Tylor
Main Eventer
Joined on: Dec 23, 2008 18:17:08 GMT -5
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Post by Tylor on Sept 17, 2011 16:30:41 GMT -5
(Not my style)
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Post by Deleted on Sept 18, 2011 15:01:01 GMT -5
I like the jump! Damn that's smooth as hell! And it looks really nice, good reactions too!
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Post by dustinpwi on Sept 18, 2011 15:31:38 GMT -5
Extremely stiff it looks like you rotated the stick and didn't move the joints at all, the jump didn't have any effort to it it looks like a 3 frame jump, the air time was okay but sorta slow, i don't know if it is my cpu but it looks choppy and without flow and the reactions aren't the best but they same to fit well with this animations.
good job...
Courtesy?
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Tylor
Main Eventer
Joined on: Dec 23, 2008 18:17:08 GMT -5
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Post by Tylor on Sept 18, 2011 15:37:11 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments guys. Not sure how it turned out stiff.
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Post by picfedguy on Sept 20, 2011 3:20:43 GMT -5
It's a nice ani but on the whole I felt that it was a bit on the slow side particularly during the air time. During the take off the arm positioning looked off and just weird - like you should have had the sticks arms go infront during prep then during the take off moved them behind the stick like you did. Not really a problem but I think that you should have extended the back more like Jeff used to, I know that he doesn't really do it so much now but I think that it would make the animation look much better. Reactions were alright though lacking impact and being cut short. Overall it's a very nice animation but you need to get some of the things I mentioned sorted like the speed of it.
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