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Post by Deleted on Sept 3, 2011 10:47:12 GMT -5
Everyone loves a pre-show battle royal!20 BEGINNER BATTLE ROYAL #1 Contender match for the beginners championshipStip: ~ Randy Orton 2nd rope ddt R3G4N The Real PenguinNico* Fuego* Cobain* YMH* CoopermanDan* Wwegaggz123* [The Ukrainian One] Dimburuk* The Jackmeister* NickEAW122409* Checkers* Smileyman911 * Autistic animator wse* Wwfentertainment* DrNefariousFTW* NEW* Alphaanimations*replacement: The Bryan* Nico* Fuego* YMH* Cooperman* Dan* Wwegaggz123* [The Ukrainian One] Dimburuk* The Jackmeister* EAW122409* Checkers* Smileyman911 * Autistic animator wse* Wwfentertainment* DrNefariousFTW* NEW* The Bryan
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Post by cooperman on Sept 3, 2011 10:54:04 GMT -5
I send the animation yesterday! It's cooperman!
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Post by ncw on Sept 3, 2011 10:57:35 GMT -5
Good luck everyone
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Post by Deleted on Sept 3, 2011 11:03:44 GMT -5
I send the animation yesterday! It's cooperman! your animation is there, I just forgot to put a star by your name
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Post by wwextreme25 on Sept 3, 2011 11:04:56 GMT -5
nico: it all went very fast and the lighting was very distracting as it kept flashing vigorously. The ddt was very stiff and there was hardly any reaction. 3.5/10
fuego: it wasnt bad, nice lighting but the camera angle was too close imo and it was a bit choppy in the ddt. There was also no reaction which was dissapointing to see. 3/10
YMH: i thought that the whole thing was very choppy and fidgety. It had a Reasonablew amount of pics but some were unessesscary giving it a fidgety look to it. It was kinda hard to watch. 3.5/10
cooperman: So far this is the best ani. I thought that the taunt was nice but his arm was stiff. Also sheamus was stiff during impact but it had a good amount of pics which was nice to see. Good effort. 4.5/10
Dan: i liked how orton walked up to angle but iu thought that the ani was very slow. It lacked a few pics also here and there but it was a good effort. 4/10
Wwegaggzz: I liked this ani. I dont get what that crosshatch shadow or whatever that was on the wall, but the animations was smooth. I didnt like how orton walked, he kinda slid as apposed to actually moving his legs. Improve on that. The reaction was choppy but the move as a whole wasnt a bad effort. 5/10
ukraine-dimburuk: I thought that your ani was the smoothest so far. During mid-air (if you like) punks arms were very stiff but his legs WERE NOT which is good to see. The reaction wasnt too long but it was overall a good effort at the move. 5/10
jackmeister: A great animation. Very VERY smooth my friend but you need to work on stiffness which is what let you down in this but overall, it was very good. 6/10
EAW: I like the lighting and i saw no string. I thought personally that the move lacked a few photos. It was reasonably smooth but you need to work on stiffness. 5/10
checkers: The move was EXTREMELY stiff and i saw string which didnt look very realistic. I like how orton (batista) climbed out of the ring for a chair. very creative. but the move itself was fidgety and choppy. 4.5/10
smiley man: The move was a bit choppy but it was a reasonably good speed. It looked as tho you took little photos which kinda recked the ani a bit but again, a good attempt. 4/10
autistic animtor: Sorry dude but this ani was VERY choppy and looked only about 10 photos. It was very bad and you need to take way more pics and move the joints. 2.5/10
wwfentertainment: The pull off the rope onto the ropes was extremely choppy, about 3 photos? but i liked the ddt onto the chair, the way the cahir dismantled into bits looked very good. Need to take more pics to improve. 4/10
drnef: The kick was very good but i disliked the various camera angle changes. The ddt was smooth overall but work on stiffness. 5.5/10
the bryan:it had a decent amount of pics but the ddt itself was again, extremely stiff so work on that. I also saw string but nonetheless it was a decent effort. 4/10 NEW:The animation was great. I loved the build up as the clothesline had great impact, AS TOO DID THE DDT! i just thought that it was a bit fidgety but it was nonetheless a great attempt. 5/10
VOTE: JACKMEISTER
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Post by M on Sept 3, 2011 11:54:29 GMT -5
Woah big match. D: Nico: Kind of reminds me of Sabin's old anis. Nice lighting, pretty smooth, could of used a few more frames in different places, didn' really like how the camera suddenly moved on impact, i suggest never change the camera angle on impact, it makes it looks choppy. But still nice job. Fuego: It has an alright amount of frames, both guys were pretty stiff, you should really invest in a tripod because the camera was shaky the entire animation, no impact or reaction from both guys kind let the animation down a lot. Needs improvement. YMH: Pretty much the same as your animation i commented on before, stiff, a bit choppy, very fidgety, but good editing/lighting. The big thing you need to work on is not moving the figures around too much. Cooperman: I really liked this, kinda reminds me of an old Mr. Rocky/Ryry ani. Pretty smooth but very stiff, just try to bend the joints in a more realistic way, like bending Bournes elbow or Sheamus' legs more. Nice impact/reaction, i like how Sheamus bounced up. Dan: Very slow, try comparing your animation to the