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Post by Deleted on Aug 21, 2011 21:15:18 GMT -5
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Hoboturtle
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Post by Hoboturtle on Aug 21, 2011 21:29:24 GMT -5
First the jump is wrong, he arms should be infront of him atleast. Its choppy during the airtime and the flips, however the jump prep although its wrong is smooth. The Recievers reactions are good but the attackers could be better. Also the airtime needs to be fixed as he barely goes up in the air. 6/10 or 3/5.
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Tylor
Main Eventer
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Post by Tylor on Aug 21, 2011 21:35:16 GMT -5
not to sure if I like the jump used here. Airtime is kind of fast. Pretty smooth for the most part. 6/10.
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Post by dustinpwi on Aug 23, 2011 19:43:16 GMT -5
move the arms more like when he jumps out make the arms go infront and up! then make a curl to make it look like a spin like you did in this animation but this an improvement and it shows that you have been everyones advice and CC  |
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