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Post by Deleted on May 22, 2011 6:10:36 GMT -5
I hope you guys like it
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Post by Deleted on May 22, 2011 14:13:01 GMT -5
Very nice.
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Post by Deleted on May 22, 2011 14:25:59 GMT -5
Please, give me a proper responce
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Ross
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Post by Ross on May 23, 2011 7:27:53 GMT -5
[green]I thought the animation was quite good, however I think you need to work on your stiffness about because the stick doing the 450's legs didn't move it seemed. It was also abit to quick throughout for my liking. Also when the stick jumps off the rope you should have added a little rope bounce there to make it more realistic. The reaction was ok, The rope bounce was kinda weird since it seemed to just go up once then stop. But I did like this ani and I only point out the bad things to help you improve.
*Sorry for a short comment.*[/green]
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Post by wwextreme25 on Jun 2, 2011 7:09:02 GMT -5
nice. i liked it, yet it was a bit too fast...other than that good attempt
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Post by xtremestopmotion01 on Jun 2, 2011 21:03:53 GMT -5
I like, pretty good keep it up.
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r44gz96
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Post by r44gz96 on Jun 7, 2011 14:11:42 GMT -5
Looks great. However there is some problems with it, especially the grounded stick as usually it should react before the move actually hits to get impact (as seen with some of the past animators). Also the grounded stick at the end still has its hand in the air giving a little fault. As Ross said you could have added some rope bounce. It was quite fast aswell. But other than that there's not many other flaws with the animation. The stick doing the 450 is executed really well. Also the background your using works great. You have great potential in you and I expect to see you going places in pivot!
7/10
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