move in real life, if it comes out choppy add more frames, not horribly stiff, but pretty stiff, just make sure to move the joints in every frame, Kurt didn't move a muscle during the falling of the DDT. wwegaplehnumberzz: Pretty fast/choppy, i like how Orton threw his legs forward and the impact/reaction was good. Alright animation, just try to get a few more frames in. Dimburuk: Nice job, very smooth, flowed nicely, pretty stiff, could of used a bit more of an impact and reaction. Also i thought it was a bit lazy that you left the string laying in the ring. But still, great job. Jackmeister: Good lord that was smooth. Flowed really nicely for the amount of frames it had, was a bit stiff during strikers taunt and after Angle got hit it was really stiff. Overall the build up and reaction were great, but the actual move lacked impact. EAWnumbernumbernumbernumber: I don't want to sound a like a dick, but it was a bit meh. I mean, it was just the move, it needed more of a build up/ending. Still smooth and had some okay movements. Checkers: The idea was good, but the animation needs work, it was a bit all over the place, choppy at parts, fidgety, stiff, some string was edited some wasn't. Needs quite a lot of work. mannumbers: Good job, nice lighting, the animation just needs a little work, add some more frame, move the joints more, added a little more of an impact. Still nice job. Wse: Needs a lot of work, i don't want to be too mean but i had no idea what happened. I suggest that you try to make your animations as smooth as possible and go ahead from there. Because i saw Bryan go from one side of the ring to the other in less than a frame. Wwfe: Nice use of the chair, good try at editing but it was a little off in some places, the animation needs quite a lot of work, very stiff and pretty choppy in some places. Drnef: It okay i guess, all the angles made it hard to watch, just try to work on those, don't have an angle on one side of the ring to the next, try to use diagonals it makes the animation flow better. It flowed pretty good, was a bit stiff, the reaction was a bit awkward and i really suggest getting a better source of light. NEW: Nice! One of your best animations, nice build up, flowed pretty good, it was just a bit unrealistic in places. Bryan: I know i'm getting lazy towards the end, and i'm kinda repeating myself ._. Pretty stiff and choppy. But nice impact and reactions. SO MANY ANIMATIONS, IKR I GET REPETITIVE, SO BASICALLY THEY ALL ARE A PRETTY STIFF AND A BIT CHOPPY BUT HAD NICE IMPACTS AND REACTIOSN. Anyway i'm going with: Jackmeister (I just suggest taking a few less frames, it will make your animations have more realism and avoid stiffness c:)
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Post by [The Ukrainian One] Dimburuk on Sept 3, 2011 12:04:01 GMT -5
Good luck to all, my ani sucked Jack is gonna win this, but i'm gonna win begginer's title Atleast i hope ;D
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Post by Deleted on Sept 3, 2011 12:54:26 GMT -5
good luck everyone ;D
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Post by ncw on Sept 3, 2011 13:19:53 GMT -5
I defiantly see Jack winning :L
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Post by mrrocky619 on Sept 3, 2011 13:21:30 GMT -5
Nico: i liked how he shook his head before he did the move. there was a lot of lighting changes, i saw string, it was really stiff. and the reaction looked a little delayed. 3.5/10
fuego: the camera was really shaky which just destroyed the animation. it looked like it was maybe 10 frames at the most and all you did was have him fall back, no reaction, no nothing. 1/10
ymh: pretty good if i do say so myself. really fidgety but you took a good amount of frames. it was quite stiff. it looked like you tried to have randy slap his back, which i really liked cause it made it realistic. just work on the fidgets and you could be really good. 4.5/10
dan or cooperman (not sure which): looked a little to slow, the string was really distracting and it looked like you used way to much. it was uber stiff. the reaction couldve been better but it looked ok. 2/10
Wwegaggz123: first of all, that title slide at the beginning really wasnt necessary and it went on way to long. the animation was a little to fast. you had it at a good speed you just need to take a few more pictures. it looked as if randy didnt take any steps, he just slid? the reaction was decent but again, uber fast. just work on the speed factor. 4.5/10
dimburuk: looked really good. saw string. it was smooth enough but the reaction was really lacking. 5/10
jackmeister: really smooth. uber stiff. really good reaction. no string seen. just work on stiffness. your anis remind me of my old anis and your arena looks just like mine. if it wasnt so stiff it would be an amazing ani, maybe even hf/euro title worthy tbh... 6.5/10
Bry Bry: i liked the speed. didnt see any string. the reaction sorta lacked but i liked what you did with it. 5/10
checkers: camera was quite shaky. the chair grab was quite unnecessary, but i liked it. the whole ani was uber choppy. but i really liked the ddt part even though it was also slow and choppy, it was still really nice for some unknown reason. saw string. uber stiff. 3.5/10
smileyman: really liked this. it didnt look very stiff. when he picked up cena it was really fidgety and the actual move was also fidgety, but decent reaction and the lighting was good. 4.5/10
not gonna reply to the other few cause ive already decided a winner. sorry.
vote: Jackmeister.
