Adam
Mid-Carder
Formerly known as Checkers
Joined on: Jun 4, 2011 19:52:29 GMT -5
Posts: 155
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Post by Adam on Sept 10, 2011 19:48:46 GMT -5
 i think its probably one of my best |
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Tylor
Main Eventer
Joined on: Dec 23, 2008 18:17:08 GMT -5
Posts: 4,437
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Post by Tylor on Sept 10, 2011 19:54:25 GMT -5
It's stiff and fidgety, so work on that. Reactions are missing. Kinda slow on the airtime. But considering how long you've been animating, nice animation!
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Joined on: Nov 17, 2024 17:02:40 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Sept 11, 2011 5:45:10 GMT -5
Wow! I like this one dude! Your improving fast! Its just a little stiff, but atleast you included a jump! The airtime is sort of floaty so maybe speed it up to 14 or 15, Blue's reactions are stiff and fidgety and white didn't move that much but still its a pretty great animation!
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Post by picfedguy on Sept 20, 2011 3:29:43 GMT -5
Pretty sure this is your newest, so anyway I feel that though there have been some slight improvements over your last couple animations your not really improving a whole lot. Like though it isn't as stiff as your others there's still a lot of joints that your not moving in certain parts like the white's back throughout or the white's lower leg joint, you really need to get on that as until you do your not really gonna get anywhere. You've got a pretty good consistent speed going though maybe a few more frames here and there. Impact and reactions were lacking. Overall though again the main thing to focus on the moment though is just getting rid of the stiffness 'cause as soon as you start moving all the joints you'll really start to see the improvement. Anyway it's good that your animating consistently and I hope that you keep that up as I see you becoming one of the better animators on the board.
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