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Hey guys I'm new to pivot and this is my third pivot animation
If you guys would give me tips and ways to improve I would appreciate it

Anyways here is the animation

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Hey not bad zws982, The Shooting Star Press looked really nice. but it was
somewhat stiff, lacked impact and lacked a reaction, next time work on those
areas and it should look perfect in no time.

[done]

Feed your sticks some food
It's an alright animation.
But look out for things like:
Putting the sticks behind the ring.

The animation is also floaty, the getting ready to jump part was ok but I think you should of lifted the stick and straightened its legs as it is in the lift off position.
The reaction of the opponent was ok but I think you should of lift up its head a bit.
Try to also make the sticks go a bit into the ring then back on the surface for better impact.

[alexgg]

The movements are there, with practise you could become pretty good.
I liked the jump, because a lot of beginners dont even bend the legs.
could do with some more movement, and a few frames removed or altered, but its pretty good imo.