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Post by Zack on Sept 4, 2011 0:14:36 GMT -5
This goes down to The Bryan,Smileyman911,EAW,Jack,Dimburuk and Cooperman. The Bryan:Nice Job,I can see your improving Very Smooth,Burchill was very stiff,reaction seemed rushed and I saw shadows.Great Job anyway 4/10 Smileyman911:Great job,Very smooth,you took too less pictures on the lift up,Very stiff,Reaction is bad but I like how you made Orton sit up.But next time,make Orton look at Cena after the impact.Great Job 4.5/10 EAW:Wow,Wow sexy animation Brian Great Job,but when you animate next time,get a video of the move your animating so you wouldnt screw up like this one.Because if you could watch a second rope ddt,The opponent wouldnt fly away after the ddt.Great Job,Very smooth,Cm punk was very stiff,You should bend Orton's knee joints,Reaction is bad but I like the rope shake.Great job once again. 6/10 Jack of Jacks:Amazing,You really shouldnt stay on Beginner tbh Jack.It's not giving other beginners a chance at the title shot :/ Very smooth,Love the taunt,Very realistic,Great Reaction,Not really stiff,Great job overall 8/10 Dimburuk:Great Job,Very Smooth,Very stiff,saw strings,Dead reaction is just....bad :/ and Orton should had stayed in the position where he's standing,not moving across the ring during the impact.Great Job anyway,5/10 Cooperman:Wow,dude,you seriously improved I like the taunt,Very smooth in some parts,very choopy in some parts too and the reaction really isnt needed.By the reaction,I meant the little flop Sheamus did.And also like I said to EAW,You should really watch a second rope ddt before animating the move itself because no opponent had flowed over Orton after the ddt. Great Job but not enough to beat Jack...6.5/10 All of you guys here just made a taunt or a dead reaction after the ddt,which in serious,isnt needed.You guys should have made it a little more realistic like a pin or Orton getting up and do the crazy taunt before his RKO(Because most of the time,after the second rope ddt,Orton gets ready for the RKO).Great Job to ALL of you But these people I had just commented on their anis were slightly better than the rest.Great Job to Jack,You had won this battle royal but I really recommend you going to the mid carder section because no beginner would actually had a chance against you(well probaly,Dimburuk or EAW or Cooperman will have a chance but I also suggested these guys to go to the mid carder section) So My vote goes to Jack of Jacks
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Post by NEW™ on Sept 4, 2011 7:53:57 GMT -5
This goes down to The Bryan,Smileyman911,EAW,Jack,Dimburuk and Cooperman. The Bryan:Nice Job,I can see your improving Very Smooth,Burchill was very stiff,reaction seemed rushed and I saw shadows.Great Job anyway 4/10 Smileyman911:Great job,Very smooth,you took too less pictures on the lift up,Very stiff,Reaction is bad but I like how you made Orton sit up.But next time,make Orton look at Cena after the impact.Great Job 4.5/10 EAW:Wow,Wow sexy animation Brian Great Job,but when you animate next time,get a video of the move your animating so you wouldnt screw up like this one.Because if you could watch a second rope ddt,The opponent wouldnt fly away after the ddt.Great Job,Very smooth,Cm punk was very stiff,You should bend Orton's knee joints,Reaction is bad but I like the rope shake.Great job once again. 6/10 Jack of Jacks:Amazing,You really shouldnt stay on Beginner tbh Jack.It's not giving other beginners a chance at the title shot :/ Very smooth,Love the taunt,Very realistic,Great Reaction,Not really stiff,Great job overall 8/10 Dimburuk:Great Job,Very Smooth,Very stiff,saw strings,Dead reaction is just....bad :/ and Orton should had stayed in the position where he's standing,not moving across the ring during the impact.Great Job anyway,5/10 Cooperman:Wow,dude,you seriously improved I like the taunt,Very smooth in some parts,very choopy in some parts too and the reaction really isnt needed.By the reaction,I meant the little flop Sheamus did.And also like I said to EAW,You should really watch a second rope ddt before animating the move itself because no opponent had flowed over Orton after the ddt. Great Job but not enough to beat Jack...6.5/10 All of you guys here just made a taunt or a dead reaction after the ddt,which in serious,isnt needed.You guys should have made it a little more realistic like a pin or Orton getting up and do the crazy taunt before his RKO(Because most of the time,after the second rope ddt,Orton gets ready for the RKO).Great Job to ALL of you But these people I had just commented on their anis were slightly better than the rest.Great Job to Jack,You had won this battle royal but I really recommend you going to the mid carder section because no beginner would actually had a chance against you(well probaly,Dimburuk or EAW or Cooperman will have a chance but I also suggested these guys to go to the mid carder section) So My vote goes to Jack of JacksUmmm, I'm not arguing who you voted for, I'm just saying, I didn't do a dead reaction, neither did a taunt. I did a reaction and had Randy Orton set up for the RKO. Just sayin, but I don't really care.
