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Post by Deleted on Aug 24, 2013 19:59:45 GMT -5
Sierra Hotel Echo The Dolphin India SHIELDEntrance King Championship Leones*(c)vs Jack Stip: Create a Shield Style entrance Leones: Jack: How to vote on matches: 1) State the username of the person you are voting for. (should I even have to say this?) 2) You must give reason on why you have voted this person as the winner. (Could be anything from smoother animation, to most creative. Compare other's animation is recommended) If you cannot complete these simple rules, then your vote won't count and will be deleted on the spot, no exceptions. Note: Alot of users like to get a mark out of 10 (or 5 if you must), but I can't force you to give a mark. Just take it to consideration when voting to make a mark to compare each animation in the match. VOTING ENDS IN 48 HOURS
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Post by el torro on Aug 25, 2013 12:30:19 GMT -5
Leones: Nice job on this. I like the effects you added with the tron and the side tron, that's something not a lot people use. Usually it's just 8 secs of tron, and that's it. But you did a nice job with that. The animation portion was okay, but could've been better. Moving the fans was a nice touch, but the 3 guys's walking, for the most part, looked a bit odd. It's probably because you can't see their legs move, but it still kinda bugged me. Good job on including at least one person hopping over the barricade, though I kinda hoping for you to include all 3 guys hopping over rather than looking at one poster for about 5 seconds. The rest pretty nice however.
Jack: Good effort here, Jack. The McMahon portion was a nice add, but I felt served no purpose really. Again, I'm not a big fan of how people show the tron and nothing else for about 8 secs, but that's just me. Also, I didn't like how 2 guys just appeared on the stage and not shown walking out of the curtain or whatever. The walking looked okay, but I was let down when there was no hopping over the barricade. That kinda took away from the whole thing, since that's what the Shield actually do. Evan jumping onto the apron was really well done, good job on that. But once the camera changes angle, I was a bit confused, because shouldn't Evan be on the other side of the ring and not next to the other two? It was just really confusing, because I couldn't see the other side of the stage and what not. I don't know, maybe it's just me. Overall, good job, but not the best.
VOTE: Leones, I felt he put a bit more effort and though into it.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2013 13:11:37 GMT -5
VOTE: Leones. Appreciate the work from both Jack and Leones but I felt Leones spent more effort into it, The titantron on the Screen and "Side-Screen" And moving the fans while they were climbing the barricade. For Jack, Mcmahon's Touch was nice but I Believe you could have made them climb the barricade instead of making them wide open :/
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2013 13:15:24 GMT -5
Leones: Good entrance, I like the titantron, and the whole entrance, but the entrance was a bit choppy and seemed a bit fidgety, the arena looked very dark, and the jump of sandman looked a bit unrealistic. Jack: WOW, you getting better, I really like this entrance, looked very real and nice, very creative, I BELIEVE IN THE SHIELD And I really love how Vince speak, I got a nice arena/monday night raw feeling Vote: Jack (very close)
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Post by DIESEL on Aug 25, 2013 13:46:52 GMT -5
Leones' animation: Good job! I really like the titantron at the beginning. The WWE Live and SmackDown nameplate was a nice touch. The crowd at the beginning was fidgety and choppy. The three coming in were choppy and a little fidgety. I like the "We Believe" sign. The walking into the ring was a little choppy. I like the taunts at the end, though. Good job! 7/10.Jack's animation: Love Vince at the beginning. Maybe a little fast though. R-Truth and Daniel Bryan coming in were smooth, but a little fast. Like the signs. The titantron was good and the nameplate were amazing. Evan Bourne coming in was smooth, but fast. The whole animation was fidgety in some spots. Some parts were choppy, also, and the camera was shaky. I liked the taunts at the end. 7.5/10.Really close, but Vote: Jack
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2013 15:36:31 GMT -5
Leones: Very nice job. I liked the titan-tron in the beginning and all of the fans were a nice touch, but the fans seemed like choppy, or there was some lag, or just something was off with them. You should have shown more of the Shields entrance instead of the We Believe sign, although it was a nice touch, you just had the sign showing for far to long. Also, when the figs enter the ring it was smooth, like the taunts at the end. It just felt like there wasn't much animation in the video. 6/10
Jack: Loved the way you set up the Shield entrance, Vince speaking, lights go out then BAM! here comes the shield, very nice creative touch. Disappointing becuase there wasn't many crowd members. When D-Bry and Truth enter, the crowd has little to no animation, same with when Bourne enters, the crowd has little to no animation. Would have been nice to see the signs moving up or down or side to side. As far as the figs entering the ring, it was very realistic and very smooth. Loved the way Bourne enters the ring, also very smooth and very realistic. 8/10
WINNER: JACK
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Post by Deleted on Aug 25, 2013 17:04:30 GMT -5
Leones : I liked how you made the smack down little bar there pretty nice and had the tron and ramp added that kind of vibe of a real arena, pretty much really creativity was put together well and nice animating there and was nice how they all came out together at same time nice work here good job. 7.5 /10
Jack : I like the smoothness but some part's seem to fast and I didn't like how the last member came out after the first two and not with the group just felt a bit weird but wasn't bad at all nicely put together but the speed was just to fast for me.
