UWS S1 EP3 'Retaliation'

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Match card:
Umaga vs 'Stuntman' Adam Coperland
Shelton Benjamin vs Taz
Nunizo / Chavo / Carlito vs Paul London / Shannon Moore /
Enjoy.

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Oh come on now, the promos weren't that bad.

[RatedWWEF]

So its time for UWS S1 episode 3 and have I been looking forward to this.

I must say you present your show really well and I respect that. Overall the show was great, loved it. I love the little gimmick you have going for Edge ' Stuntman Adam Copeland' awesome stuff. Nice to see Samoa Joe come to the aid of Adam, I can sense I great storyline between Umaga and Joe, BUT WAIT!!! Joe turning on Adam already, AND THE REF, great statement from Joe, love what you are doing with him. Loved the last pic hehehe.

Benjamin one on one with the superlex machine, Tazz? What is it with you? You always seem to put 110% behind each match, which is obviously a good thing. You have great ring awareness and you showed it off in this match. Hmmmm how did this match end? There was no pinfall, by just looking at this I would persume that it was 'first superstar to hit a superlex match'.

I have to say I like this team of Chavo, Carlito and Nunzio the MIC. MATTEL EVAN BOURNE (Or in your fed Matt Sydal) COMING THROUGH!!! Oh what innovation by Evan, loved that running kick DDT. Fantastic match *clap,clap,clap* It was as though I was watching the TNA X division in action but put on fast forward X20.

[N1SF]

Sorry I can not leave a full reply.

Awesome show, the poses were amazing! Everything flowed well, and storylines were nice. But, one thing that could be improved upon was the commentary. It would have helped to have more commentary during the end when Sydal and London fought, just to add to the moment. Also, is there any way you can change it so when I click next a whole new tab doesn't open?

Overall, nice show.

9/10

[unionjack]

I am so sorry for not replying sooner ;[ .


Y2G/Morrison segment
Intresting segment i hope morrison kicks y2g's ass lol

Adam Copeland Vrs Umaga
really good match
i really like your poses
i didn't like the fact joe came in and atacked edge and the ref but i can see this is building up to a storyline so you have to do stuff like that , i enjoyed the match .

Samoa Joe Segment
Intresting promo , i hope we see a Joe + Punk fued soon .

Shelton Benjamin Vrs Tazz
wow i really enjoyed this match ,
i think you could include a bit more comentary in the match , great match i really like the poses in this match .

Rvd + Tazz + Randy Orton Segment
Intresting segment , i can't wait for that match i hope Tazz Wins .

Dreamer + Chavo + Nunzio + Carlito Segment
Very cool segment , that was a clever idea with them getting points if they win the match .

Nunzio + Carlito + Chavo Vrs Paul London + Shannon Moore + ? .
What a great match that was , i was really pleased to see Evan Boure as the mystery partner , i marked out mad when Carlito Jumped off the top of the entrance , i was suprised to see Chavo + Co win the match as i thought London + Moore + Bourne would win , I thought a bit of comentary would of helped the fight at the end as i was confused on what was going on , Really good show i say this was your best show to date , the 6 man tag was brilliant great job mate i loved the show .

[deskjet]

Well, love the layout, but the show needs alot of work...poses, string edit, commentary, the entire arena is pretty bland. Nothing i saw really captured my interest storyline wise either. I'd say work on presentation alot more if you decide to come back. A solid effort and lots of work obviously, but the presentation just is lacking.

[The Champ is Here!]

plain looking arena

commentary could use work, it would be nice to see more

from a viewing standpoint, it would be nice if when i click next it wouldn't pop up in a new window

Joe kicking butt, love it

please edit string, it really takes away from your poses

poses are ok, fix them and your show will be really good

some more things in the back ground would be awesome

i like you made an original faction


good work overall!

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The poses in the Umaga match were out of this world. It's a shame that you didn't seem to make any effort to remove the string or shadows in it.

The other thing I really liked was JBL coming down to the ring. The camera work was great, because it looked like he was entering through an entrance, even though it was just the wall.

[brm]

First thing I noticed was how odd Jericho and Morrison were posed in the ring. It's like you were really rushing it, and they just look unnatural. Ok, first match. I like the idea of "stuntman" Edge. Reminds me of Death Proof / Stuntman Mike. Hmm, having him job is a pretty good idea, but I didn't like that he got not offense, or didn't stand up and be like "yeah, I can take it." In fact, it didn't seem there was any down time at all. Like, one move, then the next shot is him up for a powerbomb, then he's up for a throw. It would have been better if Edge was getting up from these moves, instead of just a really fast transition that didn't really flow. Nice to see Joe, but I wish you would use the DA Joe, or a custom. I really don't like seeing such vastly different figures mixed, but that's just a personal preference. Poses were good for the most part, but I wish you had edited. I really like that door accessory! I wish I had one. Taz vs. Shelton was really good. A very nice match length also. Wish you had edited the string. Also, the ref hardly moved, which was a bit distracting. The DDT pose in particular was really good. I also liked the big german suplex at the end. I enjoyed this match quite a bit. And here's Rob Van HOLY SHOOT! Please switch the head on RVD! Not only is that the worst head scan ever, but the ponytail is missing! I can't take him seriously as a champ looking like that! Please switch his head to anything else. I like this red faction. It's a red faction right? I like it. The last match, and what a match it was. You talk about high flying action. It all got a little bit out of control though, and was getting hard to follow. You really need to work on your transition pictures, as it seems when action is not going on, you just skip over that. I did like this match though, and the poses had good effort (with no editing) but this kind of match can't happen without string. Glad the red faction is still together, but I thought the Sydal / London fight at the end was a bit forced and I didn't think it worked very well. Overall, really good show. Glad to see you putting out shows. Keep it up.

[(=wwefan617=)]

The setup and/or lighting that you have now allows for brighter, clearer pics. I really enjoy the presentation now. That forum layout is awesome as well. I'm usually not a fan of posting on a forum, but with a layout like that, how could I say something negative lol?

I like the way that you take familiar characters and transform their personalities. For example, making Edge a stunt double is really cool and adds an interesting twist.

This fed has really grown on me as of late. You are doing a great job at building feuds. Your poses are the main attraction of your shows. You have some very interesting spots that you can pull off because of your awesome posing abilities.

Keep up the great work. I look forward to seeing more of your fed =)