Sabin
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Jul 7, 2010 21:44:58 GMT -5
Post by Sabin on Jul 7, 2010 21:44:58 GMT -5
 Creds to dustins piv folder. I know the jump is unrealistic but its whatever |
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trøy
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Jul 7, 2010 21:52:24 GMT -5
Post by trøy on Jul 7, 2010 21:52:24 GMT -5
Okay so, the momentum didn't make sense with the move you were trying to do (450 splash). The way the arms are put, it seems like he is going to do a shooting star press. To get an accurate representation of the 450 splash, you should have put his arms over his head and bent his back backwards. This would have made it look more realistic. The air time was confusing, because as he went, he looked like he would overshoot his target, but instead just went back a bit and than straight down. Which looks a little wierd. The impact is nice and the reactions are slightly crappy. Just work on those. Hopefully that helped.
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Sabin
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Jul 7, 2010 23:03:57 GMT -5
Post by Sabin on Jul 7, 2010 23:03:57 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply troy. Ill post the remake with the different jump later because I have shool in the morning.
And lol, "slightly crappy" lmao.
I did say the jump was inrealistic, it was bent to me a swanton but idk what happened. Lmao
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Jul 8, 2010 13:23:15 GMT -5
Post by trøy on Jul 8, 2010 13:23:15 GMT -5
Thanks for the reply troy. Ill post the remake with the different jump later because I have shool in the morning. And lol, "slightly crappy" lmao. I did say the jump was inrealistic, it was bent to me a swanton but idk what happened. Lmao Ahahah, yeah, that happens to the best of us. Bumping for more replies,  |
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