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Post by Zack on Sept 4, 2011 9:00:29 GMT -5
lol okey so everyone EXPECT NEW
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Post by Deleted on Sept 5, 2011 13:51:37 GMT -5
I did add a little Orton taunt
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Post by bloodxtremefigures on Sept 5, 2011 13:57:22 GMT -5
GODDAMIT 20 BEGINNERS :X Nico: The Lighting is good, the animation is choppy and a bit shaky. The headmoving is choppy. When Morrison started the DDT, the cam changed a bit. Morrison was extremly stiff and you didn't changed his left arm, it was always the same position. Carlito didnt had a reaction, he just rolled on the back. Overall: 3.8/10 Fuego: The Lightning is good, the animation is choppy and shaky. I dont like that Randy looks into the camera and then starts the ddt, because you didnt made many pics, thats why it looks extremly choppy after randy looked to us. Both were stiff and you didnt made a reaction. Overall: 1.9/10 YMH: The Lighting is good, the animation is choppy and shaky. Well the DDT itself is good. But when Orton and Matt Hardy hitting the ground, its extremly fidgey. Overall: 3.1/10 Cooperman: The Lighting is good, the animation is choppy and a bit shaky. The Taunt at the start is extremly stiff. Sheamus is fidgey while Evan is hitting the ddt. Overall: 4/10 Dan: The Lighting is good, the animation is choppy and a bit shaky. I like, that Randy Orton is walking to Angle, but Angle didn't moved while Orton is walking to Angle. It would look better, if Orton would stop before ddt'ing Angle. Angle didnt have a reaction. The Animation should be faster. Overall: 4.5/10 wwegaggz123: The Lighting is good, the animation is choppy and not shaky. It looks very weird, that Randy is sliding to Rey and not walking. It looks good, how Randy is moving his head. The DDT is very choppy and the reaction is fidgey. Overall: 4.2/10 [WFRchairman] Dimburuk: The Lighting is orange (i dont like i tbh ) and its a bit choppy and not shaky. The headmoving is stiff, like the whole DDT. Your fault, that you used a ra figure as the opponment for randy orton. Overall: 4.4/10 The Jackmeister: The Lightning is good, the animation is not choppy or shaky. Well it looks bad, that Matt Striker is sliding and not walking at the beginning. But the DDT is just WOW. Very Smooth and the reaction is great. Overall: 7/10 EAW122409: The Lightning is good, the animation is not choppy or shaky. The DDT is very smooth, but you should had add a reaction. Overall: 6.6/10 Checkers: The Lightning is good, the animation is choppy and shaky. It's creative, that Batista is getting a chair, but Chris Jericho is very stiff and it looks weird, that he's just moving a bit in some pics. The DDT is stiff and slow. Overall: 3.8/10 smileyman911: The Lightning is good, the animation is choppy and shaky. The walking is good, but how randy's taking cena is fidgey. the ddt is slow. Overall: 3.9/10 Autistic animator wse: The Lightning is a bit dark, but still good, the animation is extremly choppy and extremly shaky. I cant say anything because it's so shaky. Overall: 1/10 Wwfentertainment: The Lightning is good, the animation is choppy and a bit shaky. How Randy is taking Kenny Dykstra is choppy and the DDT itself is choppy, too. I like the Chair Breake. Overall: 2.9/10 DrNefariousFTW: The Lightning is good, the animation is a bit choppy and not shaky. I dont like how the camera angle changed, looks weird. When Ted is on the Ropes, it looks like his feeds are on the ground The DDT is slow. Overall: 3/10 NEW: The Lightning is orange (I don't like it ), the animation is a bit choppy and not shaky. I don't like, how the camera angle changed. The headchanging is good. I like the reaction of Dolph Ziggler. Overall: 4.1/10 The Bryan: The Lightning is good, the animation is not choppy or shaky. The DDT is stiff and there's not really a reaction. Overall: 4.4/10 My Vote: Jackmeister
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