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Post by wwextreme25 on Apr 10, 2012 5:08:17 GMT -5
11stopmotion vs Adam Lofthouse
"Two rookies go head to head for pride and braggin' rights"
Stip - Dropkick
11 stopmotion -
AdamLofthouse -
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1) State the username of the person you are voting for. (should I even have to say this?)
2) You must give reason on why you have voted this person as the winner. (Could be anything from smoother animation, to most creative. Compare other's animation is recommended)
If you cannot complete these simple rules, then your vote won't count and will be deleted on the spot, no exceptions.
Note: Alot of users like to get a mark out of 10 (or 5 if you must), but I can't force you to give a mark. Just take it to consideration when voting to make a mark to compare each animation in the match.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 5:15:08 GMT -5
11stopmotion: Not bad, very stiff through-out, needed some more pictures tho, had an alright reaction but needed more movement, camera wasn't shaky, just overall needs some work
AdamLofthouse: Alright animation, not as stiff as 11's, but needed even more pictures, Miz barely moved in mid-air, no reaction but the camera stayed still, needs a lot of work also
Vote: 11stopmotion
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Post by Wes. on Apr 10, 2012 5:23:46 GMT -5
Although both animations were terribly stiff and choppy, my vote goes to 11stopmotion. His flowed better, in my opinion. Adam's had no movement in the arms. I will give Adam SOME credit for taking a little more pics, though.
11stopmotion: 5.5/10
Adam: 4/10
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Post by jdp on Apr 10, 2012 6:10:24 GMT -5
Adam: I Like It, Had A Nice Realilistic Turn, But It Was Really Choppy. 6.5-10 11Stopmotion: Nice Job,Your Improving On Smoothness,But Saw A Little Bit Of String And The Camera Moved. 7-10 Vote 11Stopmotion Sorry Adam
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Post by wwextreme25 on Apr 10, 2012 6:17:04 GMT -5
adam - not your best. It was very fidgety, and the speed was slow. I suggest you move the joints of the figure in every frame you take, get the same amount of spacing in between each pic you take with your figure and try to keep the camera still. Also ou needed a bettter reaction. Just take your time with your animation, dont slack off a bit. 4/10
11stop: nice animation, i like how you interpreted the stip into you own idea. You didnt do a standard dropkick, you had him off the top rope, into a guys head sitting down and it looked good. I liked the impact the most. I think the camera angle was abit weird how you changed it 3 times for a short animation but the flow of the aniamtion was better here 0 tad stiff but it was a better impacted and overall dropkick.
vote: 11 stopmotion
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Post by 0,Y on Apr 10, 2012 6:21:48 GMT -5
first of all, Rob, I think the stip was a Dropkick and not a Leg Drop.
11stopmotion: nice ani, you did a good job on the squad before the jump and the jump itself. The ani needs lots of more pictures as it is choppy but flowed ok. The impact was okay, so was JoMos reaction. During the jump you should have moved Morrison as he just sits there and does nothing.
AdamLofthouseTV: Your ani flowed quite good but the main problem was stiffness, both Miz and Austin (?) were incredibly stiff, especially in the arms. Stone Colds reaction is okay, Miz doesn't have one. He just layed down after the dropkick. As I said it flowed well and it was kinda smooth but the stiffness and missing reaction kills it for me.
Vote: 11stopmotion
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Post by wwextreme25 on Apr 10, 2012 6:24:21 GMT -5
oh yeah i know..it was accident haha! fixed and thanks.
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Post by jake4698 on Apr 10, 2012 6:43:47 GMT -5
AdamLofthouseTV : A meh ani. It's really not your best. Miz needed more air time and it was pretty choppy. It needed few more frames and more work on stiffness. Reaction was pretty decent but it could've been better tough. Shadows were seen in few pics, but it wasn't that distracting. I didn't notice wire and rope bounce was alright. Overall : 4.75/10.
11stopmotion : Pretty good animation. Your best one till now? Movement was pretty smooth and flowed pretty well. It needed few more frames in the jump (mid-air) part even tough. It wasn't shaky at all, and angle of cam was decent. Lighting was great and reaction was impactfull. I didn't see shadows, but just wire. Although, It wasn't distracting. Nice job broski. Overall : 5.5/10.
I vote for 11stopmotion.
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Post by 0,Y on Apr 10, 2012 6:44:42 GMT -5
oh yeah i know..it was accident haha! fixed and thanks. sure thing
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 6:44:55 GMT -5
Ok i can say too both anis, too stiff and shaky.
