What do you think of these lyrics?

[Lemmy]

War today now go away
People in the world wouldnt have to prey
For there homes and families and their safety
Because a Dictator Chose To Make An Enemy
Its all about seeds, oil and greed
What about the poor civilllians needs?
Own country flesh and blood
Rather make money than do some good
Like the beasts in Iraq, process their own smack
Sell to the west, behead the fund back
Soldiers taxes rotating axis
Smack heads funding the terror tactics
Al Quieda terror leader
Satan died he was the succeeder
No pardon in the American garden
For the crimes committed by Osama Bin Laden

[Lemmy]

Anyone? lol

[Jacob]

Is it supposed to be serious? I liked it up until the 'Own country flesh and blood' part.

[Lemmy]

Not totally serious, but the meaning still stands.

[Jacob]

sr92 said:

Not totally serious, but the meaning still stands.

Oh yeah, no doubt about that. I just don't like the use of the word 'smack' and the last couple of lines ruin the thing. But it get's a point across.

[poolsclosed]

Doesn't make much sense if I'm honest.

I can't tell if it's a typical clichéd anti war poem/song (war is bad, poor Iraqis baww baww etc), pro war or confused in between.

[Gene]

I agree with Jim.

And there's so many lyrics with these same old words, but if it's what you feel then do so, but I personally think it's quite poor.

[HoganBai]

safe bruv, proper bo'

not bad actually

[Himmy!]

Pretty cool man.

[Gene]

[Just GLC™]

kinda looks like something mike skinner would write/sing...

[0272]

Rhyming couplet overload.

[Lemmy]

mackalcole said:

Try

Read a book, Read a book, Read a mother ing book.
Read a book, Read a book, Read a mother ing book.
Read a book, Read a book, Read a mother ing book.
Read a book, Read a book, Read a mother ing book.

R-E-A-D-A-B-O-O-K
R-E-A-D-A-B-O-O-K
R-E-A-D-A-B-O-O-K
R-E-A-D-A-B-O-O-K

Not a sports page, not a magazine, but a book , a ing book
Not a sports page, not a magazine, but a book , a ing book
Not a sports page, not a magazine, but a book , a ing book
Not a sports page, not a magazine, but a book , a ing book

Read a book, Read a book, Read a mother ing book.
Read a book, Read a book, Read a mother ing book.
Read a book, Read a book, Read a mother ing book.
Read a book, Read a book, Read a mother ing book.

R-E-A-D-A-B-O-O-K
R-E-A-D-A-B-O-O-K
R-E-A-D-A-B-O-O-K
R-E-A-D-A-B-O-O-K

Raise yo kids, raise yo kids, raise yo god damn kids
Raise yo kids, raise yo kids, raise yo god damn kids
Raise yo kids, raise yo kids, raise yo god damn kids
Raise yo kids, raise yo kids, raise yo god damn kids

Your body needs water so drink that ****
Your body needs water so drink that ****
Your body needs water so drink that ****
Your body needs water so drink that ****

Buy some land, buy some land, spinning rims
Buy some land, buy some land, spinning rims
Buy some land, buy some land, spinning rims
Buy some land, buy some land, spinning rims

BRUSH YO TEETH BRUSH YO TEETH BRUSH YO GOD DAMN TEETH
BRUSH YO TEETH BRUSH YO TEETH BRUSH YO GOD DAMN TEETH
BRUSH YO TEETH BRUSH YO TEETH BRUSH YO GOD DAMN TEETH
BRUSH YO TEETH BRUSH YO TEETH BRUSH YO GOD DAMN TEETH

WEAR DEODORANT
WEAR DEODORANT
WEAR DEODORANT
WEAR DEODORANT
WEAR DEODORANT
WEAR DEODORANT

and so on ;[

Yeah.... you have problems.


thanks for the feedback though, just thought it would get the messege across; its not even mine. I just posted it to see what you thought, because the music it's from, non of you will listen to, i can practically guarentee that.

[3Ð]

To be honest I hate them

[Lemmy]

At what point did i say they where awesome?

and only 'faggy gays' make up songs about reading a book and wearing deodorant.

oh and btw, when i said you had problems, it was a bit of banter. You should be able to take it.

[S]

mackalcole said:

You have problems making up lyrics.

only faggy gays make up their own song lyrics thinking they're awesome.

WELL EH EH Son.

Who's you favourite band... i'm guessing they are probably faggy gays who write lyrics

[Lemmy]

Well said taker, oh and in february i'm getting that tattoo you designed for me, i'll stick a pic up when i get it done.

[S]

sr92 said:

Well said taker, oh and in february i'm getting that tattoo you designed for me, i'll stick a pic up when i get it done.

The NUF logo one ?

[nibz]

Not bad at all really, though the message is pretty much a given.
Comment on my 'faggy gay' lyrics.

[Lemmy]

thefishcalledbob said:

sr92 said:

Well said taker, oh and in february i'm getting that tattoo you designed for me, i'll stick a pic up when i get it done.

The NUF logo one ?

NUFC lol

but yeah i know the one you mean.