SPW Uprising

[Ramos]

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Righty O, Iam not going to leave a huge comment just something simple and useful , Matches were decent but could have been a bit longer like the jacobs match but Ladder match and Sting and flair were great. You should work on your backstage segments i think they were lacking abit in quality for me just didnt fit well with me , Just a behind the stage abit plain. but that can be worked on. I could see some sting but it wasnt a major deal and poses were great for a first show very simple yet effective like the Figure Four.

Overall man i liked it the show was decent size and some great Superstars there. If you work on the things ive said above you should be great. Keep Fedding Bud

[Deleted]

Mmh, too bad the opener was so short.

Jeff and Edge? o_Ô

No commentary from here on?
Hm, here it is again.
I doubt Edge was doing that for free... wonder what he wants.

Weee, Jacibs becoming unstable again.

Shawn sounds as if he just wants to avoid the beating.
Get him, Bret!
Uhm... was that a match?

Edge takes part in the ladder match too, maybe he wants Jeff to help him here for repaying the debt.
ASD is a strange commentator, constantly threatening JR.
Hm, no Jeff around, but Anderson instead. Wonder why he did that.

Main Event was good too.

[unionjack]

yay


kurt v jimmy

jimmy is srewed lol

the german suplex pose is great
oh it's over so soon lol
poor jimmy
dam you angle lol

cool match
i can see this fued will be great

intresting segment
jeff's two timing lol

arrogance v hardys
lol pot head v pot head
the pose were good in this match.
i liked that you didn't use a bit of commentary in this match.
i was shocked when edge appeared and speared b.kendrick
cool about the hardy's winning the tag titles so awesome
great match .

cool jimmy promo
maybe he can get help from the age off the fall ;D

hbk v bret hart
intresting promo from hbk i wonder what bret will say hmmmmm?
bret's out ooooh
You're Sorry? That's it? Well I have one thing to say to you Shawn
****'s going down
oh god poor hbk lol
intresting into what is going to happen next with these two.

cool orton promo.
ladder match for the spw world title
the poses in these match were great
i loved the powerbomb off the ladder pose

ASD: Yes this is what Edge deserves for costing Arrogance the tag titles
JR: You really are a twisted individual
ASD: Wanna take this outside Ross
JR:....

lol

awesome pose of punk falling throw the ladder
wait a minute wtf is arn anderson doing here
noooooo he cost punk the title
butttt
morrison is the champ awesome
great match man i really enjoyed the match .

great match
the poses were great
i loved it
i liked the back and forth punching from both men
i really like the figure 4 leg lock and when sting was trying to roll out of it but flair stoped him
flair wins woooooooo


great show man i really enjoyed it
i can't wait for Night of Legends

see yah ;D

[atm.]

Yo~!

Remember me?

I'll edit....

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EDIT:
Hmmmm....Scottish pro Wrestling? Huh I remember APW, with me on it. Then we just dismantled...

Ok here we go...

Jimmy Jacobs? Already liken this!
Angle?
This match is a wierd combo.
German, some nice quality here.
Angle lock already?
what?
Jacobs didn't tap. I didn't like that bro. Too Short, but if it's a storyline than I understand.
Yep, a storyline.

Edge and Jeff?
What's up with that? Hmmmm....

Burke and Kendrick!
That Kendrick was my idea for you. If you remember.
Haha, Go Kendrick!
Nice DDT.
Burke in.
Matt in.
No more commentary? Boooo.
Twist of Fate!
Burke roll up!
Didnt get em.
Wait! Edge?
SPEAR! OMG WHAT A SPEAR!
Not Kendrick...
Damn it, I hate the Hardys.

Here's Jacobs.
You better get him jacobs.

Rematch? No Way!
HBK custom looks good.
Bret just layed him out.

Orton Promo.
Cool Can't wait.

Morrison, Punk, Edge, and Orton!
This is gonna be good.
Morrison may get it!
Nah.
Powerbomb from the top! Nice Punker!
OMG A PUNT!
shit, everyone almost had it.
Punker thru a table!
Wait!
Arn Anderson?
Yes Morrison!
I don't know I feel about Anderson and Morrison?
But it's your idea so good luck with it.

Sweet.
Flair and Sting better be classic.
Exchanging shots. Rather you woulda had a New Sting, not Classic.
Commentary back!
Ouch, Flair missing that clothesline into the metal. No real big moves yet.
Flair just reversed it, didn't get em.
On the top? Oh no.
Stinger Death Lock? Tap Flair!
Dirty.
Death Drop!
Wait Flair kicks out!
Another Lock!
Flair Reverses!
FIGURE FOUR!
He Tapped!
Wow, I loved that ending.

It was a decent show. You need to work on your poses and commentary. The last match, Sting and Flair. Was to short, and needed more pictures, a Major, Epic battle, Not a minor one. It was decent though. It needed more big spots too. Although the ladder match was good. Push Kendrick. Your quality is good though! Just work on it, good job for a return first show though.

-ATM

[revolution]

i'll edit.

I enjoyed this show alot. The matches were great, and I love the direction that your fed is going in. Good job on the presentation and everything else in general with the show. I love your Jimmy Jacobs custom as well. And the Kendrick attire. Plus your teams are great and storylines are going great. Fantastic job, and keep it up.

[Jacob]

I still get narky about feds hosted on forums, not about event, though.

