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Post by "Living Legend" Duttanized on Mar 3, 2012 17:13:46 GMT -5
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Post by jake4698 on Mar 3, 2012 18:16:28 GMT -5
I vote for LKS as #1. Your animation was yet again, the best one out of all these. All the animations were choppy tough. Yours wasn't that stiff, it had a great lighting, and a nice angle of camera. I also didn't notice strings/shadows, and it had a really great ropes bounce. However, the animation seemed like if it needed few more pictures in the tornado itself. Regardless, the DDT was great, and the impact was realistic, and the reaction was pretty good. The animation was smooth overall, but seemed a bit slow in the beginning otherwise. Great job Audie - Nice animation. I vote for Wes as #2. His animation seemed to be the second best animation after LKS'. It was very realistic & it wasn't that stiff. It had a great lighting and a nice angle of pics. I didn't notice lots of flaws besides thet fact that you should've edited edited strings and speeded up the ani. Also, it would've been better if you've lifted Jericho's knees in the impact - It would've looked way better and more realistic. Otherwise, it was great. It's one of your best latest anis. I liked these slight and unnoticeable angles' change. Pretty nice touch. Also, nice reaction. Great job as well bro I vote for Myyqee as #3. To be honest dude, this is one of your fails. I didn't really like how it turned out. It looked quite choppy. The only part that wasn't is the reaction/impact which was great and realistic. Otherwise, it was smooth in some parts, I liked the DDT, It had a great lighting, a decent strings' edit (we could notice that you edited strings in one or in two frames), and it had a nice angle of pics as well. It needed more pictures too in the other hand. Sorry bro, this isn't your best. Maybe, needed to be practiced more before handing-in /: I vote for Scott[/] as #4.
His animation was my least favorite between all these. It was the most choppy one and it was a bit slow. It was stiff, it needed more pictures too, and it didn't have a reaction. String was really noticeable. However, the cam wasn't shaking and it a decent angle, but the ani was a fail overall. Try working on stiffness, on taking more pictures, on editing strings, and on practising the move before handing in as well. Sorry Scott :x
Sorry for my poopty vote again | Good luck guys
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Post by wwextreme25 on Mar 3, 2012 18:37:53 GMT -5
#4 - scottsorry bro but this ani is way below your usual standard. Looks like something you wouldve animated back in early 2010. Very choppy - it looked as though there was like 5 pics in the mid air bit - you can do WAY better i know you can. Nice setup and lighting but i think the animation wasnt quite yoru best buddy. Better luck next time...5.5/10 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- #3 - myyqeenow i dunno if you like...couldnt be bothered or something but..(lemme say something first) WE WANT 6 SIDED RING BACK WITH ELITE JOMO (((( Nice animation, untill it got to the air time and then i think you had the speed set WAY too fast. Look at lks' it didnt have loadsa pics and didnt look very smooth, but it flowed well as it had the right speed....so maybe if you lowered the speed a bit it would be bettter? cool lighting saw no string but the mid air complicated part of the ani let you down im afraid bro :/ 6.5/10 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- #2 -wesnice animation i did like punks movements on the turn into the ddt however i though overall both figures were stiff. the main thing that i let you off with here is the flow of your animation is really nice and itwasnt that choppy. Myyqee and scott had loadsa missing frames in the twists and turns but your was constant so good job. 7/10 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ #1- LIKUSbrilliant animation...you shouuldve had jeff run throughout the whole thing not just AFER he bounced off the ropes. But the overall flow was cool..nice speed...maybe a few more pics were needed however it was cool and by far the most fluid and consistent ani in this match .great job you continue to amaze me. 8.5/10
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Mar 3, 2012 19:17:34 GMT -5
1# LKS: The set up was great and the throw into the ropes was nice, the running looked great it was smooth and it wasn't stiff or choppy. The Headsissor Tornado DDT had prefect speed, the speed was realistic fast to the point where I couldn't really see the move completely. Very smooth, great impact, incredible reaction, nice rope bounce. ____________________________________________________________________________________ #2 Wes: The set was ok, the turn and rotation in the Headsissor Tornado DDT looked smooth, it flowed very well and it didn't look choppy but the figures looked stiff for the most part. The DDT itself had good impact and I like Jericho's reaction. ____________________________________________________________________________________ #3 Scott: The set up was good, the beginning of the Headsissor Tornado DDT flowed well but the rotation and turns involved were very choppy. I did however like the way Matt Hardy ended in the DDT though. ____________________________________________________________________________________ #4 Myyqee: The animation overall looked incredibly fast and choppy. It didn't flow well do the the lack of pics between movements, turn and rotation so the animation looked like it skipped over. The reaction look amazing as usual though, that part was up to your usual standards.
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Post by Deleted on Mar 3, 2012 20:14:41 GMT -5
#1 lks really good saw no wire but it could of used more photos 8 out of 10 #2 Wes really good for wires it's rather you take them. All out or none I respect that but since you did none your #2 in my book btw yours was way smoother than lks 7.9 out of 10 #3 Scott really smooth but I saw wire and looks like it was missing some photos at the end 6 out of 10 #4 Mc really choppy looks like an 11stopmotion production ceramic shook missing photos and fridgety and couldn't tell what move it was 3 out of 10
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Post by /X Metal Sorenges x "Mac Oh J~ on Mar 3, 2012 20:18:39 GMT -5
#1 lks really good saw no wire but it could of used more photos 8 out of 10 #2 Wes really good for wires it's rather you take them. All out or none I respect that but since you did none your #2 in my book btw yours was way smoother than lks 7.9 out of 10 #3 Scott really smooth but I saw wire and looks like it was missing some photos at the end 6 out of 10 #4 Mc really choppy looks like an 11stopmotion production ceramic shook missing photos and fridgety and couldn't tell what move it was 3 out of 10 For beginner's champion, I really suggest you posts with more thorough detail and analyze more. Talk about more pros and con and what they could do better.
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Post by [The Ukrainian One] Dimburuk on Mar 4, 2012 9:15:37 GMT -5
N.1 LKS His was most smooth, not stiff, move flowed great, it was realistic, build up and reaction look amazing. No strings, shadows. N.2 Wes Smooth, realistic only a liiil bit stiff, amazing flow, but needs a better build up and reaction. I saw strings. A lot better than first round ani. N.3 Myyqee Not your best. It was choppy and fast. It didnt flow well. Reaction was good, but else.. meh. N.4 Scott Really not your best. Very choppy, slow and stiff. Reaction ruined the ani also. Saw strings.
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Post by Zack on Mar 4, 2012 9:34:31 GMT -5
#1- LKS Great Job man, very smooth, realistic, great build up, great impact, great air time, great reaction and great rope bounces. No flaw at all, love this animation man, 10/10 #2- Wes Great Job Wes, very smooth, not stiff and great impact. Reaction wasnt the best and I also see strings. Cm Punk wasnt moving after the move too. Not bad but you can do better, 7/10 #3- Myyqee Good Job Myyqee, the move is too fast but it was smooth. I cant really see what you did there but it was stiff, too fast and I saw shadows. The reason I picked you as #3 is because yours was slightly better than Scott's because his was very stiff and have really bad reaction. Good job Myyqee, I'm sure you can do better tho. 6/10 #4- Scott Good Job Scott, very smooth but very stiff, bad reaction, saw hands, saw strings, a little too fast and reaction is bad, but good attempt, I'm sure you can do better, 5/10
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Post by Scotty on Mar 4, 2012 10:12:42 GMT -5
I told you I didnt want my ani used -_- If I knew it was going to i wouldve remade it
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