BWR UNBREAKABLE Episode #4

[deskjet]

BWR UNBREAKABLE Episode #4 swings into gear off the heels of a very active month of BWR action!

Tonite,  BWR Commissioner Paul Heyman addresses the latest developments from the cryptic Underland audio messages and a new number one contender for the BWR United States Championship will be determined.  All that and more...NEXT:

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Yes! Been looking forward to this!

-Subtle, but nice tribute to Dusty.
-Loser gets Fired? If that's not an incentive to win, then I don't know what it is!
-Dang! Why'd he do this match?! Bye JTG
-Those portraits of Heyman and Williams are great. Reminds me of Eric Bischoff's office from back in the day.
-Interesting development! Looking forward to the Funhouse Match, whatever that may be...
-Let's go Rose!
-Ha ha ha! Look at him just laying up there! Zero F's given!
-Is that a GWA sign in the crowd? If so, thanks for the nod!
-Yeah! It is a GWA sign! Tell that fan he can have free tickets to the premiere episode of Anarchy!
-No Zack! Please! I like both of you, don't make me take sides!
-Come on Zack! Stop it!
-NO! Rose got screwed! It's a conspiracy, I tells ya!
-WOAH! I'm not American, but man, you don't burn Old Glory!
-TOMMY DREAMER?!
-Brilliant use of the Shatter and Unbreakable names!

INCREDIBLE show deskjet! Well done!

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Hang tight buddy will get your review out soon

[Robert69]

ZAYN!!!

Bye JTG

I dig the Alex Riley use in BWR.

I like Oscuro so SWEET!

...DONT BURN THE FLAG!!!...

YEAH DREAMER!

Good time as always my man.

[(=wwefan617=)]

deskjet, I truly feel that you can do no wrong in my eyes. I don't tell you enough how much I admire your work and how much I have learned from you over the years in terms of pic fedding.

Your presentation is on point and you are one of the most creative minds that we have here today. I mean that. And this show and this fed is proof of that. You have so many familiar faces, but you make them your own with the way that you develop their characters.

Overall, I loved this show and look forward to viewing and reviewing the latest one that you just put out. That Fun House match is going to be amazing!

Thanks again for being my mentor and putting forth amazing work!... Also I want a Fandango push!

[attitudesback]

Apologies for taking so long to review this!! The show kicks off with the Zayn promo, which was nice. It makes it obvious he's the good guy face and the "happy to be here" guy. Having the US title tie in with the festivities of Freedomania etc. is a nice touch. Ooh, JTG vs. Fandango in a loser gets fired match! I like the sound of this one. Entrances were absent, something I don't really like personally because I'm used to entrances not happening for one of two reasons; A that the competitors are Divas, or B the superstar is a jobber. You have a nice entrance stage. Use it man! I noticed a couple of spelling errors but it was no big deal, I *hate* with a passion doing commentary for Nitro so it didn't bother me too much. One thing I also noticed, you've got a guy holding a camera at the side of the ring and he could actually be seen in a shot. This isn't something done often but I really like it. Again, another nice touch. Some nice moves and reversals, maybe one too many as it made JTG look clumsy and straight jobber material. Fandango stealing the match after a missed clothesline being turned into a crucifix pin was a good ending for sure, I definitely agreed with it. "Maybe JTG can write a book now?!" Great commentary! The backstage segment was sweet. Having Heyman hold the paper made him look super busy, dealing with paperwork etc. The 'Underland' audio thing is such a cool idea. It really helps get over Xavier as a genuine crazed nut, whilst we're used to seeing "NEW DAY ROCKZ!" Another match with no entrances Especially for a No.1 contenders match? Odd choice, personally. Adam Rose laying on the turnbuckle a la Stone Cold in the early 2000's Royal Rumble is a perfect heel tactic. Using his brain to let those two kill each other and he swoops in for the win. Really nice match though, some of the aerial shots were great. It captured the style of the men perfectly, Adam Rose getting attacked mid match by Ryder mid match was believable and effective in potentially setting up a feud between the men. Oh ! That ending! Damn. I'm not even bothered about 2 matches in the show. What an ending that was! Zayn looking like Cena with the "I love America! I am the US Champion!" stuff but then to have Tommy Dreamer come out?! And those effects with the fire and spotlights? Dude, I seriously might use Wix for my shows now, one for audio and two for the effects like you're using. Damn, this was a great show. Definitely my favourite so far from the Unbreakable brand. Only criticism going forward is entrances and maybe add another match. Awesome, awesome work!

[deskjet]

Thanks everyone for the replies and future replies:). Always appreciated!

[T]

-Nice Zayn promo to start things
-Fandango/JTG was a decent back and forth opener. Glad Fandango keeps his job
-Loving that backstage area
-The series of matches is a cool idea, although I'd have liked them to have been announced one by one, rather than the others being announced to take place only if the others fail to win
-Nice mix of wrestlers in the Triple Threat. Love that Oscuro Dragon character
-Some really good spots, poses and camera angles
-Like that Dragon will face Zayn. I expect that to just be a good wrestling match with lots of respect rather than a heel/face thing
-Really good promo from Drew
-That whole segment was really done and loved Dreamer coming in must have got fed up with Williams and all of his disrespect!

Great end to the show. Think we're seeing signs that Unbreakable is really starting to get going with some big storylines. Top work.

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Alright sorry for the delay buddy I'm here to give ya review.

I love your production with fireworks. So pretty lol. I really like the usage of Sami Zayne as that stand up do it right kind of baby face. Really cool. Nice opener and takedown Fandango did to JTG. Your poses have gotten much better. Some good exchanges and locks up from these two you got going. Great roll up from Fandango poor JTG. Xavier Woods is such cool character in your fed I hope this goes far. Riley just can't get break man. The triple threat Is great and as T said the character in it are such great combo of guys. And can't wait to see Dragon and Zayne go at it. Great ending and it told a story to end the show well thought out and well executed.

Overall
I really enjoyed this show and your fed. My only gripes are few stiff poses here and there no big deal really. And the way it's broadcasted through Wix the way T does it is perfect because sometimes Wix can be laggy on me but no problem. Solid show

[The Champ is Here!]

bummer jtg got fired, i like him... but i woulda been bummed if fandango got fired too

nice stipulation for the underland matches, and oh my word, Brawler was funny

great main event, felt very big, honestly reminded me of ROH, and thats a good complement as they are my favorite show

MOTHERING TOMMY DREAMER!!!!!!!!!!!! I marked out like i was watching a real show, fantastic!!!

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I'll be giving this a watch after work, reserving me a spot! I can't wait to catch up with some BWR!!!