Wayne McGurk Code Red RP

[veronicaaaahhhh]

Silence. Pure utter, unsolicited silence. Darkness bluntly surrounds the empty arena; Wayne McGurk stands alone in the center of it all, nonchelantly glancing at the thousands of empty seats. A cold spotlight soon glides above him. Wayne looks up; a burning cigarillo tucked between his fingers. The smoke travles and blankets itself around Wayne. He closes his eyes for a brief moment and the thought of a battle royale flashes before his very eyes: the challenge, the pain, the adrenaline. It's an easy challenge, far from Wayne's very reach for the time being. Wayne stalks around the arena in circles, he turns towards the left and starts counting. At present time he stands directly in the middle of the arena, he paces a dozen slow steps foward... This is where the ring will stand Friday night.

Wayne:
It was easy getting in here, but I can't stray myself away from the utter notion that I could possibly fail a simple task like a six-way come Code Red. I've been in well-over a hundred of these, but I just can't shake away that damn feeling... You know why? Because I hate these kind of matches. The Royal Rumble is without a doubt a sixty-minute piece of crap! I mean who the hell came up with such a stupid concept? "What do I do with all these useless wrestlers? I've got a packed card, but I'm obligated to bring them all in... Hmm... A tag team match is just too redundant. Wait, I've got it! I'll cram them all in the ring and let them fend it off for themselves!"

Damn it- is this what happened to wrestling? How has it become the circus- the spectacle that I see every monday night? Have we all become a bunch of goddamned puppets to a bunch of dimwitted fans that won't even remember us in a couple years with the ing exception of Cena? But that's okay, because as much as I hate the concept of the six-pack, I await the challenge. It's egnites me; it gets me off; it gets me over. I'll see you all on the twelveth!

Wayne ditches the cigarillo onto the cold, solid ground and burns it out with his boot. Wayne looks towards the left and motions towards the exit. Wayne pushes the door and steps into another world; the spotlight closing after him.

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O.C.-Could've been better!

[hero]

Not liking this too much, as the length is too short, the description needs more detail and the speech needs to explain more.

[Kyzer]

If you had made this longer and went more in depth, this would have been a whole lot better. I would like to see you stick around and improve. You have a lot of potential.

[veronicaaaahhhh]

Thanks a bunch!... I was cramming when I wrote that one, but I promise I'm not gonna hold back for me Scars and Stripes RP.

[CBT]

This was definatly a occurance of, "size matters."
This would work for a house show, and is semi-passable for code red, but when you need to put your best out. this comes off as if you held back or this is what to expect.
I think you can do better, and hope you do.

[veronicaaaahhhh]

Expect my S&S RP to be extra long!

[hero]

citizenmike said:

Expect my S&S RP to be extra long!

Any reason to top this 5-day old thread?

[immune360]

since this has already been topped I would like to reply to something citizenmike said and I quote "expect my S&S RP to be extra long!" I dont know if this is true or not in some areas but I was always told quality over quanity...now sure length helps but you dont have to write a 7 page rp to beat someone...just as long as yours is worded better and has a semi-good length...too long and they get old and boring...so just keep that in mind...I can't wait to read what you write though...good luck

Immune