammotions wrestling federation (DWF #3)

[dreammotions]

[Dan.]

You have the makings of some good work here, but I do have a few pointers:

- Don't be afraid to delete few photos to help it flow better, for instance when Stardust dives out of the ring onto Roman, the running is nice and fast but then it all slows down when he goes into mid-air. If anything, it should be the other way around - I think if you took a couple frames out of the flip it'd feel alot smoother.

- This also goes for any where a hand or a knee pops in for a second, if you deleted those photos it wouldn't make a huge different to the animation itself, but it'd just look a lot tidier.

On the whole though it's decent stuff, you seem to have a good idea of movement and you take plenty of photos - If you just work on having a consistent amount of movement throughout each photo (even if that means deleting a couple) then I think you could improve pretty quickly.

Also, props for trying some really ambitious stuff, that opening tag team move must've been a nightmare to try and do?