I like Kendrick in the HBK attire, hope we see a feud between those two soon, would be awesome. Great main event, real classic match. I loved watching Flair and Sting back in the day, gave me some great memories.

Solid show, keep up the good work!

[Ramos]

First Round Shoutouts:

LMB:

Thanks for the positive comments and I agree I need to work on the backstage area. Thanks for the comments on the poses and thanks for taking the time to reply

Superior Man:

Thanks for the Reply, Bret/HBK was meant to be a match but Bret attacking HBK and injuring him meant the match could not go on.

Tomoblivion:

Thanks for the really positive reply man

ATM:

Edit when you do

Mattsta:

Edit when you do

Slash:

I would host the fed on freewebs if I could do HTML

A Kendrick/HBK feud would be cool. Hmmm might plan one

Hope you enjoyed it, I wanted that classic feel

[deskjet]

welcome back. Ok first of all, it just starts with a match and really no intro or anything...um not feelin that. HBK vs Brett...I guess I'm wondering why this match is happeneing...I guess i need to go and check out the old SPW shows. Again, i wish there was an intro as to what happened the week before...not just you but all the pic fedders. Solid match with the ladder match. Some ok poses. Nice swerve at the end with Anderson...this could be interesting. Great Legends match with Sting and Flair. nice poses throughout and main event quality.

Ok so, It's a ppv so it shoulda been built up more from the start. I usually dont like that there is commentary missing but it wasnt through out the show, so that was ok. Your pic quality and poses have greatly improved, but some poses still need attention...like guys leaning on the ropes instead of standing unless thats what you wanted them to do,lol. Also, i woulda like to see some more transitions...cut away to the announcers...or insert an advertisement. Some of the segments just seemed to run together. Overall, a good ppv, but other than longer matches, it really lacked that punch you usually get from a ppv, and again i think that was due to the light buildup and limited backstage segments. Glad your back though, and lookin forward to more:)

[easy1986]

Okay I saw this a couple of days agoo so its not exactly fresh in my head. It was honestly pleasantly decent. The matches were a good length with good back and fouth action. Poses lighting and all the technical stuff was very well executed. Its the little thing that more so bothered me. like the fact that their were no backstage segments or promo work. To me you just cant though guys in a ring and expect for us to care, something has to happen and you get that though to us though backstage stuff and promos, especially for a PPV. Work on that dude and I think you will be on your way

[swantonbomb619]

decent work

[redypiper]

well, one thing i felt right off the bat was that you put stars in big matches with absolutely no build up. that being said i did like the move sets you used in the matches.

i liked some of your poses alot, some were mentioned, i thought the flair flop was pretty funny.

your heavyweight championship match was my favorite part of the show. i must admit you have a cool champion, and i want to see where that goes. the involvement of double A was interesting to me as well.

the main event was decent but Sting tapped? are you nuts?
i'm just kidding but you might want to rethink those type of booking decisions.

overall you had a good start to your fed. you might want to improve a bit on your arena to make it less generic,
as i said you have a good world champion going for you and thats important, as he will be the main guy and is capable of carring it.

i'll check out your next show.

[Ramos]

Deskjet:

Thanks for the lengthy reply, Glad you liked the matches and The pic quality and poses, Transitions and segments are things I am trying to work on just now as I am trying to make this fed a lot more mainstream than my previous attempts, I have remodeled the arena and the backstage areas to try and give them more of a mainstream feel. Gonna be more buildup for Legends Weekend aswell, Thanks for the Reply.

Easy:

Glad you enjoyed the show and as said before I will be working on more backstage stuff and promos. Thanks for the reply

Swanton:

thanks so much for the in depth, detailed reply

Redy2Die:

Thanks for the good reply man, glad you enjoyed the matches, glad you liked the ladder match and the Main Event, Sting tapped out as I am trying to build up the Figure 4 as a powerful finisher.

[(=wwefan617=)]

ok man. this was actually pretty good, and i am glad that i have finally found the time to view and reply to this show.
I see that your pic quality has improved but it has an orange and at times, pinkish tint to it. I am not sure what setting you are using, but it looks better than you old setting.
Your story lines seem to be going pretty well. I cant wait to see where the hardy/edge thing is going. This should be really cool.
Your poses have improved as well, but you can still work on your camera angles and making sure that you are utilizing every part of the figure.
The main event was good, but i enjoyed the ladder match more. the sting custom is nice, but it is a tad sloppy in some parts, but it still looks good.
Overall this was a good show. keep up the good work and continue to improve. Good luck to you man =)


(=wwefan617=)

[Ramos]

ATM: Yeah I miss you man We had something special (come back to me )

Yeah I remember the Kendrick idea man and I thank you for it
I plan on making Jacobs try to get his revenge its not really a custom just a DA head and pads on the CS1 HBK. Morrison and Anderson will be explained in like 20 minutes btw Check the discussion thread. I am still trying to improve on my poses and commentary. I will push Kendrick (eventually ), thanks for your thoughts.

Mattsta:
Thanks for the awesome comments, glad you enjoyed the show, hope you continue to watch and thanks for the reply.

WWEfan:
Thanks for the comments man, I am still working on improving pic quality . Edge/Hardy is gonna my favourite storyline that I have running just now if it turns out how I want it. Thanks for the reply