Phoenix Nitro
Mid-Carder
Joined on: Jul 26, 2010 16:49:39 GMT -5
Posts: 404
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Post by Phoenix Nitro on Aug 20, 2011 16:25:01 GMT -5
Maybe my best???
Credits:Dustin's folder for the midgets and Tylor for te ladderRate/Hate/Reply
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Post by picfedguy on Aug 20, 2011 23:27:29 GMT -5
Alright so a pretty good animation here man, first thing I noticed was that there was no real jump preparation, like you just skipped right into the moonsault which come off as looking lazy. Also though maybe not a problem to everyone I think that the arms should have been back more if you get what I mean so that there is more momentum and power going into the flip. Airtime was alright but you started moving the stick down too quickly, it's a simple fix really just throw in a few more frames on the way up so that it doesn't look so sudden. Reactions and impact were sort of there but looked half done and like not much effort was put into them, on the whole you need to move the joints more (try to move every joint in every frame) and though it's not exactly choppy it could use some more frames to make it a bit smoother. Good job.
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