6.7/10
Vote Leones.
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Post by Deleted on Aug 26, 2013 3:18:25 GMT -5
Leones: Animation wise it was alright, didn't have a great flow, the figures were stiff, but anyway, onto the important part, the entrance aspect was nice, I liked the nameplate and the titantron at the start, I felt as though the titantron and sign took over a lot of animation time though, I felt it did do the Shield justice in the way it was done with the taunt and barricade jump, anyway, it was a nice entrance but animation wise it could be improved. 3.5/5 Jack: Animation wise it was better, it was smoother, didn't have good joint movement but it was still better overall, but that's about where it stops, I prefer Leones style of having a green screen instead of just a titantron, it wasn't reminescent of the Shield in the way they enter the arena, I would've liked to see them jump a barricade or two, I like that you added a taunt but when they do the taunt they're usually looking at the camera side, small nitpicking but important to the realism of an entrance. 3/5 Vote: Leones
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Post by Carreiras4 on Aug 26, 2013 5:44:40 GMT -5
Very close match but my vote goes for: LEONES!
Leones: You win because of the effort in the entrance of jump the barrier and all that stuff. Could be a bit smoother, but I understand how hard is to animate with those figures. 7.5/10
Jack: good animation but, very simple entrance, you could do any signature move of the entrance but you didn´t do. very smooth, the joitn movement were good because there wasn´t hard moves to animate. 6.5/10
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Post by wwextreme25 on Aug 26, 2013 17:18:54 GMT -5
Leones: Liked the greenscren you included as your stage looks cool with it but some of the video placing seems odd and unrealistic, try place them better. Im glad the videos didnt play for too long so that was good. The movements from the crowd was a little choppy and not as good as it couldve been but i've animated crowd movements before and i personally think its really hard in a group like that so i'll give you the benefit of the doubt. The way all 3 walked out from the crowd was very well animated and the walking into the ring was also done very well. The thing i didnt like was how you had the camera stay zoomed on a sign with no movement for ages to cut animation from the entrance. Try have as much animation from the entrance guy(s) as possible. Finally i thought the whole thing was kinda short but i thought it was a very well tried animation jack: good effort here man. I like the addded touch of having someone in the ring then the sheild coming to attack. good job. I didnt like mcmahons movements that much though. They were ok but was very fast and looked sped up. Maybe slow down the speed of the animation a little so it flows a little better:) All the movements looked a little fast to me as well. Maybe slow down the animation by 0.01 or even 0.02 and make it a bit more lengthier. In moved i understand you need the right speed but here i think it all looks too fast unlike leones' where it had a nice walking speed. However the animation is very smooth. I like how you had them enter from different parts of the crowd to like they do sometimes in real life so well done on capturing that little feature. Everything was animated very well and smooth but i didnt like the hop over the rope. Seemed fidgety to me. Goof effort though its tough animating more than one guy haha. Vote: Jack because his had more animation of the guys and he added extra details like having them come from seperate parts of the crowd. Leones your was good but seemed like it didnt have a lot too it.
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