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Post by [The Ukrainian One] Dimburuk on Feb 4, 2011 10:39:16 GMT -5
Hey there. It's my first pivot ever,sorry for bad reaction,i don't know how to do nice trampoline/ropes shakes. *Credit to JesseV1 for style*
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Post by picfedguy on Feb 4, 2011 12:35:50 GMT -5
Off to a very good start man. First off though smooth the animation as a whole looks very slow because of the amount of frames that you used - you should probably cut down on the amount that you use by a fair bit to get a good speed going. It got really stiff at some points with you not moving some of the joints for several frames at a time, an easy fix to this is to try and move every joint in every frame - the sooner you start doing this the better. The movements were pretty good though during the part before the move the stick should have gotten more height into the move, also the air time was lacking a jump going into it which never looks good - you should always do the jump because otherwise it just looks like the figure is floating up into the air. Reactions were pretty weak too, you should add in a slight bounce when the sticks hit the canvas for impact then do a reaction to the move. Overall a good start, I'd say that the most important things for you to work on are cutting down on the amount of frames and getting rid of stiffness - also personally I wouldn't bother with the rope bounces and such at this point, but yeah good start, I hope to see some more from you in the future.
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