ICW: episode two (link fixed)

[trøy]

TAKE OUT THE *

[kc]

[-LMB-]

Edit this after ive seen the show

Edit agian once the link is fixed

Ok, The first match was nice Angle vs Jeff some decent poses there but still NO string you have to use string at somepoint otherwise people arnt going to take your fed seriously.

Strong Vs Carlito
Nice match with a flip to the outside, Strongs backbreaker poses were decent.

Nitro/Morrison Vs Kendrick
Meh iam not liking the same start with a flip to the outside.
KEEP IT SIMPLE!
I think you over complicated this match alot so many strang poses with werid moves i didnt really get as there was no commentary Jhon winning wasnt to bad but he hardly put anything into it.

Theres still alot missing, you need more backstage segments that are meaningful because there is so much you can build up from when having them. There is still alot of room for improvement work on the poses and the set up isnt really that intresting for me.

work on these and you should be good.

[kc]

Mar 16, 2009 18:19:11 GMT -5 trøy said:

Mar 16, 2009 18:12:32 GMT -5 kc said:

What do you mean?

you edited your post, and got the link wrong again.

Indy*pendent is blocked here and comes up as the word spam.

[trøy]

Mar 16, 2009 18:21:52 GMT -5 kc said:

Mar 16, 2009 18:19:11 GMT -5 trøy said:

What do you mean?

you edited your post, and got the link wrong again.

Indy*pendent is blocked here and comes up as the word spam.

Yeah I know, it sucks. fixed.

[revolution]

Willll eddiiit..

I thought that this show seemed very rushed, and that thought was a big letdown in my mind. I mean, if your going to post a show, spend time on every detail on it. Including commentary. I think that the main event badly needed commentary, but seemed to be a good match on its own nonetheless. I couldn't really tell what happened in that match tbh. Did Morrison win? Anyways, I thought the whole storyline thing with Angle seems good. Pretty good show.

[(=wwefan617=)]

OK for some reason i just cant get into your shows as much. i think it is the fact that you lack a good set up and string poses. i mean you have been around long enough to know that you need a few string poses, or at least don't make it so obvious that you r using your hand. try to find angles that make it less noticeable. your camera/picture quality is good and your choice of angles is pretty good as well when you are doing "ground poses". I like where the story lines are headed, but once again presentation is a huge part of a show, and i just didn't see that. I hope to see you improve and grow as a pic fedder. Good luck man =)

[trøy]

Mar 16, 2009 22:12:02 GMT -5 deskjet said:

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Angle vs. Hardy? I don't think Hardy will pull any surprises here.
"Jeff Harvey". Shades of Mike Adamle? ;D
Hardy won??? I guess I was wrong.
Nice pics of the commentators setting up their table etc. again.

Commercial break? I PAY FOR THIS, NO BREAKUPS!!!


Did the commentary disappear?

Angle seems like a sore loser.

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Pretty solid show.

[Deep Shadows]

Awesome! I've been waiting for this. I hope the it's worth the wait!

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There goes Chase already bashing HR, lol. He must be a free agent or something.

HR: Ouch, he misses the legdrop.
CD: Legdrop? Isn't that a Hardy move?
Did you mean the legdrop or missing a move? Ha! (Don't bash me...I'm a Hardy fan!)

SICK GERMAN!

DAMN! Kurt just RAPED Jeff!

Cool...R. Strong!

OOOHHH!! Nice move by Carlito. That was cool!

Oh well...CC had the match but one critical mistake and gets dropped on the top turnbuckle.

Umm...random TB ad? If I was so stuffed right now I'd probably be hungry, lol.

NICE MATCH!

Nice Morisson "custom."

Damn...another plancha! I guess there's a lot of ICW stars with ADD!

DOUBLE STOOOO - NO!!! OHHH!!

So, that was the end? Did JM win? I'm lost.

Eh, I hate Kurt...well, not entirely but I'm sick of him just strictly from TNA.

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Good show, man. Your fed is very generic though...sorry to say. I'm just being honest.

You really need to think of ways to seperate yourself from all the other guys on the board.

[trøy]

Mar 17, 2009 18:29:53 GMT -5 @superiorman said:

Angle vs. Hardy? I don't think Hardy will pull any surprises here.
"Jeff Harvey". Shades of Mike Adamle? ;D
Hardy won??? I guess I was wrong.
Nice pics of the commentators setting up their table etc. again.

Commercial break? I PAY FOR THIS, NO BREAKUPS!!!


Did the commentary disappear?

Angle seems like a sore loser.

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Pretty solid show.

Nah, it was just the commentator said they would let the main event speak for itself, like in ROH. tbh, I was just lazy. Good excuse huh?

Thanks for the great replys from everyone. Especially Shadows.

[deskjet]

Ok, finally got around to this. Pretty ggod commentary through out. good opening match with Kurt and Hardy. Not liking the roderick strong character cuz when i first see him i see Masters. oh geez, another fed with Kendrick...im about tired of seein this guy. Pretty good match though...you have some decent poses. Shame for not adding commentary. Meh, this is an average show at best. Arena needs work, commentary needs to be done for all matches. Ring rope knots need to be hidden. You have decent poses, although i would suggest using some string. You have room to improve so keep it up.

[Jacob]

Mar 16, 2009 18:18:26 GMT -5 -LMB- said:

Ok, The first match was nice Angle vs Jeff some decent poses there but still NO string you have to use string at somepoint otherwise people arnt going to take your fed seriously.

I dissagree with that. You can still have a great fed without using string. It enhances a fed, but as long as you keep your matches grounded, it can be done.

Show was pretty good. Needs a little more depth to it, though. Try to get the segments to string together a little better.