11: your ani was less stiffer then adams, you moved the arms etc. overall: 4/10
adam: Miz always looked stiff and when he jumps it looks like hes a surfboard. overall: 2/10
vote: 11stopmotion
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Post by ncw on Apr 10, 2012 8:53:38 GMT -5
11stopmotion: I liked that you included a taunt from Daniel Bryan to begin with. Good movement with the arms, a little stiff with the legs though. It would have added to the animation if Morrison was moving through out the animation. Also the reaction was pretty delayed with the dropkick. Rating: 5.0/10Adam: There is no need to insult your entry as it is going to give a bad impression on the voters I don't know if you inverted the dropkick on purpose or by accident but it made it look very original. Pretty stiff through out and the reaction lacks alot. It would have made it better If Austin maybe fell because of the move. Making the dropkick seem more impactful. Rating: 3.0/10Also guys, please refrain from using Youtube links. Because if you use gifs instead it makes it more easier for the voters to give you a rating as we don't have to keep on clicking replay.
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Apr 10, 2012 12:58:53 GMT -5
My vote goes to 11 Stopmotion.
11 Stopmotion: The set up at the beginning was good, the jump at the start was nice but it mid air it become pretty choppy but there was a lot of impact from the delay in frames. But I like John Morrison reaction at the end.
AdamLofthouse: Going into the move it was very stiff and choppy, they way the Miz turned to go into the dropkick looked very awkward and unrealistic. The guy on the turnbuckle didn't really have a good reaction either.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 14:19:28 GMT -5
11stopmotion gets my vote
11 yours was to stiff and jomo should of had a better reaction I dont like your camera angle either but you are improving 5.9 out of 10
Adam it was choppy really stiff and shakey try moving the joints more and a bad reaction the actual move looked really wierd overall 4 out of 10
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Post by MyyQee™ on Apr 10, 2012 17:21:23 GMT -5
11stopmotion: Not bad,I like the idea of the dropkick from the top rope,I like how you moved the arms but they still look stiff and choppy,the impact was nice and reaction either.
Adam:The camera angle was the best,it was very stiff,you have to work on that man,still it was a nice attempt,you barely moved the victim,and the reaction was ok,you have to work on stiffness pretty much but still once again,nice attempt.
Nice work guys, My vote goes to 11stopmotion.
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Post by NEW™ on Apr 10, 2012 22:52:40 GMT -5
11 stopmotion: I have never seen any of your animations, so this is impressive in my sights. I really thought the taunt helped your animation in the beginning, so that's good. I like how you tried to add the squat before the jump. Just a few tips, try to bend the arm, leg, and waist joints. Push the waist joints down, arm joints back, elbow joints foward, and the legs down. It really assists the animation. Now, the animation itself was choppy, so take somemore pictures to aid the animation a bit more. The bending of the joints was mediocre, and I saw some string. But didn't see any shadows or hands, which I think is pretty good. The reaction was actually better than what some animators put out there. But, one thing you need to work on is impact. Make a rope bounce once they hit the mat, and also have a bounce that the wrestlers take because the canvas is springy. Now, the camera is what extremely surprised me. It was not shaky. That is one flaw that most animators have. Now, the angle changes got to stop, because if you have too many of those, it ruins the animation. In one animation, you should only have about two angle changes to the max. But, the lighting was nice suggesting it was flash. Not fidgety or floaty at all, but one nit pick I have to say is that move the other people while the other is moving. It makes the animation realistic. It was an alright animation based on others, but a nice animation to my standards. OVERALL: 3.5/10
AdamLofthouse I liked the squat in the beginning, but, as I said on 11 stopmotion's, you need to have those joints bent, or you are in some trouble. The whole animation was choppy, which MEANS you have to take a whole lotta pictures to have it smooth. The camera was shaky the whole animation, but, the camera was not blurry, and the lighting was pretty well done. The angle could have been zoomed in a bit more. I did spot some shadows, however, I didn't see any hands or string. Maybe the reaction was a bit fidgety, but not really floaty at all. The reaction needs a whole lot more work, like have him showing some pain, or something like that. I don't want a Rock sell or anything, but a bit of pain. Now, I am happy that you included a rope bounce into the animation, because that really adds realism to the animation. Now, before the drop kick and during the drop kick, the victim needs to be moving during it because it adds some realism, and also you don't want him to look limp and dead. So, good job. OVERALL: 3/10
WINNER: 11 stopmotion
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Post by Deleted on Apr 10, 2012 23:40:28 GMT -5
i vote for 11stopmotion because his is actually a drop kick, and its smoother. Adam, i don't know man but it looks like.. some spinning whatever. So my vote goes to 11 stopmotion. but Try taking more pictures.
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