unsure.

[Dan.]

I love the white's movement. not so pleased with the blue's.

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[alexgg]

Welll... it started off alright.. but then uhhhh what happened? lol.
Its like a bunch of frames are missing, the impact and reactions are choppy and the speed changes are woaaahhhhooo.
The spacing at the start looks alright, the jump and transition.
I like the first flip from the rebound too, the rest is dooomed.

[xReyAlsanecx]

Movements are great,this would be awesome if it wasnt so fast and choppy and had better reactions.

[RCW]

Yep, You Tell The Truth You Suck.

Jokes!

It Was ok, It flowed ok, But I Didnt understand it

[Ian]

dan what happend lol :L
start was amazing and cartoony but the he completly changed poses just like that making it crapchoppy but the whole animation is rather stiff but there was a slight cartoony feel to it which i like:) you really should ease out of an animation meaning you make the movements get smaller as it ends. keep trying

[picfedguy]

The first jump was very well done, spacing was there, joints were bent well enough and honestly nothing wrong with the animation at this point, though from the jump it starts to get a bit sloppy, the movements are a bit too fast compared to the first part and some of the joints are moved awkwardly. The start of the moonsault thing looks decent but then it just gets too fast, fidgety and over all pretty bad compared to the rest and reactions from both look rather rushed. Honestly you have the potential to be very good you just need to take your time when making these.

[Dan.]

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[picfedguy]

Works for me, this animation is a lot better, the quality was consistent the whole way though, reactions and impact were there and finished and though a bit iffy at the backflip part the spacing was good. Wasn't too stiff either. In terms of critism the Blue's arm movements at the start looked a bit weird and with the White's arm movements I felt that you should of had them go overhead towards the end. The legs of both sticks also looked a bit odd throughout too and the moonsault could of used a frame or two more and the spacing during this part though there should of been slowed down more towards the peak of the Blue's airtime. But overall a big improvment from the last animation, just keep taking your time and your future animations will just keep getting better!

[alexgg]

Good animation man, kinda fast but it keeps the speed and flow the entire way through.
I think Blue moves too fast, but movements in the legs and arms look good.
Same with White, I like the legs ducking in.
Could do with more reaction and more frames but still overall good job.

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